wow..just wow.  what a phenominal story.  thanks

oh noo! that poor girl.
hexed by a rapist.
at least she does not have to know all of it.
thought Severus may break the truth to her bit by bit?
first raped, now married to a murderer. a true murderer.
no nice outline for her.
yeah ,really dark mood, no doubt.
but well written, no doubt either.

Not of her own volition.  How dark.  Very good, though.

Oh holy hell! I had a feeling Hermione was being used against her will, but I was sure that Lucius was the guilty party. I never thought Draco.

I'm guessing from Hermione's reaction that Draco had taken advantage of her forgiving nature and used it to cast Imperius on her. There are no words for how low Draco sank in this one. *Shudders*

Okay,  you were definately in a dark place.

I figured it would be Lucius, well done.

Yeah, I'd say you were in a dark mood, but you channeled it very well.  Draco's evil control over Hermione sent Severus into a new level of rage.  Chilling, but so well done.

oh wow, you're right, this is incredibly dark.  and so powerful given you've used so few words!

At least she didn't do it willingly. Wonder what pushed Draco to do it though?

Oooh this was gooood!! lol... Nicely ended too.

Better she doesn't know. :)

You went dark with this, and I love it!

Wow!  That was quite chilling, both with Severus' sheer strength and Malfoy's sheer nerve!  He got what was coming to him, though. 

Wow, just, wow!  Lat's just say, Draco was not the first person who came to mind.  You ebil girl, you.  =o)

Well done, mate.  I love it.

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Hard-hitting!... Though I feel bad that Severus resorted to murder to assuage his anger (which was quite horrifying in itself).
Draco deserves a stint in Azkaban more, I think.
Poor Hermione. I hope she will never find out what had happened to her and what Severus did.
Thank you.