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sara lady dalianMalfoy goes to Rome to find love in a magical fountain. What comes from his picking a coin?
He hid in the shadows, wary of the Muggles surrounding the fountain. It was standing there, just as his great uncle's journal said it would. He remembered the sketch that was in the book at home. The fountain looked the same, if a little more worn and in need of a good cleaning. Still, it was the same fountain. His decision made, he walked forward through the crowds to stand at the fountain's edge. A small, nude Venus surrounded by nymphs stood in the middle. In her bowl were coins, thrown in by would-be lovers. He had come for one of those coins.
He remembered the instructions. He simply had to circle the fountain until he found his coin. But he must not pick up the wrong one. That was basically all Uncle Alessandro had said. This had seemed simpler while he had been standing in his father's library having his betrothal dictated to him. This was the only way. His father would understand, if he found love from the fountain. It was, after all, a Malfoy tradition.
The air was hot, the Muggles insistently talking. That was something that he could not understand. They had nothing interesting to say, so why did they keep talking? Several of the older ones looked at him as he made his way around the fountain; smiles from the women and nods from the men came his way as he continued the walk.
Was he supposed to be thinking about anything in particular? He needed this to work! He refused to marry that girl they had picked out. There was no way he would be shackled to that woman. She reminded him too much of relatives he would rather avoid thinking about. But how was he to... In the middle of his musing he found himself stopped. He literally couldn't go any further. He turned toward the fountain, sure that he was to find what he wanted... no, needed.
There, almost covered, was a little bronze Knut. Who had put it there? They shouldn't have done that. What if the Muggles found it? Cautiously, he rolled his shirtsleeve up and reached into the surprisingly chilled water. The Knut was dinged and tarnished from having been in the water for a while. But he was sure it was meant for him.
He stood staring at it for what felt like an eternity, needing, reaching, feeling. There was someone meant for him; he was sure of it.
Suddenly, he felt a hand on his shoulder. He closed his eyes. The pressure felt amazing. A thumb brushed the column of his neck, pushing under his hair. He turned his head slightly towards the breathing and heat. When he opened his eyes, he found a vibrant green pair looking back at him. “It took you long enough. I've been needing you, too.”
AN: I love Hermione's prompts. I grabbed another one. “A witch of your choice visits Rome and picks a coin out of the fountain, and the gent immediately falls in love with her. Who is the witch and who is the wizard? Rules: NOT Hermione and Severus. Hermione can be the picker or Severus can be the gent, but it can't be both of them. 1000 words max. Inspired by the film When in Rome. Addendum: I am not opposed to a wizard falling in love with a wizard or a witch falling in love with a witch. Janus cleaned this up for me. As usual, I bow before anyone willing to take my stuff raw.
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Latest 25 Reviews for When in Need
7 Reviews | 7.14/10 Average
I really liked this - it holds such promise for something wonderful!
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
Oh - thank you so much. I really like this story, too! Thanks for reviewing! Sara
An interesting take on this prompt. Nice job.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
Thanks kimbee. I really fell in love with this as I was writing it. Truffles - Sara
What a neat idea! You really took the prompt and made it your own. It works perfectly in the Potterverse. Well-paced, and a good characterization of Draco. As for the vibrant green eyes - thanks for leaving that up to the readers! ;)~Gina :)
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
Thanks for the review. When the idea first came to me, I couldn't help but think that only someone truly desperate would rely on a fountain to save them. But then, the Malfoy family has know desperate times. However, I must correct you. I said the story was D/H in the character list. And I will admit that is who I was writing. But, my beta pointed out to me that the only proper name I use is the familial name Malfoy. It could be any Malfoy and any green-eyed savior. It just so happens that my favorite Malfoy ship.... *smiles.. Thanks again, Sara
Anonymous
The pairing made my hair curl, but it was a good read!
Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't like them together. But, as my beta told me - the story itself doesn't say it's H/D - I told you that is what I was writing. Feel free to imagine sometime in the future or past some other Malfoy meeting a green-eyed lover. *shrug... there have to be others who had similar eyes. But for me - I love a good H/D. Thanks for finishing and not turning the story off just because of the pairing. Truffles for bravery and pudding for reviewing! Sara
Wow! Amazing how a tiny knut can change a whole life.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
Just like a tiny little snitch can change the course of the game? *smiles... yes, sometimes it is the smallest things that make all the difference. Thanks for reviewing. Sara
Lovely. I liked reading Draco's thought process. And I really liked him finding Harry there at the end.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
I thought about making it Harry at the fountain - but then I decided that Draco might know a thing or two about desperation, as well. Thanks for the review - Sara
Very well done.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
Thank you. I really liked this one. The only regret I have is that I coudln't find a RL equivilent to it - something to wrap my image sensors around. Thanks for the great prompt! Sara