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Saturday Night Drabbles An Eye For An Eye
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An Eye For An Eye

1: Oneshot

An Eye For An Eye

luvsev

12 Reviews   |   12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 516 Words 1 Chapter Complete

The only crime Severus doesn't regret.

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Chapter 1: Oneshot


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Member Since 2008  |  71 Stories  |  Favorited by 76  |  664 Reviews Written  |  948 Review Responses

I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.

I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.

 


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salvamea

gosh - quite a revenge. as he said eye for an eye.she had a dreadful life with this man, and an awful death.so should he at least have the awful death. whad effect had the Dark Mark there?short and full of deepest emotins. such good work.

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

I agree - Tobias got what he deserved for torturing his wife everyday. Severus set the Dark Mark above his home to make it look like the work of one of the Death Eaters - in other words, he did it to keep the blame away from him. Thanks for the review!

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kimjo2

i struggle with the concept of forgiveness myself.  i just can't condem him for his actions.  thanks

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

You're welcome. And thank you for leaving a review. Severus did what he thought was right, and I don't think many of us would blame him for what he did.

10/10

Stefdarlin

OMG!  How awesome is this??!!??  I absolutely love it!  Okay, I shall refrain from further exclamation abuse.  But, damn.  This has just the right amount of darkness and justification. *Glomps you*

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

*glows and glomps/squishes you* This has to be the best review I've ever gotten - you just made my night! Thanks!

10/10

blue artemis

I could see that.

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

Yup. *pats the shiny stars*

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silverdoe

Wow. great job on this prompt.

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

Thank you, silver!

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Wow, that was a strong little piece. Well done, very well done!

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

Wow, thanks!

10/10

makaem

That was incredible.

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

Thanks! I'm glad you think so.

10/10

astopperindeath

this is what i love about these prompts--you and i went completely different ways with this and it worked.  this was so incredibly well done!

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

These kind of prompts allow for creative license, and I love that - everyone can have their own interpretation. And thank you for such a glowing review! *glomps/squishes*

10/10

snitchette

I wonder with who he feels comfortable enough, who he trusts than much to tell this so personnal story of his.

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

In my mind, I see him telling this to Hermione, but it could be any woman since I never specify.

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sunny33

Can't blame him really.

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

I don't either. I think a lot of people would feel as justified as he if they did the same.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

And I like this very much. I agree with him here! ~nod~ xoxoxooxox Thanks for taking up the prompt!

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

Severus couldn't, in good conscience, let Tobias get away with his crimes against his mother. And thank you for offering up this prompt - as soon as I read it, I had this scene flash in my mind, and I knew I had to write it. :)

10/10

debjunk

Who wouldn't do that to such an evil man?  Well, at least who wouldn't WANT to do that?

Response from luvsev (Author of An Eye For An Eye)

I think many people would want to do as Severus did in his position. To me, Tobias got what he deserved.

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