So lovely, and so very real. P.S. Severus buy her those chocs, she has earned them.

Brilliant!  You have made them sound perfect and believable together.  So glad I found this story again.

this was so terrific and so true to the characters.  thanks muchly

That's the most wonderful and beautiful love declaration I have ever had the pleasure to read. He is so lucky to be at the receiving end of said declaration. And he better buy her that box of sweets.

Ah... real life has it's good points too, I suppose!

Ahhh that was fantastic! I smiled all the way through it.

Will he write back to her?

Pretty please??

This was amazingly tender and funny. You could subtitle it "Hermione has been taking lessons in Snarking."

I love your writing and I love this:) It's sweet without being mushy or cloying, and you have the characters dead-on:)

Brava!!!!

Fizzabella

This was wonderfully written, I loved it!

Just like real life:  funny, sweet and sad.  Men need to be reminded to woo their wives during marriage like during courtship.

Very nice job.

This was great. I like it that everything isn't perfect between them, that they are each still themselves and they do love each other (whether one party actually says it or not) just the way they are. Severus is absolutely himself, not some OOC prettied up cardboard figure that so many HGSS fics tend to make him (why would Hermione want him to change when she's in love with him the way he is?). But I do agree with HErmione about the box of chocs (Ghiridelli rather than Godiva, though--there's more cocoa and less paraffin in the recipes). Bravo!

Dancingkatz

Very nice work! I love a smooth read, and thi is. It runs really well.

Well, if they like the way they live their lives...

I'm for those stories where they improve themselves and making each other angry or insulting each other is not what I call improvement...If you love somebody you try to make his or her life better ...