Intruder
debjunk16 Reviews | 6.25/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
Severus' wards are down. What does he find?
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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It's a good thing that Hermione is a Griffindor, and can stand up to Severus' inner dunderhead.
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
She really has to do so a lot, it seems.
Too cute! I can totally see Severus having pictures of Hermione hidden in his bedroom.
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
LOL, he's incredibly sneaky...
He's only a dunderhead when it comes to emotions, otherwise he's smart as a whip. This was well done. Could have had a smooch at the end though, not that it isn't complete without it I just like them to smooch. ;) Good read!
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
LOL, I like them to smooch too! This is one of the few stories that I've ended without one. It actually might be the only one! You're right, of course, he's brilliant, he just doesn't have the self-confidence to see something or someone staring him in the face.
That is so right: he can be such a dunderhead sometimes. But ocntrary to j=his students he is quick to understand his mistakes and work efficiently to undo them...
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
So very true! He can be pretty obtuse when it comes to women.
wonderful, my deb! thanks and christmas smoochies
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
*Smooch, smooch!* Thank you my kimjo. Merry Christmas!
I love fics when the Dunderhead is revealed to be a thick-headed Snape, and this has it in spades! Loved this, and in under 500 words. You pack a mighty whollop quickly. AV
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
Thanks so much, AV. I think when it comes to love, this guy is the ultimate dunderhead sometimes. Probably why I love him so much!
cute. in that creepy-stalker kind of way :-P
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
LOL, that's what I was going for. Hermione didn't seem to mind.
I love it! Of course she would have "one or two" pictures of Severus in her bedroom... or five or ten... or more!Good for Hermione for going to find him. And good for you for keeping this under 500 words.Beth
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
Thanks, Beth!I'm sure her walls are just as plastered as his are!
LOL. What a pair of stalkers! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
I know! They deserve each other, don't they?
LoL He was so supecious over nothing! She seemed to like seeing herself on his walls. At least, she got one up on him. Cute. You did a great job on the prompts - several. Bravi!
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
Thanks, bea! He was definitely suspicious for nothing, but wouldn't you be given the circumstances? An ex-spy can never be too careful... then there was all that... stuff... in his room.
ROFL! What a brilliant answer to these two prompts!
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
*Blushes* thanks, hon! Hugs to you.
ooo! creepy stalker snape! love it!! :D
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
Creepy indeed, but for a good cause. LOL!
Response from Twilexis (Reviewer)
coz its hermione and it sates our OTP facination? :P
Response from debjunk (Author of Intruder)
That's the only reason I can think of... 
Response from Twilexis (Reviewer)
there isnt another reason, surely! 