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Experience
nata7 Reviews | 7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
The world gets smaller as Hermione lets Severus open her eyes.
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Member Since 2006 | 8 Stories | Favorited by 6 | 436 Reviews Written | 218 Review Responses
Slytherin is my house by choice, no matter the Sorting Hat's opinion.
Central European. Mother. Scholar. Published author (one story as of January 2010, but, hey, it counts!), entirely thanks to Southern.
My stories have been Featured here at TPP:
- February 2010: The Proof of the Pudding
- April 2007: Cleared of the Murder
Reviews for Experience
While the ending seemed a bit abrupt with Hermione`s letter to Harry, I was hoping that all`s well will end well. Thank you!
Response from nata (Author of Experience)
It didn't end well per se, but well enough for our couple. They have lots to build up on now. Thank you for reviewing.
Response from nata (Author of Experience)
It didn't end well per se, but well enough for our couple. They have lots to build up on now. Thank you for reviewing.
"unspeakables" - republicans....social comment thatEnjoyed the story!!!
Response from nata (Author of Experience)
Thank you. I aimed to make the Unspeakables ridiculous, so I'm glad it worked.
I really liked this. I would have liked to know more backstory, although it wasn't entirely necessary. It worked fine on it's own. I'm not sure I understood her letter to Harry. It's like she had a sudden lightbulb moment (which is typical for her), but I am still in the dark. I may have just missed something. Please set me straight because I really enjoyed otherwise.
Response from nata (Author of Experience)
Thank you for your review. First, this is Epilogue-compliant. And in the Epilogue, Hermione has a career in Magical Law Enforcement; she is a lawyer. So the letter means that she will launch a campain to clear the charges against Severus. In a way, she will change the wizarding world to make it more tolerant and aware of the outside world. After all, the only Severus's crime is that he travelled the world and was able to survive the experience.
Interesting take on the Unspeakables. :)
Response from nata (Author of Experience)
Thank you. I tried to give the Department a bit of MI5 flavour.
Interesting plot idea with a good build up. But is this really completed? It just seems to stop instead of having an ending.
Response from nata (Author of Experience)
*sigh* I'm sorry for the confusion. The way I see this story, it is supposed to be clear that Hermione sets everything to rights. I will try to alter it to clarify my intent better. But at the moment, I don't know how.
The story was very good up until the end. I am left wondering where the rest is. What happened then? A little confused, Sara
Response from nata (Author of Experience)
This is a very serious fault of the story. In my mind, it is supposed to be crystal clear that all ends well. Apparently, it's clear as mud. I will try to set it straight, but I'm at a loss as to how to address that.