Oh,my,God, I had so many questions. How did he get the knife? How did he even know about it? Is Hermione dead in real life, or is she in some sort of coma, her sprit traped, in that other realm? It is the mark of a good story, that it make the reader, think. thank you very much. 

Oh wow. Great job!

That was chilling!  What an awesome piece to get me in the right mood for this creepy month. =o)  I love the end.  Excellent.

he immolates (?) her?
why her of all people.
Was the condition to kill a person that loves the dead to become human again? how inhumane.
But now she again has lost everything.
she wanted him. but now I hope she haunts him till eternity.
grrr.

I had no idea that was going to happen! I thought maybe had found a way to become whole again to be with Hermione. Brilliant one shot.

*I'm gobsmacked!*  He killed her?! Wha? No!

Wow, not what I expected.

wow!  i mean wow!  what a fantastic story!  very much in time for halloween.  smoochies of thanks!

I don't know what I thought was going to happen, but I didn't expect that.  I was completely taken by surprise, and that doesn't happen to me very often!  Well done!!!  :D