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13 Reviews | 4.54/10 (13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )

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Hermione Granger Severus Snape

A lone figure stands at the grave of Severus Snape.

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I am huge severus snape and hermione granger shipper. I live in the hottest place on earth, Arizona. I have two daughers who are huge harry potter fans. I have been married for almost 10 years and love to write.

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0/10

So sad and true. Thank you for sharing your creativity.

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Thank you. I do a follow up posted entitled Masks. It is very despressing. I do feel for Snape as being the person always looking in.Sevibaby

9/10

This is a great One-shot. Is there going to be a prequal?

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Yes, I have a companion piece that is with the beta now. It's not the norm but it is about a man decending into madness. Hope to have it up soon. Thank for the review.Sevibaby

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Yes, I have a companion piece that is with the beta now. It's not the norm but it is about a man decending into madness. Hope to have it up soon. Thank for the review.Sevibaby

10/10

Very well done....looking forward to more stories from you

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Thank you very much. I am working on two different one right now one being a companion piece to Death.Sevibaby

0/10

A lovely tale - and excellent first posting !! Congratulations on taking that first very scary step and giving us such a fine piece. Do continue with your writing !!

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Thank you. With all of the lovely reviews I have been getting I will definately continue to write.Sevibaby

0/10

Is it really your first time? Wow! I long to read more of you.

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Thank you.Hopefully you won't have to wait to long, I am working on another little short one.Sevibaby

10/10

Bittersweet and tragic. Very well written. You did great!!! :D

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Thank you. My heart was racing as I posted this. I tried to put in all of the emotions I was feeling when I read DH for the first time.Sevibaby

0/10

I liked it. And it seems just like what the Ministry would do, burying him somewhere else, thinking they knew best. Makes me sad, and I admit to looking for a continuation. I like my fic to "fix" the horrible,sad lonely life of Severus Snape. *g* But you do a great job here.

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Thank you. You are right though, the Ministry does whatever it wants to with no regard to the persons wishs. I have done a follow up to this fic that is very dark and depressing called Masks. I just posted it. Nothing is fixed and it revolves around the writing that Hermione found. Sevibaby

10/10

This is an excellent story! I would never have known it was a "firsty" if you hadn't told us.In Hermione you have captured my reaction to reading Deathly Hallows. Thank goodness we have fanfiction so he can live!Well done, sevibaby.Beth

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Thank you. YES thank goodness for fanfiction without it I would go through Haryy Potter withdrawls. I hope to have more stories coming up soon.Sevibaby

0/10

that was incredibly sad and I think very approrpriate.

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Thank you. I was heart broken when he died in the book and just felt that something more needed to be written.Sevibaby

10/10

I think that so many of us felt that way when we read of his death in DH. Its why so many stories of his survival and ultimately finding happiness are so popular. Had he been a real person rather than fictional we would never have that option.

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

I wanted to throw my book at something when I read that our beloved Potion Master died and what away to go. I love that we can put our own take on the HP universe and keep Severus Snape alive.Sevibaby

0/10

Hey! THIS sounds like an epilogue! This honours him. her grieving for him or mourne or her taking him serious, respect him so highly. And not naming a child Severus Potter.I don't think poor Snape would ever have wanted exactly THESE two names combined.he must rotate in his grave.

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

All through the books she is correcting the boys and trying to get them to show more respect. And I think just knowing that his name sake is a sibling to another James Potter would blow his head off as he was rolling in his grave.Sevibaby

10/10

Excellent for any attempt, much less a first attempt. Well thought out, well expressed. And all as I would have imagined it to be. It pulled at my heartstrings in only a few words.Well done.

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Thank you. It tugged and pulled on mine until it was written.Sevibaby

0/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

I am proud to leave your first review. I think you have done a good job expressing Hermione's emotions, and his. What an unenviable position Snape was in that last year, little wonder he would prefer death. How 'in character' for the Ministry not to bury him where he would have chosen to be buried.Thank you for sharing this touching tale with us.-Wahoo

Response from sevibaby (Author of Death)

Thank you so much for being my first review. This was floating around in my head for a while. Sevibaby

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