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Under the Mistletoe

1: Oneshot

Under the Mistletoe

debjunk

16 Reviews   |   16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 9 Favorites )

Humor Romance Potions Under Duress 3,266 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Severus Snape

Severus receives a gift of mistletoe. Who sent it, and who can make it disappear?

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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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10/10

MoreThanSirius

What a lovely way to start off the holiday season at Hogwarts! Seems like eveyone got there smooch in, except for that brave, probably Gryffindor, student in the hallway. Poot thing. I'm quite fond of Narcissa Malfoy at the moment. Such a sweet, thoughtful woman. I do hope they send her a lovely Christmas gift from the two of them!

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

Thanks!  They probably will send her a nice gift.  They owe her quite a bit.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Have a wonderful holiday.

0/10

kimjo2

and she did aquit herself well in the final battle!  lovely bit of christmas fluff, my deb!  thanks and many christmas smoochies under the mistletoe to you

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

:)  Thanks, hon!  Christmas smoochies to you too!

0/10

gersknightlady

Very nice, loved it Great fun.

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

Thank you so much!

10/10

chris7100

Lovely little bit of fluff - I really enjoyed it!

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

I'm so glad you did!

10/10

ClayPotter

That was beautiful. It really choked me up. Thanks for sharing.

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

Thank you!

10/10

snitchette

*toes curlings* That is so sweet and exactly what I needed to make my headache flee. Thank you so much for a nice fluffy thing.

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

Oh, wow!  I've found a headache remedy!  I'm glad it helped and that you enjoyed it.

10/10

sunny33

LOL.  Funny, deb! Loved Hooch making the most of it! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

Thanks, sunny!

10/10

HBAR

What a fun story!  It doesn't matter if we knew it was Hermione all along (duh, those two are so blind sometimes!), it was the fun of him working his way through the Hogwarts women and sweating it out a bit.  At least it only took a kiss to know, or this story could have gotten really dangerous :)  Maybe a bit cruel on the part of Narcissa and Minerva, but they obviously weren't going to come together on their own.  Yay for the Christmas mood!

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

That does have potential to be dangerous!  I think he was quite relieved with the outcome.  Thank you!

10/10

WriterMerrin

Wow, Christmas hotness!  That whole last scene from the moment he felt concern for her was A-MAZ-ING.  My heart is still racing!

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

Aw, gee, thanks, Merrin!  I'm thrilled you thought so!

10/10

Sampdoria

I loved your story, I think Severus was rather cruel in his words to Hermione at the dinner table, I would have loved to kick his sexy behind, but as long as Hermione forgave him, I guess I will too:-))

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

He likes to throw in the digs when he's embarrassed, doesn't he?  Maybe Hermione realized that.  Or maybe she was just so overwhelmed by the truth that everything else prior paled in comparison!

10/10

braye27

This is so sweet!  I loved that this enchanted mistletoe was Severus' Christmas present from Narcissa and Lucius.One brave girl even offered to 'take care of his little problem for him.' She was handed a detention.  You made me laugh out loud!  Madam Hooch and Sybill Trelawney were hilarious, and I think it must have been a while since Severus' sensibilities had been shocked in this way.  But the best of all, of course, was the kiss he and Hermione shared.  POOF!  The mistletoe was gone.  I'd love to have been a fly on the wall when Minerva stuck her head in the hall and informed them, "Ah, I see we've found your soul-mate, then. I'll owl Narcissa and tell her thank you for getting you two idiots to recognize what we've all seen for a long time now."

Happy Christmas to Severus, Hermione, Minerva, Narcissa, Lucius, and all the Hogwarts staff.  And to Debjunk!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

Thanks so much, Beth!  I'm glad you found it entertaining.  I can just see Severus' face when that student offered to help!  LOLBut it all worked out in the end, and it's probably the most action he's gotten in a long, long time!

10/10

indigo_rose

Poor Trelawney, she never finds any love!  Well, not outside of the sherry bottle, anyway...  And I loved how Hooch shamelessly took advantage of Sev--er, the situation!    A fun read all around, and put a smile on my face.  I love Christmas and Valentine fluffy stories.  Thanks for giving me another one to read!

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

I love that category of fic too.  I'm glad you enjoyed this one.  Hooch seems to be an opportunist, doesn't she?

10/10

sregner

YEAH!!!!!  Happy Holidays

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

Thanks!  You too!

0/10

sara lady dalian

Hello Deb - I wanted to tell you that I think the idea for this was interesting.  I don't want you to take this the wrong way, but I felt it was very rushed.  Severus' snark was off-hand and he agreed much too easially to Min's suggestions.  For example, when she suggested that they go to dinner in the Great Hall to see if any opportunity suggested itself, he didn't even put uf a fight.  There were many ways he could have come up with to get the other teachers together to kiss him instead of him leaving the room and having all the females get up one by one and leave, just to return a minute later.  Something tells me that he just should have put up a better fight.  I really liked the premise, though.  *huggles Sara

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

LOL, thank you.  I appreciate your comments.  I can see where it might have seemed rushed.  My Snape gets a little better with each tale.  I'll keep your comments in mind for the next one.

10/10

severuslover

Aww...that was really cute. I loved the different reactions he had to the staff. Very nice idea! Loved it!~Jen

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

LOL, thank you!

9/10

sevibaby

This was really cute.  Definately puts me in the mood.

Response from debjunk (Author of Under the Mistletoe)

Thanks!  Glad it did.

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