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An Unexpected Shower
MMADfan5 Reviews | 8.0/10 (5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
A “missing scene” from Resolving a Misunderstanding, with cameo appearances by Albus and Minerva. Gertrude gets a surprise from Malcolm, then she lends him a helpful hand. Short, lemony one-shot.
A Malcolm McGonagall and Gertrude Gamp story.
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Reviews for An Unexpected Shower
OMG!!!! Gertrude is my favorite character in RaM, I can't believe I haven't read this story before! shame on me!, but thank you, thank you, thank you oh thank you for writing it, I truly love Trudie! she's absolutely wonderful and I believe Malcolm is perfect for her, just perfect! THANK YOU!, I hope you will write more stories featuring them! pleaseeeeee! maybe the proposal Malcolm mentions in RaM, just a thought! lol, Anyway wonderful story, great writing and what a lovely couple!
Response from MMADfan (Author of An Unexpected Shower)
Thanks! Just think, you had the pleasure of reading it today for the first time! :-)I'm really glad you liked the little story, and you're very welcome! I may write more Malcolm/Trudie fics yet. I don't know if you've checked out the first chapter of "Charming the Scottish Garden," but they'll appear in that in one of the later chapters.Thank you very much for letting me know you enjoyed it. Hopefully, my Muse will have me writing another Trudie & Malcolm fic sometime soon!
Response from doralupin87 (Reviewer)
oh I do hope so! I've been away from the online world for a while so I'm not yet updated with all my favorites authors, but I did read Charming the Scottish Garden, I can't wait to see where it goes, I do like Johannes a lot and was very sad to see him suffer a bit in RaM when Trudie started dating Malcolm. I haven't had the chance to read Death's Dominion or A Long Vernal Season, but I do believe I read somewhere that Trudie and Malcolm have a son? and that Malcolm died? I will read them of course but I am very curious about this! Thanks for responding to my review anyway and I hope your muse allows for more Trudie and Malcolm fics! Thanks.
Response from MMADfan (Author of An Unexpected Shower)
Yep, they have a son named Gareth, after Gertrude's late brother. I think you'd like him, too. :-)I hope you enjoy Death's Dominion & A Long Vernal Season when you get to them. I think DD is one of my better fics -- you have to remember that P.O.V. is really important in DD, thought, and that things aren't always what they seem. ;-)Have fun catching up with stuff online!
Response from doralupin87 (Reviewer)
you are good, avoiding the most important question! but I guess I have to be patient and wait! lol now I'm more curious than before I think!, I can't wait to start reading them! Thanks!
YEAH!!!!!! a Malcolm/Tru story! As you know I love this couple and was thrilled to read this missing scene. Malcolm was as adorable as always- loved him letting out a loud whoop in response to Gertrude's declaration of love. Just perfect. Thank you for writing this.
Response from MMADfan (Author of An Unexpected Shower)
Hi there, Esmelle! Glad you like Malcolm and Tru and enjoyed this little missing scene! It was a natural place for one, I thought.Thanks for the review! I appreciate it!
Another sampling from the citrus grove. YUMMY!!!I never thought I'd love Gertie Gamp but Malcolm McGonagall was a hit from the start. Putting those two together was a stroke of genius.I love how Malcolm tricked her into the shower using the soap in the eyes trick. Clever lad but then again, she didn't really seem to mind. lol And who can blame her?Albus and Minerva's conversation was a hoot and a half. I love how it took a second for it to dawn on Albus what Minerva was implying about her brother and Gertie. Bless his heart, you'd think he'd be a little faster on the uptake after some of the things he and Minerva got up to in that stairwell. lolThanks for writing the missing scene and posting it for us all to enjoy!!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of An Unexpected Shower)
Thank you! It was fun to write a little Gertrude/Malcolm lemon fluff, and back when I first wrote Resolving a Misunderstanding (boy, that seems an age and a half ago!), people seemed to like the couple! And since "A Spree" is one of my favorite chapters, and "Apres Spree" up there, too, I thought this might be a nice place for some zesty refreshment!Glad you liked the bit with Albus and Minerva. Albus, of course, is also thinking of a time or two back in the day when he "distracted" the Arithmancy mistress himself, so he thinks that Malcolm just might succeed in distracting her heartily! hee! And, as you say, Minerva has succeeded in "distracting" him on more than one occasion by that point in the story!Thanks very much for the review. I really appreciate it!
Response from HogwartsDuo (Reviewer)
I prefer not to think of those times when Albus might have "entertained" or "distracted" Gertrude Gamp. I like to think that was ANCIENT HISTORY!!!! lol
That was an adorable moment between two of my favorite characters in the RaM-verse, and one that I'm sure Gertie and Malcolm enjoyed as much as I did. The two do go together very well, and certainly make a very good couple!I loved this particular line from Malcolm:“I never believed I could feel this way about anyone. I belong to you. You caught me, the wild McGonagall, and now I belong to you.”His love for Gertie is certainly very strong, and he was certanly glad to learn that his feelings were shared, judging from that whoop he gave at the end.The conversation between Albus and Minerva at the end was a hoot, too, especially since Minerva seems to know what Malcolm and Gertie got up to during that shower.
Response from MMADfan (Author of An Unexpected Shower)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this glimpse of intimacy between Gertrude & Malcolm early in their relationship. Malcolm was caught but good! (Excellently appropriate emoticon at the end there!)
Response from MMADfan (Author of An Unexpected Shower)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this glimpse of intimacy between Gertrude & Malcolm early in their relationship. Malcolm was caught but good! (Excellently appropriate emoticon at the end there!)
Aaaw, this is adorable! It's been so long since I read RaM, but this was a lovely refresher. I adore Malcolm!
Response from MMADfan (Author of An Unexpected Shower)
Thanks! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :-) I am rather partial to Malcolm, myself. ;-)