Between Two Lungs
theslacker13 Reviews | 6.92/10 (13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 20 Favorites )
The contents of a diary entry left lying open upon a desk are unlikely to remain confidential.
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Thank you, you touched me, right between the lungs. 
This is lovely, romantic and fun. ~happy sigh~
Cool structure! It was really sweet to read the feisty repartee. I even felt an "awww" when they changed their sign off to first names..Thanks for the refreshing read
Response from theslacker (Author of Between Two Lungs)
witty is my preferred flavour of romance.you're welcome. ;)
Very entertaining and well-written. Sometimes stories written in letter format are hard to follow, but this flowed really well.
Response from theslacker (Author of Between Two Lungs)
thank you very much. :D
Very well done! I loved reading the mail, notes. The flow of them really gave a full story (somthing that's hard to do with notes) and it's very enjoyable. The development of the relationship was well done.
Response from theslacker (Author of Between Two Lungs)
thanks. i've avoided letters for so long for the very reason that i didn't trust myself to get it right. i'm glad you liked it.
I scowled, I laughed, I got giddy...! I loved it! I love the way subtleties seem so obvious to Hermione.
Kendra
Response from theslacker (Author of Between Two Lungs)
such reactions! i'm so pleased. hermione, well, after all these months of working closely with him, she's learned to read snape. good thing, too. their relationship probably wouldn't get far if she hadn't.
Response from thedoughymatron (Reviewer)
Too true. Snape's not a man generally prone to displays of emotion other than frustration or anger. If she wants to keep her danity she better know that a lack of snarl is akin to a smile.
Response from thedoughymatron (Reviewer)
Too true. Snape's not a man generally prone to displays of emotion other than frustration or anger. If she wants to keep her danity she better know that a lack of snarl is akin to a smile.
Swapping hearts.... how utterly romatic. My own heart is melting.Loved following this!
Response from theslacker (Author of Between Two Lungs)
please be careful. i'm not sure how well a melted heart works. ;) thank you,
Response from theslacker (Author of Between Two Lungs)
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Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
I've found it's got a really odd, sappy rhythm to it. :)
This is unbelievably, adorably, superbly written. I love, love, love it. I want moooore of course, but I know that it's a oneshot. Drat. I blame you for being so fantastic. This reached out and grabbed me more than anything else I've read in a while. Amazing job! Now I'm off to check out anything else you've written :D
Response from theslacker (Author of Between Two Lungs)
i'm tempted to pull a lockhart. i refrain. thank you very much for your appreciation. i'll try not to let being fantastic go to my head. feel free to check me out as the_slacker on ashwinder, where most of my stuff is posted. i feel i ought to warn you, however, that this is probably the best thing i've done.
aww... this was so lovely, I love litle things like this. Sweet!
Response from theslacker (Author of Between Two Lungs)
thanks. sweetness has its place, doesn't it?
Anonymous
That was fun. I may get out of bed now, even. :P
Author's Response: ha ha. don't let me interfere with a lie-in!
What a lovely, happy jaunt to keep my company in the middle of the horrible night! Thank you so much.
Response from theslacker (Author of Between Two Lungs)
horrible night? oh dear. i'm glad this was a cheery spot. you are most welcome.