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Leap of Faith
Hanagasume24 Reviews | 5.42/10 (24 Ratings, 0 Likes, 22 Favorites )
After the war, everything is different. The Gryffindor Trio is no longer, and Severus Snape is left ashamed and alone with the knowledge that the woman he loves just might know his secret.
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Hanagasume
Member Since 2008 | 31 Stories | Favorited by 246 | 119 Reviews Written | 1,704 Review Responses
I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion.
I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR.
I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.
SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!
Reviews for Leap of Faith
I thought this was an okay story- so much of it is AU that it bothers my canon-loving mind (I'm not sure how many years ago this was written, but that probably accounts for must of it; we simply didn't know what his parents names are, or that he grew up a poor boy, not rich like the Malfoys), but if I ignore those little things then I liked it overall.
Lovely ending. It's always nice to see Severus finally happy after all these years.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Thanks so much! I am glad you found it enjoyable! *hugs*
Christmas with Severus' parents was delightful, and I liked Theo and Eileen right away. And just as importantly they obviously liked Hermione. Severus' choice to take Hermione to the cozy cabin on the edge so the Snape Estate on New Years was a good one. I liked the way the told her about finding the letter from his childhood friend and how he had cried when she died.His proposal to Hermione was so sweet, and I was just over the moon. They care for each other so much, and together they will be fabulous. Two Potions Masters married to each other... one a university potions department head and the other a successful business woman. It don't get no better 'n this. LOL!Oh, my goodness. I think Dean Grey may have been harboring hope for something more with Severus than his being the Head of the Potions Department. And even though he made it clear that he was engaged to be married, she seemed to recover well and even had the good graces to appear slightly embarrassed.Severus and Hermione will soon be married. Ya-Hoo! Thank you for this lovely story of their coming to love one another.Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Thank you for the review as usual, Beth. I really appreciate how much effort you put into making them so individual to the chapter. I am pleased you liked the Snape's Senior as well as the engagement and the intriguing Dean Grey. It's pure fluff, but I am glad you followed and enjoyed it all the same. Thanks again!
I wonder what the Dean was up to. Did she fancy Severus? :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Lol there was every chance that she did fancy him. After all, who could resist such a man :p Thanks!
She can just sit and remember what he looks like under his robes when he is being indifferent to her in class. And smile smugly. ;)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Smugly indeed. Lol.
I wonder why she didn't suspect before with his Potions skills. :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
I imagine she might have thought there were other equally talented Potioneers in the Wizarding World. Lol. Thanks!
Lovely little fic. Thanks for sharing.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Thanks for reviewing :) Glad you enjoyed it.
This is a very good chapter. I like how you stick to the story's summary. I thought this was very well written, and I look forward to reading more. I hope she's not too terribly upset with Severus. I'm sure he had his reasons for not telling her he was her supplier sooner than this. But I'm glad he decided to reveal himself to her prior to their meeting.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Thank you :) I am glad you enjoyed and hope you stick with us for the next two parts of the story. Happy reading!
Great Start I look forward to seeing how she will react in talking to hm again. I'm surprised he rolled over on that so soon. I thought he'd try to meet her with a glamour or somthing.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Thank you :) I suppose he just felt like it was time to stop being so deceptive for once in his life.
What a great story, brandy! It's so awful for Severus to think that Hermione would not be interested in him in the same way he cares for her. And I'm sure he still blames himself for her having been taken prisoner by the late Dark Lord, but I he can get over that notion.Now, will Hermione be put out that her supplier has until now chosen to keep his identity a secret? I can't wait to find out.Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Thanks so much Beth :) It is awful for him to have to live knowing that there is every chance that she wont love him back. Hopefully the next part will be enlightening.
Nice beginning and I hope to see more
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Thank you :) More is waiting in queue already...
I do hope she meets him. It's all very exciting!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Lol that's for the next :) Thanks for reviewing!
Oh, lovely! I should think she wouldn't really be too offended by his deception. Yes, he lied. He lied copiously, even when he had the chance to come clean. But no doubt he had a reason to do so. After all, people are more likely to do business with a stranger than someone they consider borderline evil. I do hope Hermione's brain is louder than her heart in this instance. Cool story, and I'm looking forward to more!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Lol thanks. As far as Hermione's reaction goes, you will have to wait and see in part two. However, I will say that I have not written her to think that Snape is evil - just snarky and kind of rude. Thanks for reviewing and the next part will be in queue tonight I think.
ohhh very good! I look forward to the next chapter!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Thanks so much! Glad you like it so far.
Interesting beginning. I hope she doesn't take offense to his mysterious behavior. She should at least let him explain before she gets angry.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Heh thanks :) Hopefully the next chapter will cover all of these things to your satisfaction. Thanks for reviewing!
More please? It is a GREAT story.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Heh, more is on the way. I am glad you like it so far. Thanks for reviewing!
Uh oh! How will she take that? And just how will Severus explain? Nice cliffie there!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Lol, well you'll just have to wait and find out when I post the next chapter (soon). Thanks for reviewing!
I love your Severus and Hermione stories, and I can't believe I've missed this one! It's such an interesting opening chapter. I'm off to read more!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Honestly, this story is rubbish. I have a newer one that I am posting at present called 'the beauty of science' which is much closer to the style I write at present. Thanks for the review though! :D
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Honestly, this story is rubbish. I have a newer one that I am posting at present called 'the beauty of science' which is much closer to the style I write at present. Thanks for the review though! :D
Perfect! He can be so sweet sometimes. *smile*
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
He sure can :) Thanks for taking the time to read and review as usual!
*deep tired sigh* I got all those pesky clients all afternoon long and I couldn't find a moment's peace to finish my chapter *grrrrrrr* Honestly I should find a job where I'm paid to read HP fanfiction. That would be the coolest job on the planet.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Lol. That's okay. And hey, a job is a job, right? Thanks!
I love that first chapter. And I'm glad I won't have to wait to know how the meeting will go.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Lol, thank you :) And yes, you can just skip right on to the next chapter.
Glad they're both on the same page. LOL
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Lol yeah :) Thanks for reviewing!
I still love it! From their meeting at the Leaky Cauldron to their arrival at Severus' parents home to celebrate Christmas, I found their relationship growing and progressing just the way I had hoped it would. Now they are exclusive to each other. Woo hoo!And now it's time to meet the parents! I can't wait to see how this lovely afternoon goes. Hopefully Severus' parents will take to Hermione the same way she and he have taken to each other. Please update soon!Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Thanks so much, Beth! I am glad you like it, but be warned that the next chapter is very much AU and the characters will seem a little unlikely. But heck, OOC has never stopped people from reading fanfiction before, so why should it now :p Lol. Next chapter will be up soon! Thanks again!
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I don't have a problem with AU and OOC, at all!
I love this story. I love the older-mature Hermione and the softer Snape. thank you for sharing it. I am anxious for the "meet the parents" part.....
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Leap of Faith)
Thank you :) I am glad that you like it. The last part is already in queue.