I Don't Stand a Ghost of a Chance With You
I Don't Stand a Ghost of a Chance With You
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SubversaCan Severus lay the past to rest in hope of a future happiness?
She passed the houses adorned with jack-o-lanterns and opened the churchyard gate, wending surely through the headstones.
He crouched in exactly the spot she had expected to find him, and her heart ached—yes, with pity, but also with hurt. How could she ever hope to win the heart of man forever and always in love with a dead woman?
He raised his bowed head, and the gibbous moon cast its limning light upon his face, transforming the tear tracks to silvery streaks. He opened his lips, as if to speak, but no words were forthcoming.
She knelt beside him.
‘I—’ he began, and she brushed the stringy hair from his face.
‘Real friends forgive one another when forgiveness is asked,’ she said fiercely, suddenly and finally done with subtlety.
‘There are acts beyond forgiveness,’ he whispered hoarsely, turning from her.
‘In life, as in magic, intent counts,’ she insisted, daring to take his chin and make him look at her. ‘You had no way of knowing, and when you did, you moved heaven and earth to make it right.’
‘Why do you care?’ he sneered, practiced defences snapping into place against her caring.
‘Because I love you.’
His eyes widened, and he sat back on his heels.
She had crossed the Rubicon; she could not back down now. She swayed towards him, her hands raised to his face; he captured her wrists and halted her movement.
Her heart plummeted—no, he couldn’t reject her—not now!
In the next moment, he had risen, jerking her to her feet, and wrapping her up in his arms, he Disapparated.
She staggered from him, immediately recognising their destination as their shared office, Master and apprentice, in Spinner’s End.
She turned on him, demanding angrily, ‘Were you afraid she would hear?’
‘No. I heard you, Hermione, and a graveyard is no place for this.’
He advanced upon her, cupping her face and lowering his mouth to hover over hers. ‘Our first kiss deserves its own setting.’
She sobbed once before their lips fused, and then it was only his soft, wondering kiss and her urgent, insistent answer. When they broke apart, panting, hearts racing, his nose grazed her cheek before he whispered, ‘No one ever … I never thought … Oh, Hermione.’
‘Can we put that ghost to rest?’ she asked, hopeful.
Upon his fervent nod, she led him to bed.
A/N: "I Don't Stand a Ghost of a Chance With You" is a 1932 song composed by Victor Young, with lyrics written by Ned Washington and Bing Crosby.
This piece was written for the GrangerSnape100 Community on Live Journal in answer to the prompt: Lily.
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Latest 25 Reviews for I Don't Stand a Ghost of a Chance With You
30 Reviews | 5.87/10 Average
Lovely, and am glad that ghost is finally put to rest where it should be. Thank you.
great work! yes, their love surely deserved its own setting...
That moldy old ghost should have been laid years ago, and now Severus can start to really live, and Hermione will make sure he is happy.
How you pack so much emotion into such a small space, I'll never know. I am in awe. Thank you for sharing your talent =)
This so very much needed to happen in canon. His demise with the love for a ghost in canon was just pathetic. I wish you had written canon. That's all I'm saying.
Response from Subversa (Author of I Don't Stand a Ghost of a Chance With You)
Thank you, darling. I wish I had CREATED canon! :D
lovely! smoochies forever
I liek it. ts simple but sweet. good Job
Awww!! This is wondefully lovely.
Add another one to your list of ongoing brilliance. ‘Our first kiss deserves its own setting.’ Love that!
You and your soft spot for Lily. Im content cause Hermione gets him in the end. Woot!
Very sweet! Thank you for this!
Whoo hoo! She made him put his ghosts into the past! Lovely story, simply lovely.
That was quite beautiful. Not only are you one of my favorite authors on any archive, but this is my favorite pairing, and that is my favorite song of all time. What a combination!! Thank you.
Brilliant stuff, I loved this very much!
Touching....and very to the point....good work...
You packed a lot of punch in this one! Lovely!!! :D
You write such emotion into such short bits. Very nicely done, once again.
I truly enjoyed that.
Oh, just so lovely! The title is apropos for the work, and for the 'ship for that matter...lol. Wonderful dialogue coupled with great imagery. I love it, but then I love all your work! Thanks for sharing.
Our first kiss deserves its own setting.
Love it! That particular drabble has an amazing amount of backstory within. Very cool.
Oh, Subversa, this is perfect! My favorite lines are Hermione's: ‘In life, as in magic, intent counts... You had no way of knowing, and when you did, you moved heaven and earth to make it right... Because I love you.’
Excellent! *claps wildly and cheers*
Beth
Yes. Go lay that ghost! :)
Superb:) I love it.
Brava!!!!!
Fizzabella
Oh, Subversa, this was lovely and perfect. His anguish over Lily laid to rest, and a new love has blossomed. While Spinner's End may not be the most romantic of destinations, he realized a memorable beginning needs a place of its own. What wonderful drabbles!
Wonderful story, I am always happy to read a Severus who grasp the oppertunity for being loved by a living person, not pining for someone dead years ago.