When in Need
sara lady dalian7 Reviews | 7.14/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
Malfoy goes to Rome to find love in a magical fountain. What comes from his picking a coin?
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I really liked this - it holds such promise for something wonderful!
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
Oh - thank you so much. I really like this story, too! Thanks for reviewing! Sara
An interesting take on this prompt. Nice job.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
Thanks kimbee. I really fell in love with this as I was writing it. Truffles - Sara
What a neat idea! You really took the prompt and made it your own. It works perfectly in the Potterverse. Well-paced, and a good characterization of Draco. As for the vibrant green eyes - thanks for leaving that up to the readers! ;)~Gina :)
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
Thanks for the review. When the idea first came to me, I couldn't help but think that only someone truly desperate would rely on a fountain to save them. But then, the Malfoy family has know desperate times. However, I must correct you. I said the story was D/H in the character list. And I will admit that is who I was writing. But, my beta pointed out to me that the only proper name I use is the familial name Malfoy. It could be any Malfoy and any green-eyed savior. It just so happens that my favorite Malfoy ship.... *smiles.. Thanks again, Sara
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The pairing made my hair curl, but it was a good read!
Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't like them together. But, as my beta told me - the story itself doesn't say it's H/D - I told you that is what I was writing. Feel free to imagine sometime in the future or past some other Malfoy meeting a green-eyed lover. *shrug... there have to be others who had similar eyes. But for me - I love a good H/D. Thanks for finishing and not turning the story off just because of the pairing. Truffles for bravery and pudding for reviewing! Sara
Wow! Amazing how a tiny knut can change a whole life.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
Just like a tiny little snitch can change the course of the game? *smiles... yes, sometimes it is the smallest things that make all the difference. Thanks for reviewing. Sara
Lovely. I liked reading Draco's thought process. And I really liked him finding Harry there at the end.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
I thought about making it Harry at the fountain - but then I decided that Draco might know a thing or two about desperation, as well. Thanks for the review - Sara
Very well done.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of When in Need)
Thank you. I really liked this one. The only regret I have is that I coudln't find a RL equivilent to it - something to wrap my image sensors around. Thanks for the great prompt! Sara