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Machynlleth
Hannah_188812 Reviews | 6.67/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
An innocuous occurrence on a railway platform galvanises Severus into action.
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LOL. That was fun.
Haha!! Brilliant.
Poor guy. Jealousy seems to perpetually be the catalyst that gets him to show his hand to her. What a sweet little story. I wonder if they will actually reach their destination, or get sidetracked along the way by the new found attention he is bestowing. This was fun and concluded nicely, but if your muse allows you to peek in on them sometime down the road, I would love to read about it.
Response from Hannah_1888 (Author of Machynlleth)
Thank you! I would like to revisit them -- if the inspiration hit.
Oh, what a shame. They'll have to fill in the time... somehow. ;)
Response from Hannah_1888 (Author of Machynlleth)
What a shame, indeed! : )
He he, cute fluffy story. Thanks for sharing!
Response from Hannah_1888 (Author of Machynlleth)
You are welcome; thank you for reviewing.
I giggled the whole time! How like a man when confronted with someone poaching on their terratory!
Response from Hannah_1888 (Author of Machynlleth)
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading : )
Oh, that was cute. Loved their back and forth, only hiding a deeper respect and dare I say... attraction.
Response from Hannah_1888 (Author of Machynlleth)
Definitely attraction ^_-
What a charming little interlude! I can only imagine what they get up to in Shrewsbury. Do you plan to bring them back for more?
Response from Hannah_1888 (Author of Machynlleth)
No plans as yet, but never say never. Thanks for reviewing!
Beautiful! The dialogue was just crackling with wit and was so natural! Bravo!
Response from Hannah_1888 (Author of Machynlleth)
Thank you; really happy to hear you enjoyed it : )
Great fun! I can see Snape sneeking up on Hermione and Phillup as jelousy overtakes him. Sometimes it takes a little competition for a man to wise up.Great job.
Response from Hannah_1888 (Author of Machynlleth)
Yep, a little competition never hurt anyone. Thank you!