What Happened In the Bedroom
Blue Phoenix12 Reviews | 5.75/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
Companion story to Hermione's Odd Behaviour. I'd recommend reading that one first. This one deals with what happened in the bedroom.
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Blue Phoenix
Member Since 2009 | 4 Stories | Favorited by 14 | 16 Reviews Written | 95 Review Responses
A twenty-something years old woman who enjoys reading romance far too much (no doubt due to the lack of it in my own life). While struggling with the same problem Hermione does in so many of your stories - that of finding a man with above a mediocre minimum of brain capacity - I write stories with the hope of one day becoming good enough to earn something other than reviews for my efforts. (Not that I don’t love reviews - I adore them! - they just sadly don‘t pay my rent.) As the real world holds no Severus Snapes, I have plenty of time to practise...
To those of you still folowing my story Snape's Dream - I haven't abandoned it. In fact, I just sent chapter 7 to my beta and I'm typing away on chapter 8, so I'm back from my summer hiatus :)
Reviews for What Happened In the Bedroom
Another funny oneshot!! I loved this line:
Merlin riding naked on a Thestral!
I really love this. I love the self-doubting, but in love Severus. I love how bossy Hermione is quite firm in her reassurance. And finally, I love poor Harry having to come to terms with it all.
Response from Blue Phoenix (Author of What Happened In the Bedroom)
I've put Serevus as an odd mix of self-assured and self-doubting. He's quite confident, but then he sees Hermione as rather too perfect, and starts wondering what on earth she's doing with an old loner like him :) Poor man. Hermione would be bossy, I think. As for Harry ... theraphy might help. ;) Thank you!
Very well done!
Response from Blue Phoenix (Author of What Happened In the Bedroom)
Thank you :)
This is a great little story. I hope you find someone to beta to get the other part out there. I was wondering how they ended up married.
Response from Blue Phoenix (Author of What Happened In the Bedroom)
Thank you! Yes, hopefully I do have a beta now, so I'll keep typing on the start of the story :)
that was very well done. thanks
Response from Blue Phoenix (Author of What Happened In the Bedroom)
Thank you :)
I love that Hermione doesn't care and that Severus is okay with a helping hand. They seem to do just fine!
Response from Blue Phoenix (Author of What Happened In the Bedroom)
She can be bossy, Hermione. Poor Severus has no choice but to be okay with it :) And he'd need her to be bossy, poor man. Not too great belief in himself regarding women ... Thank you :)
Cute story. I'd offer to beta, but I'm hopeless at it. Sorry. ^_^
Response from Blue Phoenix (Author of What Happened In the Bedroom)
Thank you :)
I loved it. Specially the Snape with erectile dysfunction. That was realistic.
Response from Blue Phoenix (Author of What Happened In the Bedroom)
Yes, poor man. It seems rather realistic that he should struggle a bit after the life he has lived ... Glad you liked the story! :)
That was fun. Thank you!
Response from Blue Phoenix (Author of What Happened In the Bedroom)
Thank you :)
Again too funny, great sequel!
Response from Blue Phoenix (Author of What Happened In the Bedroom)
Thank you! It insisted on being written down ...
*giggles* I'mù sure with practice Sev won't need Hermione's help. And I pray the Gods that you find a beta quickly.
Response from Blue Phoenix (Author of What Happened In the Bedroom)
It would sertainly help if he stops going over all his fault on the way to bed, poor man! :) Glad you liked it!
Anonymous
Great story. I enjoyed the realism of a battered Snape, but Hermione doesn't care. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Our faults always appear greater to ourself than to those who loves us, don't they? Snape seems the type to take every little thing to heart, but Hermione would just love him more for being a little unsure :)