Malfoy's Weakness
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sara lady dalianMalfoy's Weakness
King’s Cross always seems to be filled during the end of June. On that particular June day, there was undoubtedly more than one private school being let out. There were also families leaving on holiday. It wouldn’t surprise anyone if there were some business travelers hanging around as well. The point of all this is that King’s Cross station was a very public place. That was why I chose just then for the confrontation.
Everyone remarked how he had changed that year. Oh, he was still sarcastic and haughty, cold and distant–still the perfect Slytherin. But there were also little changes. He had actually smiled at a Quidditch game once–as if he had actually enjoyed himself. A test had occasionally been given back without him teasing Hermione about her perfect grades. But the arguments between Draco Malfoy and his archrival were as intense as ever. That would never change, even after what I was planning to do on that platform. Thank Merlin.
There were sides to him that nobody else ever saw, parts that he guarded assiduously. No one was allowed to know the weakness of the Slytherin Prince. That was my downfall, I guess.
As usual, the Hogwarts Express was unnoticed as it pulled into its berth. How anyone could miss the extra influx of people, I’ll never know, but as I’ve heard many times from other wizards, Muggles just don’t look properly. Everyone was on the platform, but those in the seventh year were hanging around as if they were reluctant to depart. I suppose that’s something that happens most years, but I’d like to think that our class had more reason than most. We wouldn’t stand exactly together, but we would stand near each other. Considering the circumstances and the company, that was an achievement in and of itself.
So, the platform was crowded. Very crowded. Outside the platform, Muggles were running everywhere. Trains were stacked on every line. On the platform, everyone and their parents had congregated. Anyone wanting to enter the barrier had to be extra careful not to let the Muggles notice, and leaving required even more care.
I could tell that he knew I was coming towards him. After all, he was a Malfoy–they were used to constantly guarding their backs. He stored his trunk on a trolley and tested the straps before turning to me.
One summer I went to the drug store for Aunt Petunia. She had called in her order; there was no way she trusted me to pick out what she needed. While I was there, I took the time to look around. After a few minutes I ended up in the hair dye section. I learned that day that his hair color was called platinum blond. I thought it was a bit amusing. I imagined he would expect no less–he had to have the best in everything. For years, I always thought of that hair color box when I looked at his hair.
That same hair was still slicked back, but not nearly as severely. His eyes were still dark grey–and they were still distant. To some, they would always be cold. His attitude was still arrogant, but then, well, he was Malfoy.
There was no surprise in those eyes. Lightening flashes, yes. Recognition, yes. Welcome–surprisingly, wonderfully, yes. Annoyance that I would choose this venue for this confrontation–that was there, too. But no surprise. How could there be?
“What do you want, Potter?” He almost spat out the question. I looked him right in the eye. I knew that he knew what I was up to. There was nothing stupid about Draco Malfoy. Not lately, anyway.
I had practiced what I wanted to say. For all my bravado and Gryffindor courage, I didn’t think I could do it without a run through in private first, with only the mirror to comment. “Draco Malfoy--” Before I could get the rest of my sentence out, he made some smart remark under his breath about Gryffindors having the temerity to use his first name. “Draco Malfoy. Seventh year is over.” I heard him muttering under his breath about stating the obvious, but I ignored him in the interest of keeping my place in a memorized speech. “You said when the year was over. It’s over. Pay up.”
He only raised his eyebrow. “Are you sure, Potter, that you want this particular bet out in the open?” The question was asked quietly, but there was no doubt that nearly everyone heard. Of course he would ask; he had been asking me that question since we struck the bet.
I took another step towards him. “That answer is the same as it always is, Malfoy. Once again, I will remind you that it’s the end of seventh year. Pay up.” My voice cracked there somewhere. Nearly eighteen years old and my voice cracks, great.
He took so long in responding that I began to worry he would back out. Something of my doubts must have shown in my eyes, because all of a sudden, I got my wish. He was standing inches away from me when I felt his fingers tangle in the hair at the collar of my loose robe. But those grey eyes were open when he kissed me. And they were not distant. The silence from the Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaws, as well as nearly all of the parents on the platform, was lost in a roar of approval from the Gryffindors and Slytherins.
“I don’t think we were as discrete as we thought we were, Draco,” I said with a smile pressed against his lips as he pulled a few millimeters away.
“No, I don’t think we were. But right now, I don’t think I care. As I believe I heard someone mention, seventh year is over.” He paused and seemed to savor the moment. “And I’ve been waiting for this day for far too long to care.”
I had always wanted to know what Malfoy’s weakness was. I’m just glad it turned out to be me.
AN: Thanks so much to slytherinlaurel for her beta skills.
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Very nice story. I hope you let us know more about the letter.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
There might be a companion fic describing the letter, but I don't have anything planned. It was a nasty piece of business. Imagine you are a parent with senior school kids. You find out a war is coming and will probably attack their school You immediately write your kid and tell them to get their ass home - but they refuse. What would the letter exchange be like? Not pleasant. And there are clues as to what eventually happened. Thanks for the review - Sara
Anonymous
Very nice chapter with a grown up, mature Ron. I enjoyed it.
Author's Response: He has it in him, I'm sure, somewhere. It just doesn't get to come out and play often. Thanks for the review - Sara
Anonymous
I read this on Ash and thoroughly enjoyed it. Glad to see it up here.
Author's Response: I'm trying to get all my fic up here. It's so much better than it being scattered all over SH. Have a wonderful weekend - and thanks for the review! Sara
Anonymous
Cool. I want to know what the bet was, though. I normally don't like first person point of view, but this was well done.
Author's Response: The boys have never told me what the bet was. *sigh.... I'm glad the first person thing worked for you. The very last chapter of CT will also be first person, though none of the other chapters will be. Thanks for reviewing! Sara
Ah this chapter is so sad. I thought ROn would be more upset about Harry/Draco or Hermione/Severus, but I thik he was just so sad about how everything had changed that it mellowed him. I hope that he finds his feet as they say. I'm really curious about Susan's letter. I hope you do a chaper on her. And Dennis. Not that I'm asking. Strongly asking, hoping, wishing, but not suggesting anything.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
It is sad - however, the sad must balance out the happy. He was more accepting because he had seen so much unhappiness that he realized that any bit of goodness that could be grabbed should be. That is why he was able to let Susan go. He wanted her to be happy. I might do a companion to describe the letter situation, but there won't be a seperate chapter as such. The remaining two scenarios are Nevile/Luna and Blaise/Ginny. Then a final wrap-up involving H/D. Thanks so much for your review Bea! Sara
Oh how cool. He came to the station to see her off? I loved the reactions and interplay between Hermione and her parents. Especially the rub on her dad's bald spot. Cute.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
Thanks so much for reviewing Bea. He did come to see her off. I don't think he intended for her to know that, but he couldn't pass up the opportunity to talk to her again when he saw her alone. As far as the bald spot goes, any dad who can claim Hermione Granger would probably show one very obvious stress sign, wouldn't you think? With smiles and hugs - Sara
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
I just thought that the ruffling of her hair and her rubbing his bald spot was so endearing, toughig. A real show of tender caring between father and daughter. I love little 'personal onlty to them' touches like that. Hugs~
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
As I was writing that part, I thought of my grandfather. He had an old recliner that was His Chair. When one of us sat on it we had to pay a fortieture - he rubbed his knuckles on the top of our head. We called it "skinning head" but it was fun for us. Most of the time, we crawled back up in his lap, sat next to him or at his feet. I can see this being something like that between Herms and her dad. Sara
Oh wow, I didn't see that one coming. Hmmm wonder when they made that bet? LIked the fact that they did it in the open, shocking, but humorous.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
The openness was all Harry's idea! The boys have never even told me what the bet was. *sigh.... I'm still trying to pry it out of them. Thanks for your review. *Hugs and chocolates - Sara
LOL! That is a diferent take on the bets between Potters and Malfoys. Well done!Beth
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
There are several more situations to come between different pairings. Thanks so much for your review. Sara