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On Suffering
LiteraryBeauty4 Reviews | 4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
Draco kidnaps Hermione, intent on revenge. What he gets is so much more—and less—than he expected. Has he suffered enough, or is he only just beginning?
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Member Since 2009 | 31 Stories | Favorited by 250 | 0 Reviews Written | 578 Review Responses
Due to the often controversial nature of my fics, I've decided I will no longer be posting here (this not NOT include my WIPs--Princes in Exile and Caged Bird Sings will continue to be updated here. This is regarding only my oneshots and future long fics). You can find all my stories at my Livejournal, under the name literaryspell. None of the fics are, as yet, friendslocked, so you can read at your leisure, and friend me, or not, as you like. :D Be sure to check out my master list, which is the first post on my LJ page. Thank you!
If anyone would prefer to send comments to me personally, or would just like to talk plot or make suggestions, please contact me at literaryspell@live.com. I'm happy to hear from anyone!
Reviews for On Suffering
He really should go and see the Healer. And maybe one day he'll be allowed to kiss her again.
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of On Suffering)
I don't think being allowed or not is going to stop him... :(
...do I sense a sequel? because that would be truly... Devious and Splendid, and I really really hope so.
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of On Suffering)
No way, babe. I don't do sequels. When you see that Fin. the story is DONE. Glad you're intrigued, though.
Wow! This was a very, very, powerful story. I can't deny that I found it uncomfortable to read at times but, once again, your amazing writing skill and your total control over the language kept me wanting to read to the end.So many people write of a sweet, loving and changed Draco after the war but I personally can never see him that way. I think he would have been a very disturbed young man as this fic shows.Not an easy read nor an easy subject for you to tackle. But you handled it well and changed things around with Hermione showing such strength and Draco such weakness in the way that all bullies do. (Please be aware that I am simply voting high on this fic due to your skillful writing, not the subject matter which, as I've already said, made for uncomfortable reading.) :-)
Response from LiteraryBeauty (Author of On Suffering)
It was uncomfortable for me to write, so I completely understand where you're coming from. It would have been SO EASY for Hermione to stay and forgive Draco and for Draco to see a Healer. But that's not life.I'm glad you could get past the uncomfortable subject matter to point of the fic. It would be easier for me to write PWP, gain a huge following (LOL) and become queen of fanfic, (kidding, of course) but I really like to push the envelope a little and explore the darker side. There's enough PWP out there. :)
Response from Sevvy (Reviewer)
I just wanted to say thank you so much for coming back to me with such in-depth responses (as you know, I reviewed a number of your stories all in one hit recently & it was lovely to find all your replies waiting for me on my e-mail when I came in this afternoon!)So many authors just reply with a straight 'thank you' &, as a reviewer, you are sometimes never quite sure if your review has pleased or upset them! I don't like to just give one line reviews if I can help it, especially when the author has provided such a deep, well thought plot as you seem to do in all your fics. If I like what I read then I say so! I have to just also say though that I'm surprised this hasn't had more reviews! When I'm in 'author' mode, I know how frustrating that can be too .... ! :-)
complicated, and that's good