Well, it says this is the first chapter, yet nothing else is posted. Sad to see it go. I like the blend of muggle and magical techniques, etc.

Yikes! I hope there's going to be a Chapter Two! This is really good so far. Hermione's tracking Snape and communicating with her compatriots via the little headset gives this the feeling of an FBI type story. The battle of wits, as much as magic or physical attack, between these two brilliant characters is really interesting.

More!

An interesting beginning. I look forward to further chappies.

Interesting start.

I hope this isn't over!! It looks like the beginning of a very exciting story!