That was very good. So original, I've not read anything quite like it. I can totally see Trelawny as this obsessive delusional character.

Wow. You did an excellent job. i enjoyed it very very much.

Ooh - very creepy, but I like it!

Absolutely stunningly brillant!!!!!

Know I reviewed this on your LJ, but had to tell you again how freaking fantastic this is!  You really wrote this in such a way that we're creeped out by Trelwaney, but yet it's so dark, so wrong, but we love it!  Well done!

Wow! This was wonderfully dark and twisty. Loved Sybill's demented perspective on the affair. Very original idea, executed brilliantly.

This is so funny. I can hear her every word in her dreamy voice, complete with flailing arms and rolling eyes. I don't usually imagine Snape and Hermione while she is still in school, but you have done a great job depicting the possibility from Trelawney's POV.

Poor Sybill.  Her obsessive/compulsive disorder has gotten worse.  Is there a potion for that?  It is always the obsseively delusional that you have to watch out for.  Creepy!Beth

God, that woman is really crazy. She should go and see a healer, or a psychiatrist. There is that mind illness where people believe themselves in love with another, and are persuaded of being loved in return, when said "another" doesn't even realised they exist. That's propably what she's suffering from.

Fantastic story, original and deliciously creepy! You've made Trelawney's emptiness almost palpable. She's nothing - but a very dangerous sort of nothing. *shivers*

Oh my god. This is bloody brilliant! Twisted and slightly mad, but I would expect nothing less from you, to be frank.Well done. I am totally freaked out!

Yikes, what a frighteningly vivid portrait of blind obsession.... your Trelawney has cast herself as the creepily narcissistic diva of her own self-created drama in which other people only exist to act as a mirror of her own twisted desires.

Well done!

That was kind of creepy. Well done!

Whoa!  Talk about the nut-job going off the deep end!   Now, he did threaten to kill her once...I'm thinking that once he's sprung he should turn her into a rock and call it good.

Dear gods above, someone PLEASE find a comfortable padded cell and sufficient potions to keep her under for the rest of her days !!  There is a certain Blanche DuBois quality about her that's quite unnerving....

Wow... this is super original, and quite frightening.  The Voldemort types I can handle.  It is the crazy, obsessed, delusional types that freak me out.  I appreciate the warning at the beginning, although their relationship was mostly the backdrop to showcase Trelawney and her psychotic tendencies.  It is also quite sad that she feels the way she does about herself.  And, the way she twists everything that he does to be about her. I don't get the impression that she is maliciously trying to come between them.  She truly thinks that they should and will be together.  This was very well done!  Thanks for sharing.

I luv it. Trelawney cracks me up. She came across as so prudish yet not.In the sequel, push her off the tower.... please?

Yikes, what a FREAK.  You convinced me of that, the way you wrote this :)

Holy sh*t, this was deliciously disturbing.

I don't know why, but this strikes me as beautifully poetic.

That was creepy and brilliant. I'm so glad that I  found this!

This fic had me thinking of Possum Kingdom by the Toadies the whole way through. Such a deliciously creepy tale. Well done!

This fic had me thinking of Possum Kingdom by the Toadies the whole way through. Such a deliciously creepy tale. Well done!