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Potions Under Duress You Only Cross My Mind in Winter
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You Only Cross My Mind in Winter

1: I. Pathetic Pilgrim

2: II. Irresolute Past Present

3: III. Frozen Fantasies

4: IV. Reckless Reality

5: V. One Lost, Found

You Only Cross My Mind in Winter

Subversa

83 Reviews   |   83 Ratings, 0 Likes, 63 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 5,692 Words 5 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

He makes this pilgrimage every year at Christmas, but nothing ever comes of it. Will it be different this year?

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: I. Pathetic Pilgrim

Chapter 2: II. Irresolute Past Present

Chapter 3: III. Frozen Fantasies

Chapter 4: IV. Reckless Reality

Chapter 5: V. One Lost, Found


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Subversa

Member Since 2005  |  33 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,367  |  226 Reviews Written  |  1,394 Review Responses

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http://subversa.livejournal.com/

Reviews for You Only Cross My Mind in Winter

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10/10

Jinxie

‘Regardless of the question, the answer is yes.’

Nicely ended.

10/10

HBAR

I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy this morning, depite what is going on outside.  This was really good.  I think it helped tremendously that her friends gave him a heads up that his feelings would be reciprocated.  In most stories when they meet and are suddenly a couple, it doesn't really work for me.  But here, they have a history, and shared years of longing to back them up.  I like that there are no grand exclamations of love, they just know it is meant to be. They had no definite destination, except to go there together, no definite planned activity, except to do it together, no immediate intentions to be anything, except together. Beautiful.  Thanks so much for sharing.

Response from Subversa (Author of You Only Cross My Mind in Winter)

I'm so glad it worked for you.  Thank you and Merry Christmas!

0/10

sunny33

Getting him down under the mistletoe was inspired! :)

10/10

karelia

*swoons*When I grow up, I want to be a writer like you.

Response from Subversa (Author of You Only Cross My Mind in Winter)

What a lovely thing to say!  Thank you!

0/10

gersknightlady

That was Yummy,  It's wonderful.  Thanks for the great Christmas gift.

0/10

gersknightlady

Very nice, love it

9/10

gersknightlady

amazing imagery...but so sad and desolate he is.  Good work.

0/10

gersknightlady

Very nice I can see it all in my head.

0/10

gersknightlady

very intregueing (sp?)  Looking forward to more.  very visial, good work.  I haven't read one of your stories in ages.  Your an amazing writer.

10/10

KingPig

"‘Good evening, gentlemen,’ he said silkily. ‘Tell me—will you regret it if I drink the punch?’"

I *adore* this line! So very Snapesque.

0/10

oenthusiast

Thank you for a lovely Christmas story!

10/10

neelix

Oh god... now I'm crying. This was just too beautiful for words and I am totally in love with it. Thanks for sharing something so personal and so perfect.

Five stars doesn't seem enough for this story.Cheer

0/10

zanzi

Delicate and lovely. I'm so sad to see this story end, I have enjoyed it so. Thank you for it. Merry Christmas!

10/10

Clairvoyant

Now I'm sad.  He indulges in fantasies, then berates himself, further deepening his own sadness.  Stop the madness, Subversa!

10/10

Clairvoyant

Now I understand his attraction to her bright light.  He's still so negative, but it's understandable because his demeanor keeps others at bay, no-one seeks out his company.

0/10

Clairvoyant

A sad, yet beautiful start.  I shall be ever hopeful his waiting is not in vain.

10/10

Clairvoyant

Whew!  A tiny sigh of relief upon the arrival of Miss Granger.  It's a small miracle she coerced him into visiting Grimmauld Place, but his desire for love must be stronger than his need for self-preservation.  Having read my fair share of Subversa fics, I know there will be a curve ball thrown at some point.  No full sigh of relief yet.

0/10

WriterMerrin

Oh, so sad that he didn't realize until much later the possibility that she was enjoying his company.

0/10

WriterMerrin

"Dependents or supplicants" How typically Severus!

10/10

sregner

Oh Subversa, my friend, it is so wonderful to see a story from you!  Please, please do not leave Severus and Hermione (and us) wondering for to long....after all it is Christmas luv!

10/10

Nessa

At least he's not alone.

10/10

makaem

Very nice.

10/10

kittyperry

I read the first three chapters on OWL and was delighted to find chapter 4 here. This is a lovely story. I'm so glad he was found by her and that he was willing to accompany her.

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sunny33

That's got to be better than sitting on a cold bench! :)

10/10

neelix

Oh.... so short! I still feel bereft! But at least they're together, in some form, anyway! More... more!!!

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