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A Slytherin Seduction

1: The Yule Ball

2: The Ministry of Magic

3: Another Christmas Gathering

4: The Good Old Writing Desk

5: The Malfoy Cellar

6: Equals

A Slytherin Seduction

morgaine_dulac

32 Reviews   |   32 Ratings, 0 Likes, 13 Favorites )

Erotica Smut Malfoy Manor 18,972 Words 6 Chapters Complete
Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy

Lucius beds a young belle, and he is making sure she will leave his bed satisfied. COMPLETED

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Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: The Yule Ball

Chapter 2: The Ministry of Magic

Chapter 3: Another Christmas Gathering

Chapter 4: The Good Old Writing Desk

Chapter 5: The Malfoy Cellar

Chapter 6: Equals


About morgaine_dulac

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morgaine_dulac

Member Since 2008  |  52 Stories  |  Favorited by 122  |  948 Reviews Written  |  2,443 Review Responses

Born: in the glorious year of 1979, when Dio joined Black Sabbath and Peter Pettigrew started passing on information to the Dark Lord

Colours: black, green, silver

Passions: writing, cooking, baking, witchcraft

Obsessions: quite a few, chocolate for one (hi Lupin!), but mainly a certain Potions master and a blond DE.

When I am not writing alone, I co-write with my favourite Ravenclaw star_girl. Look for sevs_starsisters to find our stories.

Published writer since 2014. Original fiction is good fun, but I find myself returning to fan fiction every now and then 

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Reviews for A Slytherin Seduction

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10/10

loreen77

Smutty and wonderful. I loved it!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

I love writing Lucius, especially when he is being this sexy. :)

10/10

loreen77

Well done. Sexy. Steamy. Smutty goodness. 

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

You cannot imagine how much fun it was to write this story! :)

0/10

Gemini Sister

What a very fitting ending. How the roles were reversed lol. Delicious story from beginning to its ending.

Your OC had a very fine tutor and with such a master of the art of seduction and sex how else could it turn out.

As you said "All things come to an end." this ending was very fitting indeed for us all including Lucius and your OC too.

I have really enjoyed reading this whole story in one go. And must get some sleep as it is very late or perhaps very very early.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Hope you slept well. Or did you have naughty dreams?Wildcard's response: Naughty dreams - ne? Big grin. But yes Lucius has shown up more recently in my dreams much to the annoyance of Severus.

0/10

Gemini Sister

Loved this whole scenario where Lucius had to look for his red head. Then there was his old writing desk . Another very hot and very erotic scene from both viewpoints.

I think your OC is beginning to take the lead even though Lucius likes to remain in firm control.

Oh and of course Lucius has to have an abundance of strange equipment in his celler from wracks to thumbscrews no doubt lol.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Oh, I was considering keeping the two in the cellar and let them explore what's down there. But I thought dear Lucius needed to lie down. Wildcard's response: Oh yes he needs to lie down but not on his own. LOL.

0/10

Gemini Sister

Oh my I thought Narcissa would discover the pair - naughty Lucius. The writing desk will never be the same again. Heh.

The fluff seemed to be a bit more serious for Lucius this time he wished to be in more control and be more dominant.

Did he see her name in the Ministry Letter - I wonder. Gosh he has some stamina that man.

Another most delectable chapter. Thanks.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Wonder if there is Wizard Viagra or if Lucius really IS that good...Wildcard's response: I am sure Severus would have worked on a potion for a wizarding Viagra.

I am sure I can see Lucius glaring at you with his lovely grey eyes with disgust. He is all man and has plenty power in his wand!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Oh look, it's a plot bunny!

0/10

Gemini Sister

Wow fans face after that last chapter. The dancing is becoming very very addictive in so many ways. Lucius certainly liked the leather chair and it was new so least it got a good breaking in.

Loving your red headed OC and her coming back for more of Lucius even though he as of yet still has not asked her name or knows it.

Thanks for writing this so enjoyable smut fest - I am enjoying reading it so much.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

And I don't even like dancing... Wildcard's response: Well any "Dancing " with Lucius involved no matter the style or location be it horizontal or vertical. count me in!

0/10

Gemini Sister

No wonder the red head was breathless after the Ministers slideshow while Lucius paid her attention, I was breathless too. As to the next ten minutes, Lucius was in firm control down to the second. Taking risks surely gave them both a huge buzz at the thought they could be caught at any time or overheard.

Another fine chapter. Thanks.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

You're welcome. :-)

0/10

Gemini Sister

Lucius at his very best in his seduction mode. He wants to be perfect but I can't help but wonder if he has an ulterior motive.

A superbly written and very hot sex scene that had me fanning my face to cool down.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

This first chapter was so much fun to write! Not that the others were dull, but it was my first go at Lucius and it was the experience of a lifetime. Wildcard's response: Well I will be in the queue if Lucius is doling out such experiences willy nilly. So happy you "had a go " with Lucius. (Wink).

10/10

The Princes Phoenix

Fantastic, my dear! I am so glad that I found this. Beautifully written and I just loved getting a glimpse into Lucius' mind. Wonderful!! Thank you for helping me by directing me to your stories.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Oh, I loved writing Lucius in this one! The sequel, no, actually the PREquel is percolating. Keep your eyes open. :-)

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Oh, I loved writing Lucius in this one! The sequel, no, actually the PREquel is percolating. Keep your eyes open. :-)

10/10

Annabun

Very hot, very sweet, caring and gentle at the end ... I'll have to let my husband read this, methinks.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Always glad to inspire. *waves to hubby* :-)

10/10

surevesepans

This was absolutely amazing! You write some of the finest smut I have ever read. The ending was surprisingly touching, and I daresay Lucius was the finest teacher anyone could wish for. I was absolutely consumed from start to finish, take that how you will, and look forward to checking out some of your other work (angsty or otherwise) in the future. Sorry about the late nature of my review, it was about 1.30am in the morning when I finished reading it :)~

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

/ShadowDust74/LouiseBrandon

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Hi there! I love it when people do what I tell them ;-) Very glad you enjoyed this little seduction. It was so much fun to write! Welcome to DeLucius, btw! /M

10/10

June W

I'm ready to ditch Narcissa.....  Surely, a clever author can create a suitable "accident" for her, or a public affair with Mr Meubles?  Fingers crossed.  Thanks for the new chapter!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

I think dear Lucius can take care of his wife. I'm sure she'd love to be sent on another shopping trip ;-)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Very smutty, very tasty, and very well written. I love the anonymous woman. It means she comes without any of our preconceptions of how a certain character should act, and lets us focus on the adorable, arrogant Lucius.Thank you.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Thank YOU! Lucius is so much fun to write in this story. Oh, the arrogance. It's both his worst and his best feature. Glad you're enjoying the anonymous OC. She could indeed just be anyone and can behave just as she want. That's fun to write, too. Part 5 is in the making. Hope to see you again.

10/10

Marty21

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

*wipes you off the writing desk" Ciggy? 

0/10

slythkid

Holy 4-letter-word, he can be so conceited. But don't I just love reading such elegantly written arrogance? Merry Christmas!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

There is one 4-letter-word Lucius thinks he does very well. And I like to believe so, too ;)Glad you enjoyed the "elegantly written arrogance". It was a lot of fun to write.Merry Christmas to you, too.

10/10

snitchette

OMG! Lucius should be careful or his head might not pass through the door of the castle with so much self compliment.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

You have to admit, he IS good :PJoyeux Noël.

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

I want to test by myself before I canform a valid opinion. Please send Lucius my way and I'll tell you.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Should Lucius ever stumble into my bedroom, then I am not going to send him anywhere :p

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Selfish woman! Did your mother never teach you to share your toys with the other little girls?

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Haha! You clearly have not met my mother :P

0/10

angelmaple

Wow... that was, um... *swallow hard*I like the second person perspective. :)

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Wow... that was, um... *swallow hard*Is that good? :P

Response from angelmaple (Reviewer)

Yes! :) I was just embarrassed... your writing was so... hot. So yeah...

10/10

JeneaCapp

Well if one can't have Severus .... one can always dream of Lucius. To have them both.... a dream come true. One could not feel any warmer than being wrapped up with two snakes. Yum indeed.Jenea

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

A Slytherin Sandwich ... hmmm!!

Response from JeneaCapp (Reviewer)

Oh Yes!My favorite kind!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Ah, another queue ...

10/10

Marty21

That was HOT!  Excuse me while I open a window for a bit to cool off. Well done!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Mission accomplished. :)

0/10

beaweasley2

Oh what delicious arroggrance he has and I'm sure that this young Slytherin will indeed follow him to his chambers again, and agian.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

I know I would follow him to his chambers, again and again and again ;)

0/10

MuseAmusant

Smug and arrogant as ever, but it that's all part of what passes for Malfoy charm.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

We do love him for his smugness and arrogance, don't we? :)

10/10

sinbad

What an interesting point of view Lucius has.  I wonder if the red-head was Lily?

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

The red-head is three years older than Draco and in Slytherin. So no, not Lily.Are we feeling distracted by any chance? :P

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

Very distracted.  I can't believe Christmas is less than a week away.  The kids are driving me batty.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Christmas came as a surprise this year as well, eh? ;)Brightest Yule blessings to you.

10/10

star_girl

Ah, Lu-Lu. So conceited and arrogant that he cares more for his reputation as a lover than all else. Perfectly written, sis.

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

We do love our Lu-Lu conceited and arrogant, don't we?Hugs to you, sis.

10/10

Sevvy

Wow! There's me thinking my temperature had gone today - no such luck now! As you know, I am not the greatest Mr. Mayfoy fan but, after this, who knows?!Superb smut, my dear - few can compete with such perfection; 'You have experienced perfection, and you will never again settle for less' - if he wasn't so damn smug, there is a danger I might just end up agreeing! :-)

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Isn't his smugness part of his charm?You know, me liking Lucius is all star_girl's fault. When she introduced him in "Star Sisters", I hated the idea of having "my" character hook up with him. But damn, I changed my mind!!Go have a lie-down now, dearest :P

0/10

liviconnor

*fans self*  That is absolutely outrageous smut!  Outrageous in the best of ways, of course.  I like the OC here, because really, the only person I can see Lucius in without some mental yoga is Narcissa.  Your OC, that scandalous nameless woman of mystery, allows us to play outside of wedlock without wrestling with all that /baggage./  Also, I kind of like her.  Seems like she's got a sense of humor, and some serious Slytherin chutzpah.  And it's fun, isn't it?  So if your muse finds herself inspired by the smut fairies, by all means indulge her, and us, to your heart's content!

Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of A Slytherin Seduction)

Hi! What a lovely review to start the day with! I was starting to think no one liked this. I like my OC, too, and I love your description "scandalous nameless woman of mystery". It fits so well :-) I didn't give her a name or a background since I think that the Lucius of this story would really not give a hoot! He's far to arrogant here to lower himself to such trivialities like asking for her name. I very much intend to indulge the muse at some point. Lucius had some nice ideas at the end of chapter three. Too nice ;-) Again, thanks for your lovely review. Hope to see you soon again.

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