I adored the last line.Which actually wasn't what I meant to talk about in my review but it was just so perfect. What I wanted to say was what vivid images you created with just a few sentences and without ever once having her shutter(sic - just in case someone thinks I can't spell.) Very powerful story.

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

Thank you. Smut is not my natural forte so I do try to keep it short and sweet. And dirty.

9/10

TeaNBooks

*giggle* What a lovely, yummy story! And poor Harry & Ron - as clueless as ever!

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

Thank youI think they might learn a thing or two from this experience.

10/10

snitchette

I'm not sure who got naked but I know the boys must be totally embarrassed and they deserve it.

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

The boys are naked, because Lucius and Severus are wearing matching corsets!

10/10

pokeystar

I imagine that Ron's & Harry's eyes just went very round. As round as mine did upon finding your name on the recent updates page.And what a comeback it is!I'm thinking I need to develop a liking for cremes...

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

Thank you.I think the soft centres are the least risky.

10/10

sevibaby

Where can I buy a box of chocolates this these. This was really good and entertaining.

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

If I find out, I'll be the first person in line to buy a box.Thank you

10/10

sregner

Well you two dumb-asses....I guess you will. Very well done!

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

Thank you

10/10

HBAR

She almost felt sorry for Harry and Ron. Only almost.I would have to agree completely! This was yummy and funny, all in one.

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

Thank you

0/10

gersknightlady

LOL good one

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

Thank you

10/10

Jinxie

Hot chocolate indeed for Hermione! LOL love the ending; it's priceless!

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it

10/10

Sampdoria

Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!!! I am not sure which chocolate I loved the most, but the nut clusters sure made me gleefully entertained:-))

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

Thank you. Nut clusters have always been my favourite.

10/10

Anonymous

Yay shiv is back! Love the ending.

Author's Response: Thank you. I am back indeed!

0/10

sunny33

Hot chocolate indeed. Love the nut clusters. :)

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

Thank you.

8/10

Lyght816

Ahhhh! Delicious!!!

10/10

mick42

I'll never look at a box of chocolates the same way again. Thank you.

10/10

fynnsmom

That was very naughty and very enjoyable. Great story.

0/10

Moreteadk

Awwww yes, I know I can always count on you, Shiv, on the seldom occasions when the fic-reading mood strikes me. Especially if it's a mood that involves Lucius. :)This was lovely. :)

Response from shiv5468 (Author of Hot Chocolate)

Thank you!

10/10

mick42

Just as yummy the second time around.

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