When it suits him
melusin22 Reviews | 22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 12 Favorites )
What marks the transition to adulthood? Drabble written for the gs100 challenge, 'Not a Gentleman.'
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Alan Rickman obsessed ex-civil servant now living the good life in France. I only write in the good ship SS/HG. However, if you think that the only way these two can get together is by some sort of forced marriage, 'binding' or whatever, don't read my stories. You will be disappointed.
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I've never seen this before, and it's fabulous.
Response from melusin (Author of When it suits him)
oh, thank you :)
That was very intriguing for a drabble. Almost could be a potent opener for a short story. Nicely done.
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thank you
Anonymous
:O I have always prefer dialogue-only drabbles, why, I don't know, but that's it.
And then, then you come a write this, and it makes me glee of happiness! I looove this! Very much!
"she was astonished to see Snape quietly get up from his seat and hold out the chair next to him, the look on his face leaving her in no doubt that she was now very grown up indeed" That's priceless indeed!
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awwww cute cute cute!
yes, it is the respect and being taken sereious what makes one part of the grown up world. And she REALLY belonged there.
Even for a Snape.
could have other reasons as well, of course...
Could that be the first step of their (tumultuous) relationship? Very lovely.
Response from melusin (Author of When it suits him)
naturally ;)
A perfect vignette of the elegance of the man, and how he would acknowledge the girl become woman. There is almost a Victorian aspect to it, which I love. 
Response from melusin (Author of When it suits him)
Thank you.
This is the kind of a drabble that has stuck with me. I find myself thinking about it at odd times of the day.
Response from melusin (Author of When it suits him)
Glad you liked it Molly.
I enjoyed the premise of the narrative. I must admit that it does sound like a very Severus like action.
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thank you
Lovely! Beautiful pictures painted. Enjoyed it very much.
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thank you
LOL. He had very well-defined ideas and what constitutes a lady. :)
Response from melusin (Author of When it suits him)
Indeed - tennage girls not being one of them
Anonymous
Great answer to the challenge! :o)
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The idea of a silent and respectful Snape is so compelling. While I know this little drabble is complete, the fact that I wish it was longer and fleshed out is a testament to how excellent this is.
Response from melusin (Author of When it suits him)
Thanks Lissa, but I think the outcome is predicatable :)
Oh, wow! I love this. It's Snape through and through. In my mind's eye I can see the look on Severus' face when he stands and holds out the chair for Hermione, and the look on his face says she is all grown up in the most delicious sort of way!Kudos!Beth
Response from melusin (Author of When it suits him)
thank you - glad you liked it
i still love this little bit of Severus
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