Change of Heart
Chapter 1 of 1
kareliaAbraxas Malfoy has a final talk with his son.
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“Come here, son.”
The old man looked more fragile than he’d ever seen him. Damn. He better not die on me. Not now, with him occupying my home. Can’t he wait till this war is over?
“Yes, Father.” He moved closer and sat down next to the bed.
“Gellert was once a beautiful man, son. A different beauty to yours, but nevertheless, he was beautiful. Everyone admired him, for he had the air of a true leader.” He stopped and took a few shaky breaths.
Please don’t die on me, Father. Hope, though, was leaving him at a steady pace.
“He fooled everyone, at least at first, until that unfortunate accident with the Dumbledore girl. As it always happens—and make no mistake! It does; the truth always prevails—once someone exposed him as a mere power-hungry wizard who would stop at nothing for more power, others followed.” His eyes sought his son’s and rested there in silence.
Why is he telling me that? It’s not as if it’s a secret. Every child knows about Grindelwald! the younger thought, hiding his irritation in respect for the dying man, for he had no doubt his father was drawing his last breaths.
“Grindelwald was bad news, son, but—” his voice deteriorated, and Lucius had to bend down to hear “—your Dark Lord is far, far worse.”
Lucius suppressed the urge to object and instead waited silently for the next words.
“Put your family first, not him. Hasn’t he made you suffer enough yet? Put your family first.” Abraxas closed his eyes, as if in defeat. “The war is about to end. Don’t let evil win.” His eyes sought out his son’s again. “Promise me!”
“I promise, Father,” Lucius said, nodding.
“Good.” Abraxas nodded imperceptibly. “And so I find my peace.”
A/N: Janus’s prompt: Abraxas remembers Grindelwald.
Grateful thanks to astopperindeath and WriterMerrin for the beta.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Change of Heart
14 Reviews | 10.0/10 Average
Glad Lucius listened. in the end.
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
Me too. Thanks for the review and the stars!
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
Me too. Thanks for the review and the stars!
too bad this isn't what reallly happened. well done
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
That's what fanfic is for. :)Thank you!
This is a different look at Lucius, but I like it. I am glad that Abraxas could have his peace.
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
JKR doesn't have enough patience for him. :D
Very nicely done. :) Good take on Abraxas.
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
:) Thanks!
If only Lucius had listen to his father, that would have saved him a lot of trouble.
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
Didn't he? :P
One word, wow. I really liked the way you brought out the similarities and the extent of evil, and also highlighted why the Malfoys were always so committed to their family above all else. Hats' off.
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
I've really come to appreciate your reviews because you always perceive my fics the way I see them myself, which does not happen all that often.Thank you for another thoughtful review!
Response from kittyperry (Reviewer)
Thank you. That's such a compliment because I enjoy your stories so much. xxx
Wow! Too bad he didn't fully listen until it was too late. I was picturing a different son at the beginning here.
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
Didn't he? :PYeah, I was kind of intentionally murky at the beginning and then decided there was no point. *snrk* Damn Saturday night pressure, lol.Thank you, hon! *pats the shinies*
Awwwww. How touching! Great job with the prompt, honey! Much Love ~ Brena
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
*smiles*Thanks, love!
i absolutely love this story. i think it's totally believable! thank you so much for letting me beta!
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
I'm so glad you like it!And thank YOU for betaing it! :D *pats the shiny stars*
Family First. It could almost be a Malfoy Motto. And Lucius responds in kind. Family First, and he listens to his father, with no impatience, no doubt, just concern. Elegance and beauty, all as it should be. And a father leaving wisdom for his son at his side, as it should be. Very Malfoy. This was absolutely wonderful.
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
*smiles*The moment I read your prompt, words started forming in my head... Abraxas sends his thanks to you for allowing the air to be cleared.Lucius sends his thanks for letting him find peace where his father is concerned.<3
Oh, Abraxas considered Grindelwald to be a bad wizard - but Voldemort to be worse. I wish he'd told this to Lucius much earlier. BUt at least Lucius listened to his father's dying wish.
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
If he had told Lucius earlier, I doubt Lucius would have listened. :PThanks for the review!
Wonderful! Now if only Lucius would have listened...
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
:)Didn't he?
This is beautiful. I like the respect and concern Lucius has for his father; and I'm very glad he did listen to him
Response from karelia (Author of Change of Heart)
Thank you very much, Dreamy! *beams*I am, too, glad he listened! :)