Too cute, especially the "stuff him and his twinkle" part.

zinc, zither, zoo, zipper, zenith? just suggestions for next time. this was very cute!

omg i have tears coming  from laughing so hard have a kindegarden child myself i needed thisway to cute thank u for thishugs and chocolate

I just came across this in my browsing for something to read. Bravo, it gave me a good laugh!

LOL---Excellent!

This is adorably ridiculous, and I loved it! :D

Love it, I don't think I will be using it to teach my grandson his alphabet.  

Haha, cute. We haven't quite gotten to the alphabet books yet here at my house, but I'm sure I'll giggle and remember this when the time comes. Severus already loves his toddler books, so I'm sure he will love the alphabet variety, too.

This is a riot! Who would have thought Severus a poet *giggle*

LOL. Loved this short one shot darl.loves you, Sonia :)

This was recommended and it just made my day.  Thanks for the laugh.

WONDERFUL...I LOVE IT! WELL DONE

LOL! He was that bored with spying and protecting the children?

Tee hee.  I have a two year old too.  This made me giggle.

z is for zither.  which rhymes with slyther(in).   ;)EXCELLENT poetry!  I don't know how you did it!

That was brilliant - Pure delight!

My second is currently a toddler as well, and I have read more of this type rhyming alphabet nonsense than I care to remember.  His is actually quite good, or it gave me a good laugh anyway.Incidentally, I was hoping that z was for zipper... but then with a K rating, they wouldn't get far, would they?  But if things did go that direction, they might end up with a toddler of their own, and then his poetry could be put to good use :)

I loved this look into Severus' past endeavors.  I can just see our him putting quill to parchment to ease his evening headache with a bit of rhyme.  I wonder if he found Hermione attractive even then.  Bet he did!Beth

that was a great hoot!  and i can't think of anything but zebra!  you rule and reign.  mucho smoochies

Cute and clever.  It reminded me of your potion ingredient series on LJ.  *hint, hint, nudge, nudge*

Absolutley wonderful!  I've written a few poems myself and I never underestimate 'mere' doggerel.  Oh, and THANK YOU for the laugh, which I sorely needed.

Thank goodness for your toddler then, if s/he inspires you to write like this:) I loved it:)Brava!Fizzabella

brilliant

“It's all right, Severus. I can't think of anything much beginning with Z either ...” LOL, very cute and very true with Z.  However my daughter got a book for her birthday with Z is for Zorillas (nobody in the family has a clue what they are!), but then again the whole book has some interesting animals matching the letters...  ;)Well done!

*giggles*