Feeling
karelia16 Reviews | 8.75/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
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karelia
Member Since 2005 | 83 Stories | Favorited by 232 | 666 Reviews Written | 2,343 Review Responses
Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.
Reviews for Feeling
True love, warm and wonderful.
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
Thank you! I had almost forgotten about this story...
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
Thank you! I had almost forgotten about this story...
I know she is evil, but this was bloody fantastic.
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
Heh. I was kidding about her evilness. :DThank you!
Sigh. I believe you have given SS/HG some poetic justice. This is brilliant, dear. Now I am sad it took me so long to get to it. ::pouts:: But it did wonders to clear my sinuses a bit today, LOL!*Air hugs*
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
Aw, thank you! I only posted last Sunday, so you really didn't take that long, lol.*Air hugs back* Hope you feel well soonest!
Simply gorgeous. You've done an excellent job of capturing his thoughts in simple, one-word bits. I just cannot picture a man—however eloquent he might be under normal circumstances—having deep, profound thoughts at that particular moment. "Finally" and "Breathe" seem much more believable. And of course his final thought, "home," is what makes it love and not just sex and what makes it all kinds of beautiful.Well done, my friend!
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
I think if a man has deep, profound thoughts during sex, then he has no interest in his partner. :P And I'd imagine that once Severus accepts that Hermione is the right woman for him, he'll never have sex with her but only make love...Thank you for your kind words, darling!
WOW!
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
Wow, good? Wow, horrible? LOL
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
Wow like in gooood!
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
LOL, thanks Morgaine! :D
This is simply breathtaking!
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
Thanks, luv, for your kind words! ::squish::
This was quite simply stunning! Perfect use of words and just right to convey both the poetic beauty and the eroticism of the moment! :-)
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
Wow. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
oh my hermione, can i be your severus?love it, so tender and so sexy, not blatant or crude, but beautiful and sexy
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
*grins happily*So glad you like it!I'm sure there are moments for blatant or crude, but this wasn't it, I guess. <3
that was short but arousing
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
I'm glad you think so. Short, yes. The challenge was to write the scene in 100 words.Thank you for reviewing!
This is - to use one of your words - gorgeous. So vivid in it's imagery. It is hot!sexy and tender at the same time. Love it.
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
Aw, thank you! Your kind words make my day! <3
Awesome! I kneel in reverence before your poetry! :D
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
LOL! Thank you! :D
OH.MY.GOD !! That feels sooooo good. SW may be evil but you take up on the challenge most brilliantly. *bows*
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
*grins happily*I'm sooooooo glad you liked it!And thank you for your kind words!
Ah, so lovely. It's simply wonderful. I wish all "sex" scenes were like this instead of, well, what some of them are.
Response from karelia (Author of Feeling)
Thank you! I'm so glad you prefer this kind of style over, well, some others, lol.