Blossoms
Chapter 1 of 1
lady_rhian"Bloom where you're planted."
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A/N: This was written as a gift for morethansirius and mollyssister and was originally posted on the morethanmolly LJ community (check it out!). My thanks to Shug (sshg316) for giving it the green light.
The sand is dry, grainy – rather like the heat that crackles in the air and stretches across the skin. But the water is cool, the drinks foamy and smooth, and the view from the cottage is nothing short of a vista.
“Take her away from here,” was what the doctor said. Words like “high risk” and “injury” and “likely complications” had punctured his reality, not that there was much air in his balloon to begin with.
So he took her away – to here – to the coast of some godforsaken Latin American country, that’s what he’d called it then –
They stayed. When it came down to it, their roots in England weren’t as difficult to dredge up as they feared – had been surprisingly shallow, come to that. The unspoken word had unrooted and unsettled them both long ago. War.
Versus peace. Peace – here – now…
He sips the cold beer in his hand, the beads of sweat from the bottle soaking into his cracked hands. He follows her as she walks along the hot sand – he can almost feel it beneath his bare feet here on the wooden veranda. Her sarong swishes with the breeze, coquettishly twisting around bits of bare leg – her hands grasp the chubby hands of their one-year-old son, who takes uncertain steps on this uncertain ground –
“Bloom where you’re planted,” is what Neville had told Hermione before they left.
Hmph. Well –
Well then.
His son squeals as the tide washes in. He dances a bit before his diapered bottom hits the sand. Hermione picks him up and, settling him on her waist, starts to walk back towards the cottage. She smiles at her husband.
His lips curl into what may be a smile. Or not. Only she knows.
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Great story, I can easily imagine a Severus finding peace in watching his wife and child walking the beach, knowing that he have taken them to a safe place. Very well done!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of Blossoms)
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Oh, I like this! So tranquil, and peaceful. <3
Response from lady_rhian (Author of Blossoms)
Thank you, dearest! *hugs*
Lovely:) Just lovely:)Brava!!!!Fizzabella
Response from lady_rhian (Author of Blossoms)
Thank you, dear! So glad you enjoyed it.
You can just smell the tranquillity. :)
Response from lady_rhian (Author of Blossoms)
Thank you!
Interesting. I have a slightly difficult time imagining Severus liking the tropics- but grumpily accepting them works quite well :)Doesn't matter where you are, what matters is who you're with.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of Blossoms)
Absolutely. Thanks for reading!
I like the addition of Neville and the lack of Harry and Ron. It hints (to me at least) that Hermione is capable of having friendships with others. The fact that Neville's line is also garden related is like extra frosting! Delicious!
Response from lady_rhian (Author of Blossoms)
Indeed! But you have your partner in crime, morethansirius, to thank for the quote... it was one of her drabble prompts. :-) I'm very glad you enjoyed it, dearest!
Oh, but this is lovely. Our favorite pair (now a trio) in tropical paradise."Bloom where you're planted." Beautiful, sage advice from the vastly underappreciated Neville.
Response from lady_rhian (Author of Blossoms)
That quote is courtesy of a prompt from morethansirius. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, dear! :-)
intriguing snapshot. how did they come to this point? were they escaping england?
Response from lady_rhian (Author of Blossoms)
It's entirely open - I like doing pieces like this because the reader is free to imagine what happens before and after. :) Thanks for reading!