Memorable
Cecelle16 Reviews | 7.25/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )
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Cecelle
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Awwwww I love the magic spell you thought up! And it Severus could turn it into a career. I can see it now, couples will come into his shop to pick out the perfect lump of coal. Snape will wave his wand and VIOLA a personalized diamond. He will be rich and living his happily ever after! 
Response from Cecelle (Author of Memorable)
Thank you! I am big on Happily Ever Afters. ;0)
aw, this was adorable.
wonderful! it kind of reminded me of how in the old superman comics he used to compress coal into diamonds with his superstrength. loved the story. on our first christmas together i gave my sweetie a list of suggestions. much more satisfatory way for both of us! thanks and mucho smoochies
Now that's a gift!
Well, I'd say that is a marketable skill. Definitely couldn't be two more different gifts. Thank goodness she ended up with the right giver. Very nice story.
This is the best of both worlds:a gift that is beautiful and valuable and desirable. 
a gift he made just for her with his own hands. 
Great way to make a gift doubly meaningful.
Response from Cecelle (Author of Memorable)
It's the kind of gift anyone would like to receive, isn't it? Thank you for our kind words!
Oh this is so cute! I totally laughed at Ron's inept gift and couldn't help smile at her reaction to Severus' coal. 
If he markets his coal into diamonds spell, he'll ruin the diamond market - or if he keeps it to himself, he'll be rich! Too funny that!
Response from Cecelle (Author of Memorable)
Yes - if he's smart (and he is) he'll just sell enough to create a very pleasant lifestyle for them and leave it at that. Thank you for taking the time to leave a review!
This was really good.
loved it
this story is really cute. and i like how you gave us all the information we needed to know about how hermione went from ron to no ron to severus in a very succinct, non-narrative way. i do like the whole "naughty hermione" thing, but severus discovering a way to turn coal into diamond fits so well with your characterization; it essentially solves his career problem, with his own brainpower :) So for this story, it was the perfect thing to do. this ship can always use more stories like this; good job!
Response from Cecelle (Author of Memorable)
That's the advantage of writing to a word limit challenge - you have to be concise! I think it is very typical of the male ego to want to be the 'provider' in the family - however Victorian of them that might be! ;0)Thanks so much for leaving a review - I really appreciate it!
Lovely story. The gift Severus gave her was soooo much better then what Ron did.
Response from Cecelle (Author of Memorable)
I am glad you enjoyed it! I actually like Ron, but he can be rather clueless in a relationship! ;o)
Response from Marty21 (Reviewer)
Yes I agree Ron can be rather clueless especially when it comes to figuring out Hermione lol
LOVE this. I was talking about giving someone coal for Christmas and that they could put it under huge pressure and make themselves a diamond. Even better with magic!
Response from Cecelle (Author of Memorable)
GMTA! ;-) Glad you enjoyed it!
He he, too cute. The gift of coal could've been taken to another level, but nice the way you took it!
Response from Cecelle (Author of Memorable)
Yes - there could have been a fair amount of fun to be had with the "naughty Hermione" angle. ;0) Glad you liked it!
So very lovely and heartwarming!
Response from Cecelle (Author of Memorable)
Thank you,
Response from Cecelle (Author of Memorable)
! I'm so pleased that you liked it!
Beautiful and bloody brilliant. So in character for all three!
Response from Cecelle (Author of Memorable)
Awww - thank you!
wonderful story!