Chapter 1
Chapter 2 of 2
Crimson BlueAfter the events in Half Blood Prince, life moves on, and our heroes attempt to help the order in any way they can. Little do they know that once the war is over the real adventure is going to start. A magical backlash upon the demise of the Dark Lord causes his one-time followers the chance at a new life.
ReviewedWeb of Time Respun
Disclaimer: We own nothing. Harry Potter belongs to JKR and various other places including Warner Brothers and others. The idea of the Death Eaters reverting back was borrowed with permission from Dodge-This on ff.net (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1926446/1/). See A/N at the end for more.
Chapter 1
He was Draco Malfoy, the amazing bouncing ... No, no, no, he thought with a glare. He swore that if he heard that old crack one more time, Saint Potter would soon find that Draco would succeed in doing what the Dark Lord had failed at.
He couldn't help that he was worried about his godfather and his parents. Gods, his godfather was his age! And shit, they were his age too- his mother maybe even younger! It was just damn unnerving.
Snickers came from the two boys every time he moved from the end of the infirmary that held all of the newly-young Death Eaters to the group of Order members and professors at the other.
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On the Order side of the ward, everyone was standing around a version of Severus Snape that most of them hadn't seen in almost twenty years. Minerva kept looking at him and shaking her head in disbelief while Molly patted her hand, telling her that 'it would be alright.' Severus, on the other hand, was getting more and more confused, looking at his one-time teachers standing over him. Only Madam Pomfrey and a girl, who looked to be about his own age, actually seemed to be concerned about his actual person. The young woman leaned over to whisper in his ear, "Don't worry. It will be alright soon."
Finally, Severus found his voice, deciding that he needed answers more than anything else. Clearing his throat, he spoke, "Professor McGonagall? Has there been an accident or something? Could someone please tell me what is going on?"
It was the slightest edge of fear in his voice that caused Minerva to break down in tears. For weeks after the death of Albus, she had harboured a deep seated hatred for the former Potions master, even after they had seen Dumbledore's Pensieve, and all charges had been secretly dropped against him. She had still wanted the man to pay for his crime.
Seeing his innocent, unlined face and dark eyes filled with uncertainty now, however, made the anger and hatred melt away. She sat heavily on his bed and pulled him into a hug. "It will all be okay, Severus, once we figure out what exactly has happened. When we know, we will do our best to explain it to you."
He sat there awkwardly as the older woman--just when did she get so old, he wondered--hugged him. He was saved from having to decide whether or not to pull away when the kindly red-haired woman took the professor's arm and pulled her off to one side. His brow furrowed slightly--that couldn't be Molly Weasley, nee Prewett, could it? He could swear that it was, but much more matronly in shape than the last time he had run into her in Diagon Alley.
The young witch from earlier took McGonagall's place next to him, though at a more proper distance than his professor. "My name is Hermione Granger," she told him softly. "I'm going to be Head Girl here at Hogwarts this next year. There are a few things I'd like to ask you, if that is alright?"
Severus was reluctantly impressed by her poise and the quiet authority she exuded. Because of that, he decided that despite the company she seemed to keep--the boy over against the far wall looked like the spitting image of his nemesis, James Potter, though his keen eyes could tell that he wasn't actually James--he would cooperate with her. He nodded sharply, trying to ignore the other people crowded into the room.
He was continuously distracted by the blond boy that was pacing nearby. Apparently, it bothered Hermione, too. She shot a piercing glare at the Potter look-alike and the redhead who bore a surprising semblance to the eldest Weasley boy, and called to the blond who had brought him to these people, "Draco, come here. You're not helping anyone by pacing like that."
Severus observed the wariness in Draco's manner as he approached--apparently he knew this witch. He took a seat, lips compressed into a thin line as if biting back a retort.
"Alright now. Prof ... Severus, may I call you Severus?" He nodded, wondering at her slip. "How old are you? What is the last thing you remember before you came here with Draco?"
Severus had a look of pure concentration on his face as he tried to think back to what had happened before he had found himself with the blond boy named Draco, who looked disturbingly like Lucius. In his mind, he retraced his last moves.
It had been a Friday. His last class had been Herbology. Not his favourite, but it was something that he knew he needed in order to be a great Potions master. It was the class itself that bored him, not the topic. He could, and did, happily spend many nights just reading up on the properties of the various plants indigenous to Scotland.
As the class finally ended, he had found himself cleaning up his workspace alone. His partner had fled the minute the bells had chimed, signaling the end of the day. It didn't bother him though, because he had a lot on his mind and needed the time to ponder it all. Last weekend, Lucius had caught him in Hogsmeade and had asked him once again to join this cause that would supposedly bring order to the wizarding world. He had yet to make a decision about what would be right for him when he had heard a familiar cackling laugh.
Looking up, he saw Peter Pettigrew standing there, swinging Severus' book bag on his fingers.
"Oooh, let's see what we have here," Peter sneered before opening it up and letting everything inside fall onto the dirt floor.
"Give me that," Severus snarled and lunged at the hated Marauder.
Peter jumped out of the way, letting the satchel fall to the ground. Severus debated between going after Peter or picking up his fallen things. He settled on the latter--the little rat wasn't worth the trouble. While he was on his knees, he could hear Peter taunting him from the doorway, well out of reach. "Poor Snivellus can't take proper care of his things."
Still seething, Severus stuffed his things back into his bag, stalking past Peter on the way out. The plump idiot jumped out of the way, obviously not willing to back up his taunts physically. Now, his mind was made up; he would meet up with Lucius, tonight, in Hogsmeade, and join his cause and finally get some justice and freedom.
Back on the bed Severus looked at the girl, no, Hermione, and answered her questions.
"I am 18 years old, and the last thing I remember is pushing Peter Pettigrew out of my way before going to meet with Lucius in Hogsmeade to talk to him more about his cause."
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Hermione nodded and sighed. She had suspected as much. The men--and the few women--had been taken back to the time before they had received the Mark. Mentally and physically de-evolved, they had no memory of the previous twenty or so years. The memory around the point of the Mark might be a bit fuzzy, she hypothesized, but no charm or spell or hex that strong could be put in place and not have some hazy effect on the recipients.
Peter actually confronting Prof--Severus, she firmly corrected herself mentally. Peter actually confronting Severus was odd, unless he'd been under orders to ... and the Peter currently in the ward was only sixteen or so, she would swear to it. Could he have been ordered to do it? That might be something to ponder later when she had time. The implications were great if he had indeed been that young.
She knew that Severus watched her as she chewed at her lower lip, a habit she had when she was deep in thought. He should recognize the symptoms, being a rather smart man--boy?--given to deep thinking as well. Draco fidgeted on his other side but didn't dare interrupt the silence.
"I thought something similar," she finally said, realizing belatedly that she was leaving Severus just about as confused as before. "I'm sorry, Prof ... Severus. I know you're confused and that I'm not helping things much. Things are in a bit of an upheaval right now, but everything will even out soon."
She reached over and squeezed his hand briefly, reassuringly, before she even realized what she was doing. She blushed slightly when she did realize it, but didn't jerk away. This was so weird; her professor was her age, and everything was in turmoil, and she was so tired from the battle and ... the list went on and on.
She heard muted whispering from the wall where Harry and Ron were standing. Her lips tightened slightly, and she stood up. "I'll be back in a bit. Draco, stay over here, please. I know where you stand, but you know Harry and Ron .... We're all very tired, and I can't vouch that they'll even try to keep their tempers. Severus, try to get some rest. Everything will be alright."
With that, she smiled slightly and left them, hoping that her two 'brothers' weren't going to make her life that much harder right now.
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On the other end of the ward, behind a section of bespelled curtains, was a group of very displeased individuals. The confusion they all felt was feeding everyone else, and tempers were running high. There had already been a few instances of accidental magic since their wands had been taken when they had suddenly found themselves in the middle of some field hours and hours ago.
Everyone was trying to keep their distance from Bellatrix, who had always been a little strange and highly excitable. She tended to mutter to herself a lot, and it was obvious that she and at least two other personas that only she could hear were all upset. The Blacks were, unfortunately, notoriously dangerous when upset.
Narcissa was on the far side from her sister. The two were close in spurts only, and Cissy never liked to be near Bella when she had that particular gleam in her eye. Rodolphus lounged near her, seemingly unperturbed, and Lucius was prowling the borders of their makeshift prison. There were many others, here and there. Everyone knew everyone somehow, whether through their families--many were related in some way--or through the small meetings they'd gone to lately, meeting with that charismatic Riddle man.
They had noticed something odd, though. They were all approximately the same age, but they weren't supposed to be. Bella was the eldest, but Narcissa was currently somewhere in the proximity of the same age. That was the most obvious change. They had also talked among themselves. Everyone seemed to have differing opinions of what today's date was. It didn't differ by only days, but by years, and that scared people. And scared Slytherins--though there were several Ravenclaws, two Hufflepuffs and a Gryffindor cringing in a corner--were not a lot to be messed with.
The noise in the makeshift prison was growing by the minute, as the group of sixteen to eighteen year olds were starting to get antsy. Cissy kept looking over at Bella nervously, afraid that her sister was going to have one of her spells again. She wished her parents were more forceful about Bella getting proper medical care, but for some reason they didn't seem to care that their oldest daughter might be mentally ill.
Cissy could remember conversations with Andromeda about how easy it would be for Bella to be well, if they would only take her to a Healer. If only the girl could be forced to take her medicines afterwards. Both girls had known that their father, who was disappointed in only having daughters, would let Bella go mad before actually taking care of her. It was her punishment for not being a boy.
After a scuffle broke out between the two Ravenclaws, Lucius stopped his aggravated pacing and cleared his throat. While they had all been disarmed, he still held some sort of leadership position in the group.
"Alright, all of you settle down. Now, we don't know what is going on right now, but I am sure that things are being sorted out. Here is what we need to do."
He marched in front of the others, surveying them like a general would his troops.
"Obviously something horribly magical has happened, throwing us into the future, all around the same age. Everyone out there seems to want to help us, and they are very interested in Severus, so I am guessing he has been injured. We just need to bide our time and pay attention so that we can use this to our advantage."
A sneer appeared on his almost elfin features, changing him from handsome to almost frightening. While he seemed very confident about what was going on, inside he was probably the most worried. Waking up on what was left of a battlefield, and now the blond boy that looked eerily like him had left him extremely disconcerted. He would say he was a Malfoy, but that was just not possible.
Lucius' words got unanimous agreement--after all, it was the basic Slytherin philosophy and the majority was Slytherin here. However, the crowd was still riled up, if not even more so than before his speech.
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Narcissa finally decided that something had to be done about her sister before the darker girl totally lost it. Bella had a wild look in her eyes and the excited, tense atmosphere was only feeding the already disturbed young woman. Andromeda was usually the one to care for her, but she wasn't here, and Cissy was. She slipped past the others and cautiously put an arm about her older--was she even older anymore? This is definitely a weird situation! she thought--sister and led her off to one side.
If Bella was going to go into one of her fits, Cissy would rather have her away from the main group to at least minimize injuries. Bella could be quite violent when the voices got too loud.
She was surprised to feel her sister go still under her hand all of a sudden, the faint trembling stopping, as well as the muttering. Cissy looked up to see what might have caused the reaction, and she found herself looking up, way up.
The man who had just pushed aside the curtain was taller than Lucius and her cousin Sirius. Cissy and her sister weren't short, though they were delicately built and had an aura of vulnerability about them that made them seem smaller than they were, and this man dwarfed them, or so it felt. He was black, and admittedly rather attractive in a different sort of way, what with that gold earring in one ear. He couldn't be more than thirty, she thought, though he looked younger.
She looked at Bellatrix to gauge the exact nature of her reaction. Her sister's nearly black eyes were a little wide, and she seemed to have been brought back to her senses somewhat.
When the man spoke, his voice was deep and slow, but full of authority. "My name is Kingsley Shacklebolt. I'm with the Ministry of Magic, and I'm here as part of the effort to figure out precisely what happened to all of you. I will need to take your statements, individually."
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Kingsley looked over at the two Black sisters. He could see that Bella was not acting within normal limits: Her eyes were glazed over, she rocked slightly, and he had thought he had heard muttering just before he entered. She never took her eyes off of him, however. Pointing at the two girls, he gestured them over.
"Ok, you two, we'll start with you. Come with me." Moving next to the barrier, he waited so that the girls could pass, and he could close it again. Any other time, Kingsley might have taken a moment to admire the view, but this was official Ministry business that he really wanted to get to the bottom of.
Escorting them into Madam Pomfrey's office, he indicated that both young women should sit, and he took a seat opposite them on the desk.
"So, ladies, what is that last thing that you remember?" he asked, trying to keep it casual so that they would be relaxed and truthful. Well, as truthful as Slytherins ever were.
Cissy looked nervously at Bella, who was thankfully starting to calm down. She thought it odd that her sister seemed so fascinated with this man--she still hadn't taken her eyes off him--but was thankful for the calming influence.
"Umm, well, I remember having a fight with my mother. She was telling me that I was going to have to leave school to be married. I didn't want to get married, because Lucius is so much older than I am, and I know that he can be cruel." She looked up at Kingsley with her piercing blue eyes. "Father said it was a good match though and that it would help him in the Ministry, and besides, I am only a girl, and I don't need an education if I have a good husband."
Looking away, her voice got very high and light. "Do I still have to marry him? I know I did well on my OWLs, and I would really like to finish school."
If it were possible, Kingsley's face would have gotten darker, but he kept his anger out of his voice. When he finally spoke his tone was deep and soft. "No, I don't think you will have to marry anyone now, and I am sure that you will be able to finish school."
Kingsley had met Narcissa Malfoy once at a Ministry function, and it was hard to put the haughty woman from then into this scared girl now. Merlin, how are we going to deal with all of this?
He turned his kind and steady gaze to Bellatrix, silently urging her to tell her story. The dark eyes seemed to ground her, and she shook her head, finally finding herself free of the wild anxiety that had been plaguing her since she had found herself ... wherever it was they had been. The voices were still there, whispering softly, but she found it easier to ignore them when she locked gazes with this man.
"I was at home. Mum was hovering over me, making sure my wedding robes were perfect. Father had already come and gone, telling me that I better not screw this up--he'd had to look long and hard to find a man willing to marry someone with my reputation." The last word came out bitterly.
"It was spring break, but I knew I wouldn't be going back to school. The wedding would take care of that. I was thinking of how I should be grateful and that at least it was Roddy I was marrying and not his bastard of a brother, but I still planned on causing a fuss. I didn't want to marry, not either of them. I'd rather have married my cousin Sirius. I don't remember much else. The last clear thing I remember is Father taking my hand to lead me downstairs, but we went into some room to meet a well-wisher first. That's it."
Her gaze was almost disconcerting, Kingsley thought, but at least it was almost entirely devoid of the madness of before. However, he was incensed by the man who dared call himself these two girls' father. He had obviously had the Mark slapped on his eldest in an effort to make her controllable for her wedding, and his youngest had been shanghaied into it as well. It was probably the Mark that had unhinged Bellatrix.
"Am I married to him now?" she asked, tilting her head curiously.
He shook his head slowly. "No, I don't believe so, my dear," he said kindly. Not if she had taken the Mark before her marriage, and it didn't seem as if she had.
"And how old are each of you?" he asked.
"Sixteen," Cissy said promptly.
"Eighteen," Bella answered after glancing at her sister. There was supposed to be a much bigger age gap than that between them. Bella was the eldest, four years older than Cissy and two years older than Andy. That thought led to the wary question of, "Where is our other sister? Where is Andy?"
Breaking the eye contact, Kingsley sighed, wondering how the hell he was going to answer that question. Giving Bella a kind look, he stood up from the desk and headed to the door, telling them that he would be right back. He knew that the Order needed to be apprised of this information so they could decide what to do with these children--young adults.
The Order had left Snape's side and was standing outside in the hall, discussing the most recent events quietly. Clearing his throat, Kingsley got everyone's attention.
"Well, people, we seem to have a problem. During my interview with the Black sisters--" Hearing a murmur from someone, he nodded. "Yes, I said the Black sisters. These girls have no memories of their time as Death Eaters, and I don't even think they took the Mark willingly. The last thing they remember is being told they were getting married against their will in order to improve their father's standing in the Ministry."
Kingsley gave an involuntary shudder at the thought of how Mr. Black had basically sold his daughters into slavery. With a sigh, he ran a hand over his bald head. "I don't think we can charge them with the crime of being a Death Eater. They have reverted back to who they were before they took the Mark. They don't even seem to realize that they are the wrong age. Oh, and the girls want to see their sister. How are we going to explain that Andromeda is almost forty and that their niece Tonks is older than they are?"
He looked around the group, hoping that one of them would be able to answer. He certainly didn't want to be the one who had to explain things or make a ruling on what to do with them.
It was Minerva--a much calmer Minerva than before--that broke the almost awkward silence that had settled in the wake of his request.
"Well, then, we will just have to argue on their behalf at the Ministry," she said in her Scottish brogue.
It was, surprisingly, Harry that had a problem with it more than anyone. "Argue ... on their behalf?!" he sputtered. "No punishment at all? What about what they did? All the people they hurt?"
"Are you arguing for the people, Harry, or because you are angry?" Kingsley cut in, his voice gentle but firm. "Is this because of what happened to your godfather? Because in all honesty, I don't think the Bellatrix sitting in Madam Pomfrey's office is capable of doing something like that now. She is disturbed and needs the proper care. I think it is highly likely that taking the Mark broke her already fragile mind all of those years ago, and her years spent in Azkaban exacerbated it even more.
"Those people in there," he gestured at the infirmary, "are not the people you've been fighting against. Narcissa Black is a scared girl. Bellatrix needs medical attention. Lucius needs to be brought down to earth, and they all need guidance, but they're not killers--not yet. Would you condemn them for things they cannot bring themselves to do now?"
His quiet words and logical argument quieted the Boy-Who-Lived, though it was obvious much resentment still seethed under the surface.
"Harry, think of it this way," Hermione spoke up quietly, laying a calming hand on her friend's arm. "This is the chance to change their lives for the better. To give them the chance like you had, and Riddle never did--a chance to find friendship and give them enough reasons to be good people. To change their philosophies before it's too late."
Harry calmed further, though those that knew him well would know it wasn't over yet. "So what now?" the young man asked.
"Now you rest," Kingsley said. "I will interview the rest of the ... returnees and report to the Wizengamot. They will let us know when the court appointment is, and we will have our arguments marshaled by then."
A/N: Thank you to Somigliana and GinnyW for the beta-ing jobs! Any mistakes left are ours. Thank you to Triskellion for poking for plot holes. Sorry for any delay in chapters- it is my (Gelsey's) fault. School is going, and I actually have classes to do, lol. Hope you enjoy, and please review, we love it!
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13 Reviews | 5.08/10 Average
wow this idea in awesome. one of the greatest ive seen in a while. unfortunately it has been abadoned for years. i wish you will eventually return. however i will go to the fic that inspired you.
whoa what a totall interesting idea. i wonder what will now happen to all the death eaters and how they will be treated and how their mentalities would be.
Interesting beginning chapters.
LMAO! I love the magical backlash aspect. Taking them all back to their ages when they took the mark? Nice touch.
THis story is really interesting! I've seen nothing like it on this site, but I was just wondering if you very going to update this story?
This is a very interesting idea. Please tell me you intend to continue updates?
I just have to say how much i've enjoyed this so far. It's great. I also like the idea of the mark making them turn back to their earlier ages. I'm glad the author let you borrow the concept. Looking forward to more.
Response from Crimson Blue (Author of Web of Time Respun)
Thank you so much for your encouragement. Originally we had asked the original author if we could adopt her story as she hadn't posted to it in over a year. She didn't want that but allowed us to borrow this aspect and we are running with it. Hopefully fresh chapter in the next couple of days
Not as smoothly written as the first chapter but still tantalizing!
This is a brilliant and snappy beginning! Written with devastating alacrity. Quite perfect. Pity u have not the stamina of less perfect writers to actually finish the story.
Excellent story.....................more please.
Very intriguing
Response from Crimson Blue (Author of Web of Time Respun)
I am glad you found it interesting more to come :)
This is such an interesting story.
Response from Crimson Blue (Author of Web of Time Respun)
I am glad you are enjoying it. More to come
So... Bella seems to have eyes for Kingsley. Very interesting! I just can't wait to see what happens next. I hope someone ends up offing Wormtail... blah! Great tale.
Response from Crimson Blue (Author of Web of Time Respun)
I agree I think that Wormtail needs a proper send off. *rubs hands manically* Thanks for the review. I am finding I really like Bella