A Masked Beginning
Saturn131 Reviews | 6.34/10 (131 Ratings, 0 Likes, 96 Favorites )
When Hermione attends the Ministry's Masquerade, she gets more than she bargained for when she encounters a charming masked stranger. Is she ready to reveal everything, or will she run from the risk?
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Saturn
Member Since 2009 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 16 | 0 Reviews Written | 473 Review Responses
This is a round robin team created for The Petulant Poetess Intergalactic Quidditch Cup Tournament.
The authors/players who make up Saturn and their team positions are:
debjunk Meteoroid Beater
beaweasley2 comet chaser
BrenaMarie Asteroid Beater
Elizabeth Moon Chaser
phoenix writing Gravity Keeper
Southern Witch 69 Black Hole Chaser
silverdoe Supernova Seeker
Please show your support for our team by reviewing and guessing what might happen next! Cheers! :)
Reviews for A Masked Beginning
Ooooooooh ! This deserves so much more than a mere thank you. Update soon would be appropriate but I know I'll have to wait until next week. I love this first chapter. The prompt words were nearly invisible. I'm also really curious aboit how you'll use the lost shoe for the mysterious (maybe not that so unless I'm really mistaken) man to find her.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey,
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! I'm really happy to hear you've enjoyed it so much! And yeah, fitting those words in there is always fun. :-) As for using the shoe, that's up to Elizabeth & beaweasley2, they're up next! Stay tuned! Much Love ~ Brena
Ooh, a Cinderella story. Very cool.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Thank you! I'm particulary fond of them, ~d
Oh, this is wonderful.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
I can't wait to see where you take this and how they get together, I love it, well done....
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! I can't wait to see what happens either! LOL. Thanks for reviewing! Elizabeth & beaweasley2's chapter will be up on Sunday!
Oh the masks are so intriguing. I laughed at the rainbow-haired appearance of her ‘rescuer.’ It was so nice them talking like they did and to get lost in the moment, but her running away, that was sad. She really must think lowly of herself to run or ashamed… but then he did comment on how beautiful he thought she was – so no wonder. If she felt like he liked her for her glamour, then reality would be a shock, in her mind. I really like how you were able to make the wizard known to us as Severus without ever mentioning his name. Kewl.Good job ladies, Well, I’ll see you in the locker room – I have huge shoes to fill after this set up!
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey bea! Thank you so much for the wonderful review! We really appreciate hearing your thoughts! See you over on Saturn!
I've read it 3 times so far. I can't wait for more. Are we looking at weekly updates, or will it be sooner.... Oh, please say yes.....
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Wow, three times! I'm totally flattered! Updates will come weekly on Sunday. There are only three chapters in total, so it won't be too long a wait. Thanks!
Kissing someone at a masquerade is dangerous - you could end kissing your former teacher.oops, I think that just might have happened ;-)Great beginning, ladies!
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! Thank you so much for the lovely review! Masquerades are hazardous to ones health in that way, I'd have to agree. *snerk* I hope she doesn't end up regretting it! I know I wouldn't. I hope you continue to enjoy our little tale. :-)
Love the Cinderella references. :)
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Thanks Sunny! I love the fairy tales! ~ Brena
please update soon
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Will do! The next chapter will be posted sometime Sunday night. Thank you!
what a great first chapter! you two definitely write well together!
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Thank you! We find that we are in each other's minds a lot. Not sure if that's a good thing or not... ~d
Ooo! Very well written and sweet redux of the Cinderella story. Love it! Keep up the great work!
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Thank you so much!
Great chapter, brenjunk. Love the little twists to the Cinderella story.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! Thanks for calling us Brenjunk! We both got a kick out of it. I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! Thanks for leaving us a review. Much Love ~ Us.
A very enjoyable effort! I didn't expect the Cinderella angle but find that is a fun addition. Good Luck with the match! JoAnne
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey there! Thank you so much for the review! I'm so happy to hear that you're enjoying it! We hope you continue to enjoy Saturn's effort here in the play offs. I'm such a fan of Cinderella, it was really tons of fun writing this. Much Love ~ Brena
How about "Update soon!" then? :)
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
The update is scheduled for Sunday night! Whoot! I'm as anxious as you are to see what happens! ~d
Normally I avoid stories that are not already completed but there have been a few exceptions. This story shall be one of them as I very much enjoyed the last (Bad Moon Rising) and was hoping you all would write more. Excellent start and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
*Squee!* I'm honored that you've broken your rule to read this. So glad you enjoyed Bad Moon Rising. It was truly a joy to get together and create that and we are having fun already with this one. Update on Sunday night!
This is a new twist on a very old theme. I still found it enchanting. It will be fun to read more.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad to hear you are enjoying our twist! Hearing that you found it enchanting seriously warms my heart. It makes me feel like we are staying true to the original in our own way! Thanks again! Much Love ~ Brena
Wonderful first chapter. I am very much looking forward to read more.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Thank you! I have to admit that fluffy stories like this are some of my favorite, so it was really fun to be involved with it. ~d
I loved it! Please feel free to post the next installment as soon as possible :3
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! Thank you so much for the lovely review! We're so happy you're enjoying it! The next chapter should be posted on Sunday!
good first chapter, can't wait for an update
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
:D Thank you! The next chapter will be up on Sunday night.
Fabulous Cinderalla-esque story.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Whoot! I know I told you ladies how much I enjoyed this already, but I sort of like being redundant, so without further ado...This was a great beginning! Whoot, whoot! I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings. Seriously. :)
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
LOL, thank you so much. I can't wait either. That's what's fun about this. You never know what you're going to get!! ~d
*giggle* The Cinderella game again...
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
But we've got our own twist! Thanks for the review and i hope you continue to enjoy it!
A cinderella story with smut, fantastic. Can't wait for more.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Omg, I said the same thing! This was such a great idea that we came up with! I can't wait to see what my team mates do! Bring on the shagging! Much Love ~ Brena
I am excited :) you're off to a great start!
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! Thank you so much for the review! We're glad you've enjoyed it so far.
Sort of a Cinderella story, eh? Very good start. I look forward to more.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! Thank you so much for the review! We're so happy to hear you're enjoying our little Cinderella fic. Thanks again!