A Masked Beginning
Saturn131 Reviews | 6.34/10 (131 Ratings, 0 Likes, 96 Favorites )
When Hermione attends the Ministry's Masquerade, she gets more than she bargained for when she encounters a charming masked stranger. Is she ready to reveal everything, or will she run from the risk?
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Member Since 2009 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 16 | 0 Reviews Written | 473 Review Responses
This is a round robin team created for The Petulant Poetess Intergalactic Quidditch Cup Tournament.
The authors/players who make up Saturn and their team positions are:
debjunk Meteoroid Beater
beaweasley2 comet chaser
BrenaMarie Asteroid Beater
Elizabeth Moon Chaser
phoenix writing Gravity Keeper
Southern Witch 69 Black Hole Chaser
silverdoe Supernova Seeker
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Reviews for A Masked Beginning
Excellent start. I love the masks.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Thank you! I want the mystery man's, personally. What a hoot that would be to own! ~d
Oh, I really loved this! I always think that it is silly when someone has a masquerade ball with people who are mostly all acquainted, and by covering part of their face, noone knows who anyone else is. The Weasley masks make it much more believeable. Glad our mystery man was around to save her from that creep she was dancing with. I'm really looking forward to more.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Thank you so much! I bet those Weasleys really recognized the problem with regular masquerades right off. And hey, with magic, we can fix it!I know Hermione was quite grateful to be rescued, and she fould someone really worthwhile because of it. Of course, she ran off like a banshee, so now what will they both do? ~d
Thanks! Update soon! Good start!
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey there! Thank you so much for the review! We're so happy you have enjoyed it so far. The next chapter will be up on Sunday!!!
I love the line where he says they aren't strangers. It's like the Roger and Hammerstein's Cinderella where they say they've spoken these words before, and they weren't strangers. They knew each other from another time. Lovely.I am so excited to write after reading this chapter, you ladies did a great job! We are so going to win!!!
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! We're so glad you liked how we started this! Just the fact that you got so many ideas after reading it was such a relief! We hope you have fun with it! Much Love ~ Brena
I really like it. All Cinderella. But why walk (run) away from a fabulous kisser? The worst that can happen is no more kisses and you get that outcome automatically if you run, so...why not stay and hope for the best (ie, more kisses)?I am dying to know who the fat groper was. Amos Diggory? Slughorn? A cross-dressing Pomona? Vernon Dursley? Each option worse than the one before...Thanks for the mystery and the humor.
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
Hey there,
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
! Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I can answer the first question, debjunk wrote the groper part, so I'm not sure who she was thinking.If I were Hermione, I'd want to run only because of the nature of the Glamour. The Glamour made her look like, a model. And she ensnared this guy with her looks, and even though he had tried to convince her it wasn't her physical appearance which ensnared him, she couldn't help thinking that once he got to see what she really looked like he'd be disappointed. And she didn't want to see his disappointment since she was enjoying his company so much.Thanks again! Much Love ~ Brena
thanks and Update very soon .... !!! enjoyed the first installment. can't wait to see how it goes and of course ends, though I have an inkingly as to who the mysterious rainbow haired man is (wink wink!!)..... more soon !Redz
Response from Saturn (Author of A Masked Beginning)
I can't imagine who you might mean! Thank you for the review. The next chapter will be up on Sunday night! ~d