*Fans self* Phew!! HOT!!!! Very nice indeed!

Hot story. Good writing.

How hot was that!

i freaking love this story and i added it to my favs, i love how your not scared of extrem sex lol... thanks loads and keep up the good work

that was both hot and touching...how do you do that so well??! thanks and mucho smoochies

What a great imagination she has!  It could really get her into some trouble, but not this night.  I kind of like the forward, in control Hermione.  And the maid bit was both steamy and funny.  If he is into chef, and plumber, and gardner, why, they might soon be able to christen every part of his house ;)

WOOOW how very HOT and NAUGHTY was that!

Dear Merlin in pink boxers!
  I have never read read anything so straightforward before..
 but I liked the total , unPuritan honesty
Her dreams, his accept, her understanding anger of his treatment as a Spineless boy , ( God , he is not) their slow understanding, his nerves, and understandable sincere shyness , and this man's deep need for tenderness as well as passion. He, above all characters, surely needs both, as starved as his life has been.  You described it so well. The closeness and humor took away the  almost medical/ unspiritual/ bought, street-paid- enslaved - sex - words, it couild have had , if you hadn't also found and described their souls.  Thank you for giving them the plans of more life together, brimming in the thought as they sleep, wearily, softly, happily together .  Brava! 

Oh my! This is hot, hot, HOT! Feewww! Need a cold shower after this. Nicely written with vivid descriptions. A wonderful read indeed. I couldn't stop myself from squealing out loud and giggling like a loony in many humourous parts you put it. Hermione is such a vixen and Severus is just cute in this. Love it. 

Wow! That was hot! And very naughty1

WOW! That was incredible!

You just got to love Hermione's vivid imagination.... Nicely done wingless