An Empty Bed
BrenaMarie16 Reviews | 6.19/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 15 Favorites )
Severus wakes up to an empty bed... Where could his wife be?
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Hello There! My name is Karen and I live right outside of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. Way back in 2006 when we needed to put "Half-Blood Prince" spoilers on our fics... when DH didn't even exist... I created my profile here on The Petulant Poetess.
Falling in love with the SS/HG Ship changed my life and allowed me to be in a position to save the site from extinction in 2019. I'm so grateful to be here and to continue to see the wonderful fic here live on for as long as possible.
Reviews for An Empty Bed
I'm sure that the dreamless sleep will be a thing of the past from now on.
It's so cute that he is woken up by her absence in bed. And I'm sure she won't have any more nightmares. At least for this night...
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
Hey
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
! I'm so glad you liked it! I'm sure that her nightmares will calm down now. Thanks for the review! Much Love ~ Brena
Oh, this is terrific:) I saw where the story was heading but it was so skillfully done that I just enjoyed the journey:) Especially that last comment of Severus's. Very very good:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
Hey
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
! Thank you so much for the review! It always works better when you're writing from a real life script. :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Much Love ~ Brena
Well done. It is a perfectly justified reason for not sleeping! So much in character that they agree and then don't talk about it for 5 years!
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Hey
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
! Thanks for dropping me this review! I always try to bring out their character traits to make these situations as believeable as possible. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks Again. Much Love ~ Brena
giggles. i like it. you've done a good job including enough backstory that the events happening are well supported.
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Hey
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
! Thanks so much for the review! Sometimes it's difficult to get enough information in while sticking to the 1K word maximum for a drabble. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Much Love ~ Brena
Awwww! Poor Hermione going through all those sleepless nights instead of just talking to him! What a sweet solution for her problem. I think Severus' idea is much better than Dreamless Sleep!
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Hey there
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
! Omg, Thanks so much for the review. She really didn't want to fight with him, so she decided to suffer instead. I'm so glad he could give her an alternate solution! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Much Love ~ Brena
Aw, so fluffy and sweet! Nicely done!
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Hey
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
! Thank you so much for the review! I'm sooooo glad you enjoyed it. Much Love ~ Brena
ROFLMAO - That was so cute! And you know, when I wrote the promt, I hadn't even thought of it that way! You always manage to surprise and delight me. Thanks for the wonderful drabble! Hugs and chocolates - Sara
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
Hey Sara! Omg, I'm so glad you liked it!!!! Whenever I take someones prompt I always kinda hope that they enjoy it. Your words seriously warmed my heart. I was so happy to hear that I always "suprise and delight" you. Thank you so, so much for the hugs and chocolate! Much Love ~ Brena
Mm... really interesting concept. I really liked the way you brought it out. I never really thought about children in that way.
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Hey
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
! I'm so glad you liked it. I'm totally guilty of enfusing Hermione with my own personal feelings on the baby situation. My husband and I were cool with not having any kids until people in our family started passing away. Being faced with death apparently woke up my biological clock in a crazy way. Thanks for the review! Much Love ~ Brena
Aww, that is just too sweet. Very nice.
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Hey
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
! Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad to hear you liked it! Much Love ~ Brena
i like your take on this prompt. this prompt was completely open ended, and i like how specific you made the answer. short, to the point, but filled with detail and emotion.
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
Thank you so much! I love it when I can use real life stuff to answer these prompts. Thanks again! Much Love ~ Brena
Mmm, lovely tone here, hon. Poor thing. I'm sure things will be better for her now. 
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
Hey honey! Thanks for the review! You already know things will be better for her now. *wink* Much Love ~ Me.
Awe how considerate. Yep a bit of 'activity' will help her sleep. lol Really cute doll, and you really showed her anxiety and desires to have a baby. I hope it helps stop the nightmares. Good job, hon.
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
Hey bea! Yeah, it does help with the nightmares... I should know! And yes, that extra bedroom activity always contributes to a good nights rest. Thanks for the review. Much Love ~ Brena
Poor Hermione... Nice job with the prompt!
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Hey
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
! Yeah, it sucks for her right now. But at least she finally said something! It'll get easier for her from now on knowing that they're at least trying... I would know. *wink* Thanks for the review. Much Love ~ Brena
This is sweet. I love Severus's concern for her.
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of An Empty Bed)
Hey Dreamy! Thanks for the review! I'm so glad Severus is concerned for his honey! And he came up with an awesome solution too! He's so handy to have around. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Much Love ~ Brena