The air's not redolent with scents of passion and need.  Hmmm... I feel strangely empty.

Wow.I sit here and look at the text and think about  it and realize I sit slack-jawed. That's impressive.I guess it's your choice of words.So tense and somehow poetic.Again: wow.There is so much in that last part. It's open and leaves space for imagination. And it's so lyrical.Did I say 'wow' already?

Wow. Love a good Snupin. :)Kittylefish is lucky to get such an evocative birthday present. Thanks for sharing it with all of us!

This was quite simply amazing.  Your poetic use of words and tension building is simply wonderful. I could feel the air positively crackle from here! It takes a powerful, erotic piece of writing to ever make me like the idea of these two ... and this was surely it!  Well done; I loved it! :-)

Wow, quite powerfully written. Remus really took dominance, only then making Severus drop his reserve. One can only wonder how long until Remus comes back or will Severus go to him?

I'm sure he will be.  But what does Remus think without the wolf?

Wow, those were strong emotions. Thank you for sharing. /M

i love it just as much as i did when i first read it on my birthday.  all that desperation and need that dare not speak its name.  i am honored that you took the time to write this for me.  thank you so much!  :D

I could feel their longing from a mile away.  Well done.  :D

Nice & taut. This cannot be a one shot, there has got to be more.

Oh my!! That was so hot! Can't wait for Remus' come back...

Strong emotions from strong men. A powerful story indeed.

This is so intense, you can feel the desperation.  Wonderful job.

You captured the feeling of loging very aptly in this. I can feel Severus pent up want in the way you've used your words and writing style in this piece. Great work!!