I am so glad that I read this story. Looking for another, I found this one. Very enjoyable. I wish there was more of it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Liz

Ohhh I was completely caught by that twist at the end, and that's the first sub-boys story I've read that I've actually *liked*! Well bloody done!

Sneaky.  Very sneaky! :)

That was absolutely marvelous~!!! I loved the twist at the end, and how descriptive everything was, without being tedious! This just ad the feel of completion at the end, and even though it gave the hint of a future, I was satisfied in the mystery of not knowing. This is seriously one of my favourite stories.

Great!  Loved your Lucius and enjoyed the evolution of his mindset from resistance to acceptance.  I'd love to see a sequel, perhaps several years down the road, where Lucius, for whatever reason, reluctantly finds himself wishing for a repeat.  Not asking, just fantasizing (although I'd certainly read it if it happened:)  Thanks for sharing your story.

I do so love a hot, steamy story involving both Severus and Lucius. Thank you for providing, Miss Jade_Orchid. And providing very well.

Elura

Lovely twist at the end. Clever! Great story.

Very slyly concocted, indeed.  Thank you for sharing this; it was a wonderful escape from the humdrum of reality!

Well done! good story

Wow the end was totally unexpected. Your characterization of Lucius was very originial because in most of the stories I've read he was always for revel rapes. It was good to read something different. 

Wow the end was totally unexpected. Your characterization of Lucius was very originial because in most of the stories I've read he was always for revel rapes. It was good to read something different. 

I loved the twist at the end.  Thanks for a good read.

Interesting angle on Snape, Hermione and Lucius. Beautifully written and hot. I really liked the twist at the end.

That was HOT!  Wonderfully done.  Your style is smooth and descriptive.  I enjoyed reading it very much and the punch line, so to speak, was great. :)

nice twist at the end. hee hee  hee

Picking myself up off the floor from where I lay in a puddle of goo... Shite that be hot. Can I play the role of Hermione when they cast this one????

Beautifully erotic and great ending.  I wonder whether Lucius would be back? for a sequal maybe?

(turns on fan) god that was hot!!! love the twist at the end, sequel??

Beautiful. A novel change to see Lucius as the one with qualms and losing control. Very nice to see it also approached from the aspect of Deatheaters not being a group of orgy loving swingers too (though that, itself, has it's own benefits at times). Nice, indeed. The persuasion of Lucius did leave me a touch uncomfortable at times, but I think I liked that. The plot and the twist at the end were interesting and added a little something deeper to the incredible hotness of the erotica.

Oh Lucius, you have been out Slytherined, by the best.

Ooh, sneaky! I loved this story.

SS/HG/LM is definitely my favorite pairing for threesomes. And then SS/HG is my OTP :) 

I liked how you characterized Lucius in this story. Though it was a one-shot [a very long one-shot], you still managed to tell us a lot about his character. 

And then of course, there's Severus. Sneaky Slytherin, he is ;)

Excellent story; well done! 

Oh yes, I love these three together and your plot is awesome.  Now Severus gets to be incharge.  Perfect.Tamara

Wow!  HOT HOT HOT!!!!  I definately didn't see that ending coming.  Your descriptions are fantastic and extremely erotic.  I very much enjoyed this story.

Hmm... Absolutely delicious! The way that Lucius submitted and the twist with Hermione owing Severus was fascinating.

Very nice! I rarely ever read threesomes where the characters remain as close in character as they can be. Very well done, bravo!