Severus

It's great to see a new chapter on this story.  An excellent chapter indeed.  Poor Snape, he's really starting to feel the stress of the coming problems. Thanks for the great chapter!

At least he realises she is a valuable resource. :)

Fascinating Story. Wonderful how much both are in character. It is sad, but his dark throughts about the future and Hogwarts without him – he is right about that, at least on this moment. Thank you for sharing.

horrid, indeed!  but entirely in character.  well done and smoochies

A well-crafted and exciting story. The characterisations of HG and SS are also very commendable. Looking forward to the development of the HGSS relationship and the resolution of the plot. Thank you very much for sharing this story with us.

He shares in their adventure and then takes points from them?  Horrid, horrid man indeed - and perfectly in character.  I love the way you are writing Snape!  I'm glad to see Hermione is standing up to him.   I am also enjoying the humor - there are some really funny lines in this chapter.

A horrid, horrid man indeed.  Wonderful chapter again.  I love poor Hermione's attempts at being sneaky.  She's not awful, but she needs some practice, maybe Snape can help with that. 
Very much looking forward to the next chapter. 

Niiiice! ^_^

Boy, she was lucky Snape was strong enough to catch her.

And after that gallant feat of acrobatics, he must have felt it his just reward to take house points. Cruel, cold, and very low, but also very Snape.

Hmm. Intreguing story.  Where is Snape going to be going with all this information.  Is Hermione's trust going to last?  Quite interesting so far, very much looking forward to further chapters.  Excellent job with the personalities and thought processes of your characters. 

wonderful update.  thanks so much

Wow. What a mysterious character this Severus Snape is. I can't wait to read more. I really like your characters and am just intrigued as hell.

Quite an interesting twist. Now I see why the day with Severus was how you had it - it made it easier for her to be near him. I'm surprised by her confession, but I have to admit - you have them both absolutely canon-like perfect!

I'd have to say, of all the 'forced to be together' days I've read this one was hellish!  And very canon!  I'm with Hermione, I'd be glad it was over too. I mean, the prat didn't even offer her tea!

Very interesting look on Severus' life form his POV. I really liked his opinions on Dumbledore and Pettigrew.

Oooooh was he there to protect her? or was it coincidence? It was so odd that he just stood aside and let her pas. And then for her to be all jittery with guilt. Ha!
Very interesting begining.

what a drag for hermione...and no tea!!  that was really low.  great update.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Okay, I'm hooked. And thoroughly. Great first chapter -- thanks for writing and sharing!

Well done!  This is coming along very nicely.  Great in-character dialogue!

This is good so far, I'd love to read more:)

I am enjoying this very much. Great plot!!

I'm also enjoying your clever touches of humour!

Awesome! So many good insights in this chapter! I loved this : Severus had no doubt that Peter had been placed with him as a precaution, reminding him that while the Dark Lord might say outwardly that his faith in Severus was complete, it was known that Voldemort truly trusted no one, not even Severus.
 
I love your characterization of Snape.

So well done! I'm hooked!

Very nicely written and I liked your portrayal of Hermione!

Also, your plot is very intriguing. I am looking forward to reading more. :D

So far this fic has been an absolute joy to read- well written and Unpleasant!Severus... Very much looking forward to reading more.

And now Hermione is suffering from the Wizarding equivalent of jet-lag!  And now she's even more clearly on Professor Snape's radar with her remarks concerning Dumbledore...I do hope that we'll get a brief look from Sev's POV regarding what he saw in her mind, and his thoughts on how she was able to throw him out of it.  Had he been given the instructions to attempt to teach Harry to Occlude in this timeline?  I would normally guess that he had, since Hermione was aware of Legilimency, but she's so terrifyingly well-read that it doesn't necessarily follow!

Looking forward to the next chapter!