New Chapter for Crowded Terminals
Crowded Terminals
sara lady dalian8 Reviews | 10.0/10 (8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
Platform 9 3/4 is crowded at the end of 7th Year. Series of scenarios and how they play out for five couples, each complete on their own.
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Very nice story. I hope you let us know more about the letter.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
There might be a companion fic describing the letter, but I don't have anything planned. It was a nasty piece of business. Imagine you are a parent with senior school kids. You find out a war is coming and will probably attack their school You immediately write your kid and tell them to get their ass home - but they refuse. What would the letter exchange be like? Not pleasant. And there are clues as to what eventually happened. Thanks for the review - Sara
Anonymous
Very nice chapter with a grown up, mature Ron. I enjoyed it.
Author's Response: He has it in him, I'm sure, somewhere. It just doesn't get to come out and play often. Thanks for the review - Sara
Anonymous
I read this on Ash and thoroughly enjoyed it. Glad to see it up here.
Author's Response: I'm trying to get all my fic up here. It's so much better than it being scattered all over SH. Have a wonderful weekend - and thanks for the review! Sara
Anonymous
Cool. I want to know what the bet was, though. I normally don't like first person point of view, but this was well done.
Author's Response: The boys have never told me what the bet was. *sigh.... I'm glad the first person thing worked for you. The very last chapter of CT will also be first person, though none of the other chapters will be. Thanks for reviewing! Sara
Ah this chapter is so sad. I thought ROn would be more upset about Harry/Draco or Hermione/Severus, but I thik he was just so sad about how everything had changed that it mellowed him. I hope that he finds his feet as they say. I'm really curious about Susan's letter. I hope you do a chaper on her. And Dennis. Not that I'm asking. Strongly asking, hoping, wishing, but not suggesting anything.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
It is sad - however, the sad must balance out the happy. He was more accepting because he had seen so much unhappiness that he realized that any bit of goodness that could be grabbed should be. That is why he was able to let Susan go. He wanted her to be happy. I might do a companion to describe the letter situation, but there won't be a seperate chapter as such. The remaining two scenarios are Nevile/Luna and Blaise/Ginny. Then a final wrap-up involving H/D. Thanks so much for your review Bea! Sara
Oh how cool. He came to the station to see her off? I loved the reactions and interplay between Hermione and her parents. Especially the rub on her dad's bald spot. Cute.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
Thanks so much for reviewing Bea. He did come to see her off. I don't think he intended for her to know that, but he couldn't pass up the opportunity to talk to her again when he saw her alone. As far as the bald spot goes, any dad who can claim Hermione Granger would probably show one very obvious stress sign, wouldn't you think? With smiles and hugs - Sara
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
I just thought that the ruffling of her hair and her rubbing his bald spot was so endearing, toughig. A real show of tender caring between father and daughter. I love little 'personal onlty to them' touches like that. Hugs~
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
As I was writing that part, I thought of my grandfather. He had an old recliner that was His Chair. When one of us sat on it we had to pay a fortieture - he rubbed his knuckles on the top of our head. We called it "skinning head" but it was fun for us. Most of the time, we crawled back up in his lap, sat next to him or at his feet. I can see this being something like that between Herms and her dad. Sara
Oh wow, I didn't see that one coming. Hmmm wonder when they made that bet? LIked the fact that they did it in the open, shocking, but humorous.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
The openness was all Harry's idea! The boys have never even told me what the bet was. *sigh.... I'm still trying to pry it out of them. Thanks for your review. *Hugs and chocolates - Sara
LOL! That is a diferent take on the bets between Potters and Malfoys. Well done!Beth
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Crowded Terminals)
There are several more situations to come between different pairings. Thanks so much for your review. Sara