Chapter Five: Perfect Moments are Few
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ReviewedChapter Five: Perfect Moments are Few
She started in the dark, unsure what had woken her. She groped for her wand to cast a Lumos or light a candle when it came again, a light knock. On her partially open bedroom door. She blinked. Almost no one had free access to her suite. Only two people besides herself, and neither of them were in the castle that night. Or neither of them was supposed to be.
"Yes," she called out just as her wand slid into her hand.
The door opened a bit wider. "Minerva? It's me."
"Albus?" She waved her wand and lit her bedside lamp as she sat up and Albus stepped into her bedroom. "You're back."
"Yes. It is late, but I'm back."
"What time is it?" She sat up further.
"Almost two. I was in Copenhagen. I did not want to be in Copenhagen."
"Your meetings went very late?"
"Until almost ten. There were drinks after. You know the sort of thing."
Minerva nodded as she folded her covers back. "You shouldn't Apparate after drinking. Or did you Portkey?"
"I Apparated, but I'd only had one Gillywater just after the meeting. Hours ago." He stepped closer to the bed. "You got my note? And the package?"
"Yes. I loved the Charmed globe. It was beautiful. In your note, you said you were going to Stockholm. When you weren't back in the evening, I didn't expect you until morning." She Summoned her robe from where it lay across her vanity bench. Albus caught it and held it up for her to put on.
"We were in Stockholm, but we had to meet with Sørensen, and he isn't well and can't travel, so we all went to Copenhagen. Olsen's Portkey was one of the worst I've had in a while. I was almost ill afterward. I should have Apparated, but I thought it might be rude of me."
"Did you need to see me about something urgent?" Minerva asked as she tied the sash of her robe loosely around her. She was glad he was there, but at two in the morning, she presumed he needed to see her for some reason other than her company.
"I could wait until the moment were perfect. I could bring you two dozen roses and a box of the finest chocolate truffles with a diamond necklace hidden amongst the sweets. I could woo you and court you for a year, and then finally, in candlelight and surrounded by the sweet scent of fresh flowers, finally then make love to you. I would do that. And I would wait that long or longer. But I have learned that perfect moments are few, and I have no roses, no chocolate truffles, no diamond jewellery: I have only myself to present you tonight." He reached out and caressed her face. "I promise you many roses, many moonlit strolls, many chocolate truffles, and many little trinkets to delight the eye or to adorn the wearer, but tonight, if you wish it, could still be the perfect night for us. The perfect night for madness." He stepped closer. "I would like to continue our madness, Minerva," he said softly. He kissed her lips, then drew back and looked down into her eyes.
Minerva made no reply but to return his kiss with one of her own, and when his hands slipped beneath her robe, she shrugged it off, letting it fall to the floor.
Albus continued kissing her, embracing her and caressing her through her nightgown. Minerva's hands went to the front of his cloak and undid the clasp at his neck. It hadn't yet slid to the floor before she began to unhook the fastenings of his over-robe. Albus paused a moment to step back and touch the hidden hook at his upper left shoulder. With that, the rest of the hooks on the robe unfastened, and Minerva slipped her hands beneath it to push it off as Albus returned to his kisses.
Albus stepped forward, urging Minerva toward the bed, and when they reached it, he pushed her down to lie beneath him as one hand groped for the edge of her nightgown, pulling it up. He rolled off of her and bent to remove his short boots before kneeling in front of her dangling legs and beginning to kiss his way up them, pushing her nightgown back as he did so. Minerva let out a low moan as his fingertips began to tease her inner thighs and his lips followed. His head almost reached her crux, and Minerva waited for his touch there, but he stood before he reached her. Minerva opened her eyes and propped herself on one elbow, any questions evaporating before they reached her lips, as she watched Albus stripping off the remainder of his clothing.
His erection was full, and his gaze was intense as he reached for her. He pulled off her nightgown and moved her further onto the bed. Minerva embraced him as he came to lie fully on top of her, and they resumed their kisses, passionate, needy kisses. Albus's fingers began to dance lightly over her skin, and he moved slightly off of her so that they could reach her crux and begin their teasing touches there.
Albus's touch ignited her desire, and Minerva gasped. His lips found her nipple, and he alternated between her breasts, kissing, licking, sucking, as he continued to pleasure her with his fingers, never pausing until he felt her spasm and pulse, crying out as she came. His mouth returned to hers in a passionate kiss, and Minerva clutched at him, whimpering in her desire for him. He shifted, and the head of his cock replaced his fingers at her clitoris.
"Oh, oh, oh, Albus, yes, yes!"
Albus hovered above her, the head of his cock placing only the lightest pressure upon her clitoris.
"Do you have passion for me, Minerva? You have passion, do you have passion for me?" he asked urgently.
"Yes, yes, I do! I need you," she moaned. Her fingers grasped his buttocks as she raised her hips, trying in vain to bring her closer, as close as they could become, to make them one, but Albus was stronger than she.
"Show me, Minerva. Show me," Albus growled. He thrust, sliding down over her clitoris and entering her warmth.
"Ah! Ah, yes!"
Minerva rocked her hips, but Albus buried himself in her, held her tightly, and rolled over, bringing her on top of him.
"Show me your passion, Minerva! Show me! Show me your passion!"
Minerva needed no more encouragement, and she rose up, sliding, rocking, and rubbing herself against him. Her gasps and moans quickened, and Albus's arousal grew as she approached her climax.
"Yes, Minerva, yes, yes, Minerva!"
"Ah, ah, ah, ah, aaaaah!" Minerva shuddered as she came, and as she peaked, pulsing around his cock, Albus rolled her over onto her back.
Albus began to thrust, extending Minerva's orgasm as she bucked against him. He drove in one final time and climaxed, and Minerva's gasping cries became soft, sweet whimpers of pleasure.
Minerva held onto him, not letting him go even when he made a move to roll off of her. He acquiesced and relaxed, allowing himself to melt into her embrace, and letting out a long, soft sigh.
"I love you, Albus," Minerva whispered.
Albus let out a low, satisfied hum, then he roused himself sufficiently to turn his head and kiss the side of her jaw. "Mmmm. Love you, too. Love you very much." He sighed again, content to let her run her hands over his back and through his hair, and assumed she would let him know if he became too heavy for her or she couldn't breathe.
"I'm glad you're here," Minerva finally whispered, giving him a squeeze.
"Much better than Copenhagen."
Minerva laughed. "That's reassuring to know."
"The hotel room was cold and the artwork on the walls was hideous."
Minerva laughed again.
"I would have had nightmares, I'm sure," Albus said, raising up on one arm to look down into her smiling face. "If I could have fallen asleep for thinking of you."
He kissed her gently, then equally gently moved off of her, though he stayed close, skin to skin.
"I'm chilly now," Minerva said.
"Can't have that." Albus raised his free hand and Summoned the bedclothes to cover them both. He snuggled closer and nuzzled her hair.
"I should get you another pillow," Minerva said, beginning to sit up.
"No need. Don't go anywhere. I'm quite cosy as I am. Unless you aren't."
Minerva turned toward him and put her arm around him. "As long as you are. I know you're not used to sleeping with someone." She felt herself blush. "Well, that is, I presume..."
"Not for a long time, but I'm very comfortable right here, right now, with you, my dearest," Albus said. He yawned and Summoned his watch from the pile of robes on the floor. "Mmm. It is, however, almost three in the morning. Shall I stay?"
"Of course you will stay. Unless you have some very good reason not to," Minerva replied, holding him a bit more tightly, "I would like you to stay."
Albus shook his head. "My deputy knows where to find me if she needs to. She's a very clever witch, you know. And quite attractive, too. She's probably got several wizards pining for her at any given moment."
Minerva smiled and shook her head.
"I know for a certain fact, however," Albus continued, looking quite innocent, "that there is one wizard who is no longer pining. He's recently become the very fortunate recipient of the lady's favours."
"Hush, Albus. Silly wizard!"
"Yes, a silly wizard was he. Didn't think she was interested in him, and he probably could have been a fortunate wizard much sooner if he hadn't been so silly. But, of course, he's a very modest wizard..."
Minerva slapped his arm playfully. "Don't make fun, Albus," she said, though her eyes sparkled. "I happen to know the wizard in question, and I won't have it."
Albus chuckled. "Very well, my dear. But truly, you must leave many a suitor weeping in your wake."
Now Minerva laughed. "Never."
"And what of Madoc?"
Minerva was quiet for a moment. "What of Madoc?" she asked him.
"I am sure he was weeping in your wake."
"I don't think this is the best time to be speaking of Madoc," Minerva said.
"You never speak of him. There would be no good time to speak of him, if you had your way, Minerva. You wouldn't talk about it at the time, and even when I asked you something innocuous about him a few months ago, you changed the subject very adroitly."
"What is there to say?"
"You never said why you broke off your engagement to him, other than something about his 'suitability.' And from what I have gathered from Evander, you never really even explained it to to his brother. He seemed a good man."
"Of course he is," Minerva said softly. "I didn't wish to hurt him. There was nothing I could tell him that wouldn't have made it all worse. His heart was already broken. Nothing I could have said would have helped that."
"So . . . will you break my heart?"
Minerva shook her head. "You may break mine, though," she whispered. "And that is why there was nothing I could tell him. How do you tell a man that whenever you are with him, no matter what it is you are doing, there is another with whom you would prefer to be? I wasn't in love with you then . . . not yet. But I could not marry a wizard when I would rather play chess with another man than make love to the one whom I was engaged to. To prefer to sit in the company of another, to rather do nothing with another than to do anything with him . . ." Minerva sighed. "And that realisation is what brought me to my moment of madness the other night."
Albus looked at her, trying to comprehend what she had said. "But . . . that was more than three years ago."
Minerva shrugged. "Moments of madness have their own time, you know. You can't schedule them, more's the pity."
"Oh, I think we could learn to schedule them quite well, now that the first one is taken care of. It is true you cannot rush them, but once in play . . . one simply must take them in hand, rather like . . . this." Albus moved his hand to her breast and squeezed gently, then caressed her nipple with the side of his thumb. "I did manage my own moments of madness rather well, I thought," he said softly as his lips approached hers.
His kiss lingered, but then he drew his hand back down her side to rest on her hip. "What do you say to some sleep, hmm, my dear?"
"Yes," she said with a sigh. "Sleep." She smiled. "And tomorrow, you can teach me how to engineer more moments like this."
Albus waved his hand and the lamp went out. "What are you doing on Sunday afternoon?" He asked a few minutes later.
"Hmm?" Minerva asked drowsily. "Sunday?"
"I am visiting my mother for tea in the afternoon. I thought perhaps you might like to meet her," Albus said, trying not to sound hesitant, but not succeeding.
"Of course I would! Yes, that sounds lovely. If, of course, she wants to meet me."
"She will be glad to. Every time I've visited recently, she asks when I'm going to finally bring you to tea. It will make her very happy."
"She sounds delightful."
Albus hesitated. "Not really. I love her, and I find her delightful, but she's a bit . . . crusty sometimes. Just a little gruff. But she'll like you, so that will put her in a very good mood."
"Why did she ask when you were going to bring me to tea?"
Minerva could almost feel Albus's blush.
"Oh, just . . . I've just mentioned you a few times," he said.
"Ah."
"Actually, last month, she told me I had better bring you soon, as she would rather talk to you than hear about you."
Minerva chuckled. "Well, let's make her happy, then. Tea on Sunday with Madam Dumbledore. I shall put it in my calendar."
Albus kissed her cheek. "Good night, my dear."
"Good night, Albus. I do hope that you don't evaporate as I'm sleeping and I awake to find it's been a dream."
"No, not a dream, my love, merely madness."
~ The End ~
Author's Note: Dh disregarded.
If you enjoyed this little fic, you might enjoy "A Light at Dusk," an unrelated ADMM one-shot.
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31 Reviews | 8.03/10 Average
Very cute. You did a wonderful job demonstrating how easy their friendship was. The conversation flow was so smooth. That's just what I noticed the most.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
*cries again* Could this be any sweeter? Any more humerous Dumbles? Anymore tender between the two of them? And could it be any steamier? NO, you say? Well - glad we agree on that! Now I MUST get some sleep - tomorrow is a long day ... *dozes remembering some delicious madness*
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
I'm very glad that you enjoyed the humor, the steam, and the sweetness! :-) Thanks!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
My tea boileth over ,,, is that even a word? NO? Well ... I do declare it thus, a WORD! *nods sagely*
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
I'm very glad that you enjoyed the humor, the steam, and the sweetness! :-) Thanks!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
My tea boileth over ,,, is that even a word? NO? Well ... I do declare it thus, a WORD! *nods sagely*
Did I ever mention how amazing this is? NO? Really? *feigns shock*Then I shall say it here... clearly... so you don't misunderstand.... this is AMAZING. Simple, revealing, encompassing, truthful to the characters, and so very, very, tender... and I love how they admit they've each been in love with each other for years - and how they are both laughing at the other... and how Albus is just a bit timid - asking if she'll break his heart, when she's actually worried he might - as he's teased her in the past - its just so very endearing... Now, enough of all that.OK - I'll turn back into the crusty, gruff fish that you know so well and stop being such a mush. *winks*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I lied.*snip*“Not for a long time, but I’m very comfortable right here, right now, with you, my dearest,” Albus said. He yawned and Summoned his watch from the pile of robes on the floor. “Mmm. It is, however, almost three in the morning. Shall I stay?”“Of course you will stay. Unless you have some very good reason not to,” Minerva replied, holding him a bit more tightly, “I would like you to stay.”Albus shook his head. “My deputy knows where to find me if she needs to. She’s a very clever witch, you know. And quite attractive, too. She’s probably got several wizards pining for her at any given moment.”Minerva smiled and shook her head.“I know for a certain fact, however,” Albus continued, looking quite innocent, “that there is one wizard who is no longer pining. He’s recently become the very fortunate recipient of the lady’s favours.”“Hush, Albus. Silly wizard!”“Yes, a silly wizard was he. Didn’t think she was interested in him, and he probably could have been a fortunate wizard much sooner if he hadn’t been so silly. But, of course, he’s a very modest wizard—”Minerva slapped his arm playfully. “Don’t make fun, Albus,” she said, though her eyes sparkled. “I happen to know the wizard in question, and I won’t have it.”Albus chuckled. “Very well, my dear. But truly, you must leave many a suitor weeping in your wake.”Now Minerva laughed. “Never.”*snip*I BLOODY LOVE THAT! That is all.
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So whenever
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gets grumpy, a dose of fluff will make her mushy? Must make note-to-self about that! I'm glad you enjoyed that little exchange. They do very much enjoy each other, and that includes a bit of mutual teasing of various sorts.Thanks for the review!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“And what of Madoc?”Minerva was quiet for a moment. “What of Madoc?” she asked him.“I am sure he was weeping in your wake.”“I don’t think this is the best time to be speaking of Madoc,” Minerva said.“You never speak of him. There would be no good time to speak of him, if you had your way, Minerva. You wouldn’t talk about it at the time, and even when I asked you something innocuous about him a few months ago, you changed the subject very adroitly.”“What is there to say?”“You never said why you broke off your engagement to him, other than something about his ‘suitability.’ And from what I have gathered from Evander, you never really even explained it to to his brother. He seemed a good man.”“Of course he is,” Minerva said softly. “I didn’t wish to hurt him. There was nothing I could tell him that wouldn’t have made it all worse. His heart was already broken. Nothing I could have said would have helped that.”“So . . . will you break my heart?”Minerva shook her head. “You may break mine, though,” she whispered. “And that is why there was nothing I could tell him. How do you tell a man that whenever you are with him, no matter what it is you are doing, there is another with whom you would prefer to be? I wasn’t in love with you then . . . not yet. But I could not marry a wizard when I would rather play chess with another man than make love to the one whom I was engaged to. To prefer to sit in the company of another, to rather do nothing with another than to do anything with him . . .” Minerva sighed. “And that realisation is what brought me to my moment of madness the other night.”Albus looked at her, trying to comprehend what she had said. “But . . . that was more than three years ago.”Minerva shrugged. “Moments of madness have their own time, you know. You can’t schedule them, more’s the pity.”And that, I love that! LOVE it - epecially - more's the pity! Now forever, if I hear that phrase, I'm thinking of Minerva! HAHA!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Hear "more's the pity," think of Minerva, think of moments of madness . . . maybe it could be a cure for a gray day? I'm glad you love it! (It really can be fun to see bits of the story through your eyes!)Thanks!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*winks* Through my eyes it must look quite extrordinary!
*snip*Pomona was glad to see Minerva at her door, so much so that she put her arms around Minerva and gave her a hug. Minerva was not a hugger, but she patted Pomona’s back and tried not to stiffen up too much.LOLA wistful chapter.... anxiety, wondering, hoping, waiting.... and alas.... no Albus... I know what that feels like.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Yes, Minerva's not a hugger -- unless it's with Albus, of course! Then it's full-on, whole body hugging time! ;-)The waiting and hoping leads to a lovely reuniting!
*snip*“Mrrrorrrww!” Minerva complained, dancing about at Albus’s feet.Tee hee...I also love Albus' claim that walking with her is the highlight of her day and that he looks forward to spending time with her daily... or the highlight of each of his days is spending time with her, or what ever it was he said - I liked it.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Glad you liked that assertion!Minerva really was quite the feline there!Thanks!
Now (almost midnight) I finally read your wonderful story! Thank you so much for telling me about it! It's really good! Even better than the other one! Will you write a sequel about Minerva meeting Albus' mother? That would be very interesting I think ... even if it wouldn't be that romantic ... ;-) But pretty funny ... THXGod bless you!Thara
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Thank you, Thara! I thought it might be to your taste. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have considered a sequel, but I'm in the middle of so many writing projects right now, I don't think my brain could accomodate another one! LOL! But maybe someday.Thanks very much for your review.
Squeeeeeeeee! Oh, how I love this. You know, I noticed how Albus didn't worry over his weight on Minerva after they made love, where RAM-Albus always did until Minerva told him she loved the feel of him on top of her. The subtle differences are so endearing.I also really love the banter between then after their lovemaking. It just seems so natural. Thank you for this!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
You're very welcome! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!This is a kind of AU RaM!Albus -- what would have happened if he hadn't married Dervilia, but had instead searched for and found his father after leaving Hogwarts rather than marrying and beginning an apprenticeship, and a few other key differences -- including that although he does meet and study with Nyima, and he lives beside Mother Dragon, Mother Dragon survived the attack by the bandits, so no mated wands, either. A few subtle differences in the events in his life made a difference in the way he turned out to be. And obviously, this version never dreamed of becoming involved with Valerianna! LOL! It was really fun to explore this Albus and Minerva and their relationship, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.I'm glad that you liked the banter between them!Thanks for the reviews! I appreciate them! ('Cause you love dragons! ;-))
Aww, I have some complicated feelings for Minerva here. I am glad he sent her the enchanted music box, it sounds wonderful. But I am also sad for Minerva, missing him so after a long night and groggy morning.Though I imagine he is missing her. It is evident that he is definitely thinking about her when she isn't around if the music box made him decide to purchase it just for her. =o)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
I'm sure he is missing her! And obviously thinking of her!I'm glad you liked the enchanted box! :-)Thank you for the lovely review!
Nooooooooo, not later, now! Poor Minerva, THAT has to be frustrating. AARgh. I am very glad I am reading this now so I don't have to wait, lol.AND, the kisses from behind gave me chills... again! I lurve that scene. *Happy sigh*
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Ah, yes, those kisses! I'm glad you liked those!You are a lucky gal, not having to wait for the next chapter to be posted! I am sure that Minerva was very frustrated! Little dancing guy is so cute!Thanks for the review!
Oh, I love the way Albus tells her she is the cure for all his burdens. I know he is good at stating his feelings in obscure ways without coming right out with it bluntly. Though I do like when he does that too, sometimes.This is such a sweet fic. =o)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Aw, thanks! He'll get a bit blunter! LOL!I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for the review!
Reading this makes me sort of long to read RAM again. I have the familiar song: Fever, going through my head again, lol. It was a bit awkward when Albus didn't seem affected by her moment. But, then, he is always the reserved one, though he does have his moments, too. =o)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Minerva certainly moved on to another subject quite quickly, didn't she? Eeep!I recently reread a large amount of RaM -- I had a new and enthusiastic reader ask a question about one of the early chapters, and I had to go back and look at it to see what she was talking about -- and then I just kept reading it. LOL! It was fun to reaquaint myself with the origins of the RaMverse and to see early RaM!Minerva and RaM!Albus. It was really fun to write a non-RaM!ADMM get-together fic -- two, actually, as "A Light at Dusk" is also non-RaM -- and explore slightly different versions of the same characters.I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks very much for the review.
How utterly romantic and very Albus-like ... to confess his feelings to Minerva on a rainy day in Scotland by the window. The image that creates in my head is very vivid and you did an excellent job of it. I was afraid he would lose his nerve when he said it was wrong but quickly breathed a sigh of relief when he moved things to the couch. tee hee. Now, if only he hadn't thought of dessert. I'm looking forward to MORE MORE MORE!!Happy New Year!the GLM
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
I am sure that Albus enjoyed teasing Minerva with the "this is wrong" remark, too. haha! But he did very qucikly reassure her!Thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying your little gift fic! Happy New Year!
When I started reading this I was really confused trying to figure out why Albus in 1961 would be somewhat uncomfortable in Minerva's presence and not take immediate advantage of Minerva's "momentary madness". I have gotten so used to (and addicted to! ) your RAM-verse that it took a minute to realize this was outside that universe. I like this new look at how Albus and Minerva's relationship develops. It is very romantic. "A moment...is a relative concept" indeed. Looking forward tot the next installment.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
LOL! Yes, I probably should put a bold-print warning that it's NOT RaMverse! It is a different sort of take on AD & MM. I look at it as a kind of AU RaMverse , and Albus has a slightly different backstory.Thanks very much for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I'm ready to read about more madness, momentary or not!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
There will be more coming! I'm visiting family now, but with a measure of foresight I'm proud of , I actaully formatted the chapters the day before I left and I emailed them to myself. LOL! So there will be another chapter up soon!Thanks for reviewing!
*sigh* What a great read for my stay-cation... it helps since Jimmy is sick and we're house-bound for a few days.
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I'm glad I could provide a little entertainment during your stay-cation!I'm finally on vacation after having had the flu, so I"m away, however, I'll try to upload the next chapter for your stay-cation pleasure.Thanks for the review!
Awwww. You know how much I love these vignettes into our common MMADness. And you DID promise that the rating'll change, didnja?
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Oh, I most certainly did promise, most certainly! There are five chapters, so look forward to number five! I'm glad you're enjoying it!Thanks for the review!
But narrow stairways present such lovely chances. but she needs to go first, he's taller... I love this pairing.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Ah, yes, the wonderful opportuinites presented by staircases! ;)I'm glad you love the pairing. :) I enjoy writing them togeher.Thanks for the review!
Aww,a missed opportunity for Albus to kiss Minerva in the rain. ACK! I did pick up on the fact that he tried to give her subtle hints throughout their walk ... telling her that he loved her company and he looked forward to it daily. Sweet of him to say.And I see that the Minerva in this story is very similar to the RaM-verse one in that she doesn't like enclosed spaces, except with Albus, tee hee.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Glad you liked it! It would have been a very uncomfortable kiss, as it wasn't a gentle shower, but a hard, stinging downpour; they'll have to wait for the right rain -- maybe on a warm summer's day? -- for a kiss in the rain. Or else maybe just substitute a shower for the rain! LOL!Yep, Minerva is very similar. I think of this story as being set in a kind of AU-RaMverse , so although there are some distinct differences, they're also very similar, and yep, Minerva's dislike of enclosed spaces is one of them!I'm glad that you are enjoying the little fic! Thanks for the review!
Awesome start to the story and I am very thankful you decided to play Santa. A Momentary Madness is sure to be more than a moment since it's ADMM and you promised a happy ending. tee hee. I felt bad for Minerva when Albus didn't respond. I'm sure he'll make it all better, though. Hoping for an update sooooooon!!!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Hi, Ang! Glad you're enjoying it. I'm not terribly sure about when the next update will be, but as it's 99% written, as soon as I'm able (given RL), I will update for you!Yes, a nice happy ending for you!Happy New Year,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
-- to your other half, too!
Author’s Note: DH disregarded.Oh absolutely, disreguard DH, and HBP as well! *nods nods* I am loving this for the 77th time around! WHOOOOOOOO!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
It's best for my Muse that I disregard DH. In its entirety. But specific bits, especially.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
78th time around and I'm still enjoying this ... wish I could have a Sherry and some cake with Pomona and hang out in the castle ... *pouts*
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Wouldn't that be nice? Especially hanging out in a nice cool castle in nice, cool Scotland. With temps over 90 F and high humidity here, I'd love a Scottish holiday, magic or Muggle!Glad you're still enjoying the little fic!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I won't even go into temperature and humidity down here in July ... in the swamp ... fuh ... only treefrogs and mosquitos enjoy weather like this. Scotland castles would be glorious!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
It's best for my Muse that I disregard DH. In its entirety. But specific bits, especially.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
78th time around and I'm still enjoying this ... wish I could have a Sherry and some cake with Pomona and hang out in the castle ... *pouts*
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Wouldn't that be nice? Especially hanging out in a nice cool castle in nice, cool Scotland. With temps over 90 F and high humidity here, I'd love a Scottish holiday, magic or Muggle!Glad you're still enjoying the little fic!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I won't even go into temperature and humidity down here in July ... in the swamp ... fuh ... only treefrogs and mosquitos enjoy weather like this. Scotland castles would be glorious!
This was an adorable end to the story - I love Minerva's pet name for Albus. Silly wizard, indeed! I also liked the way that Albus comforted Minerva about Madoc and the meaning of perfect moments, especially since this is certainly a perfect moment for Albus and Minerva. The lemon was certainly a lovely one, too. The story behind Minerva's engagement with Madoc sounds like an interesting one, although it doesn't seem to have ended well. The universe in this story sounds a little different from the RaM-verse.I do wonder what Madam Dumbledore is like! No doubt Minerva will find tea with her interesting, especially if she's as crusty as Albus says she is, although he does like her.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Yes, both Minerva and Albus, but particularly Albus, are a bit different here than in the RaMverse. Many things that happened in the RaMverse that shaped Albus's self-perceptions didn't occur in MomMad -- in particular, he never had the misfortune of getting to know Valerianna! Also, as you noticed, his mum's still alive and kicking, unlike in the RaMverse. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Yes, both Minerva and Albus, but particularly Albus, are a bit different here than in the RaMverse. Many things that happened in the RaMverse that shaped Albus's self-perceptions didn't occur in MomMad -- in particular, he never had the misfortune of getting to know Valerianna! Also, as you noticed, his mum's still alive and kicking, unlike in the RaMverse. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Ah, this is lovely. One knows what's coming, which somehow makes the journey there all the more sweet.The sense of two friends who have fallen in love and are moving gently into a new relationship is so nice here. I particularly loved this bit:<i>“You do know that I love you, don’t you?” Albus asked softly.Minerva nodded slightly, knowing that he did, but hoping he wasn’t merely teasing her with his embrace and his gentle kisses, hoping they meant what she had intended the previous evening when she had kissed him.</i>I like this decisive Albus, and I like that he gets just a little carried away here. (Fans self.)I also love the little hints of backstory about Albus and Professor Dippet that you slip into this chapter; things like that make a short story so much richer, I think.<i>“I admit to having a healthy appetite this evening, myself.”</i> Is it terribly naughty of me to think of this as a double-entendre?
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Oh, terribly naughty of you! But in a good way!I'm glad you're enjoying this story. It was fun to write a more decisive, assertive Albus in this fic -- one who gets a bit carried away!Many thanks!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Oh, terribly naughty of you! But in a good way!I'm glad you're enjoying this story. It was fun to write a more decisive, assertive Albus in this fic -- one who gets a bit carried away!Many thanks!
Albus is too adorable! *hums with delight* And I'd love to meet Madam Dumbledore... I have an odd feeling she'd be a lot like Madam Tyree. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
They might have a few things in common, 'though Madam Dumbledore is a bit more crusty (my mental version of her for this story, anyway), and mercurial. I probably wouldn't want to see the two of them get into an argument. Or wait, maybe I would. Pop the corn! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*grins* Ahhh, now you HAVE to write it! *grins* More crusty than Madam Tyree? *blinks* Wow.....
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
That would have to be a cross-universe cat-fight, er, debate, since Madam Tyree is only in the RaMverse, alas! LOL!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*chuckles* yes, wouldn't happen - I meant that you must write more on Momentary Albus/Minerva life - and introduce crusty Madam Dumbledore - no no, don't want the Tyrees and Dumbles cat fighting - heaven's no! You silly! Drink your coffee woman! *winks*
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
How could you tell I hadn't had enough coffee yet today??? I've occasionally thought about doing a short sequel to MomMad, but I've not had the writing space to do so. I need to concentrate on my other RL writing project, and after I've made some headway, I'm returning to CSG, so we'll at least be seeing more of Madam Tyree soon!
Albus has got to be the most romantic wizard in the whole world. Tje speech he gave to Minerva about perfect moments was perfect and priceless. That, I'm sure, meant more to her than any roses, jewelry, truffles, or trinkets. The lemony bits between them were wonderful and very well written. Of course, you always do a grand job of writing them together.I couldn't have asked for a better story. It was truly wonderfu and very enjoyable!Thanks,the GLM
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Momentary Madness)
Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed the little fic I wrote for you, since you were missing ADMM, and ADMM lemony fluff, in particular. :-)I'm glad you liked Albus's speech about perfect moments. I sometimes think that some of the most romantic moments are the ones that don't have any of the traditional romantic trappings -- though those are certainly nice!You're welcome for the story! It was fun for me, too, especially to "rediscover" writing ADMM in a different get-together fic than RaM.