Oh sweet mother of Merlin, it's amazing. I was laughing so hard while reading this story that if someone had seen me they would have thought I had gone mad or something.
I'm well into the Remus and Hermione thing, so I think I can tell you it's one of the best of its kind. And really, the limericks were not that bad. Well, they weren't mind blowing either, but they were quite funny and fitting.
So to put it simply: well done!

My god that was funny!

What an corking good piece! Well-written, clever, and just plain entertaining! I enjoyed it immensely!

Well done! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you so very much- and extra points for the use of 'corking' in your review!

LOL Quite inventive and I really enjoyed the limericks - even the awkward ones because it made the curse seem more realisitic, especially trying to rhyme orange. 

That was a lot of fun to read.

wow.  your limericks are AMAZING. 

Your limericks are just so divine,The plot a brilliant design,The lemons were groovy,It should be a movieNow, wouldn't that be very fine? :)

Wow, that takes some thought.  You have to either be really creative or slightly insane to come up with all those limericks.  I'll let you decide which one applies :)  I'm glad it didn't take them too much time to realize that they could have something good together.  I actually thought that they might beat around the bush a bit, but both would continue to "accidentally" open the jewelry box and then of course have to "endure" the curse breaking each time.  Now who's insane? LOL  Thanks for giving me a good laugh tonight.