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Haunted House

debjunk

14 Reviews | 7.07/10 (14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )

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Hermione's new house is haunted. She's tried everything. Can Severus help?

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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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9/10

apisa_b

What a nasty ghost!To tell the ghost he was gay was a brilliant move - as sending the spectre over for a visit with the ex-lover.:-)

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

It seems that Hermione has a bit of a mean, vindictive streak about her. But I have to admit, Ron deserves it. Thanks!

0/10

kimjo2

yay!!! i love stick it to ron stories with a happy ending! many smoochies, my deb

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

Yes, indeed, so do I! By now Ron is a specter of himself! LOL. Thanks my kimjo!

10/10

braye27

Finally! Yes to declarations of love and yes to kisses. I cracked up when Severus told the ghost lady that he was gay... whatever it took to get rid of her so he and Hermione would have some time together. And Ron deserves what is about to happen.Thanks for a humorous "haunted house" story for Halloween!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

Thanks, Beth! Glad you liked it. I'm always up for a good dig at Ron. Poor guy, he probably doesn't deserve my hate. But I can't help myself, he was such a twit throughout the series.

10/10

snitchette

He needs a near death experience to admit his feelings to her?!!! *shakes head* That man is helpless. As for Ron, he deserves what he'll get.

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

Well, he's emotionally stunted... stilted... whatever the term is! Maybe Ron will like it? LOL

10/10

sunny33

Nasty ghost lady. Hopefully, she'll fancy Ron. :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

I'm sure she will! But will he fancy her?

10/10

karelia

Squee! A romantic story involving a ghost!

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

Oh! I'm so glad you liked it! It wound up being a bit different than I'd originally planned. Crazy muse and characters that run off and take control of your stories!

10/10

astopperindeath

this is so wonderful, deb. what a unique idea! i have this wonderful image of snape covered in blankets and socks. it's making my afternoon :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

I'm telling ya, that ghost had a mind of her own. She grabbed Severus and I was like... uh, oh, this isn't going to be good!

Response from astopperindeath (Reviewer)

lol awesome. gotta love those characters that possess our keyboards just waiting to get out and freeze people to death :-P

10/10

indigo_rose

"Do you like ginger-haired men?" That was the best line! Hell hath no fury like a Hermione scorned! And Ron thought the canaries were bad...

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

He really won't know what hit him, until it's too late. Thanks, indigo!

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sara lady dalian

Wonderful read! Funny, too. You are always good for a laugh and fine story. Chocolates to you! Sara

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

LOL. I had originally thought this would actually be funnier, but then that ghost grabbed Severus and everything got all scary and serious. Thanks, hon!

Response from sara lady dalian (Reviewer)

Is that what you meant last night when you said that your characters weren't doing what you wanted them to do? *smiles.. Still, it was very good. Sara

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

LOL, it is. But I think the result was better than anything I originally had in mind.

10/10

Sampdoria

Great story with a wonderful ending :-))

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

Thank you!

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snapify52

Yay! That was sweet and fun. Also, a really nice length for a drabble. Thanks for sharing.

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

Thank you! I actually had to crop it a bit. It was running away with me! Glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

luvsev

Aww! Deb! This is so sweet!

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

Thanks! I don't know why every drabble I write lately turns into a romance. LOL.

10/10

beaweasley2

Awwww. Oh man that ghost was hilarious! I don't blame her one bit, I mean, who wouldn't chose Severus? But now I feel sorry for Ron.

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

Yeah, Severus has the whole spirit world after him, poor guy.I beat up on Ron too much, huh?

0/10

kimbee73

Let's hope the ghost can have Ron all to himself. Way to go with the gay remark!

Response from debjunk (Author of Haunted House)

LOL. Glad you liked that. I get the feeling that Ron will be a bit surprised very soon. Hopefully, she'll grow on him.

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