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Birthday Kiss

1: Oneshot

Birthday Kiss

luvsev

17 Reviews   |   17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 15 Favorites )

Romance Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 611 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione has an obsession.

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Chapter 1: Oneshot


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Member Since 2008  |  71 Stories  |  Favorited by 76  |  664 Reviews Written  |  948 Review Responses

I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.

I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.

 


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10/10

christev

Um, as soon as I am able to drag myself up from this puddle of goo and wipe up my slobbery drooly mouth, I'd like to say:LUV! This is awesome! Of course I did quit drooling long enough to laugh at Severus thinking, <i>"Maybe she wanted a piece of toast."</i> LOLThank you so much for my fabulous birthday present - it's wonderful!!Love, Christev

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Tee hee. I am delighted you loved this little drabble. I tried to make it sort of sweet/sexy/funny, and judging from your response, I succeeded. Again, a very happy birthday, dear.

0/10

EverMystique

Very sweet. Love the set up, and the culmination. Nicely done.

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Thank you very much.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh what a lucky girl!  Chistev and Hermione!

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

There's nothing quite like getting what you want for your birthday. :)

0/10

salvamea

the feeling is mututal *sing*hey, it is important to him because he has something important to do that should not go unnoticed and/or at an improper moment.ahh. pity my birthday has been some 6 weeks ago... *hint*

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Indeed it is. Hint taken. What sort of drabble would you like and to what pairing and prompt?

Response from salvamea (Reviewer)

oh no no no !!not that!! Really! (btw lullabelle72 already thinks of writing something for me, but THANK YOU SO MUCH!!)

Response from salvamea (Reviewer)

my hint was more in the dreamy fanfiction-wraped up girl way like: why does Hermione get all the kissing for her birthday and I do not.when I read those tales I get all envious to the luck the characters here have. *sigh*time I took my life in hand.

0/10

orm irian

Sweet.(and OOC).Nice fluff.

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

It's not too OOC, or at least I don't think so.

10/10

debjunk

Oh, luv... that was sweet. She got her wish and so did he.

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Thank you, darlin'. They deserved to have a sweet moment with each other.

0/10

gersknightlady

wow very nice but way too short LOL

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Aww, thanks!

0/10

WriterMerrin

That is quite the perfect moment.  Lovely little scene for anyone's birthday.

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Thank you! I think it's made even better by the fact she's getting to kiss Severus -- he's the perfect gift. :)

8/10

cflower

I love the idea. And I love how you describe his lips... "sigh" And I found the toast part really funny and perfect too. :)

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Thanks! I wanted him to have very kissable lips.

0/10

snitchette

She finally got what she wanted for her birthday. Lucky girl.

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Of course, Hermione needed to have a bit of what she wanted for her birthday. (I think everyone should receive at least one of the things they want for their birthday.) And yes, she is very lucky to get to snog the Potions master.

0/10

sregner

How lovely

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Thank you!

10/10

Nessa

Wish it was my birthday, that Hermione gets all the luck. That was lovely.

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

She does indeed have all the luck. I tell you what, let me know when your birthday is, and I'll write you a drabble and pairing of your choice. A three word prompt would be nice to work to as well. :)

Response from Nessa (Reviewer)

Really? That's very kind. Will let you know.

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Yes, really. :D

10/10

kittylefish

really lovely. 

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Thank you, darlin'.

0/10

rosered

What a fantastic Birthday present!  Nicely done.  :D

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Thank you so much!

10/10

ApollinaV

Devastatingly good.  *shivers*  LOVE THIS.  And first kisses are the best.  bravo!  AV

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

*Iz flattered* I'm so glad you loved my little drabble! First kisses are indeed good, but I'd be willing to bet that a first kiss with the sexy Potions master would be better.

10/10

MuseAmusant

Awww... that was so sweet. I loved it.

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Thank you!

0/10

ginnydm

That was too cute! I liked it a lot.

Response from luvsev (Author of Birthday Kiss)

Aww, thanks. :D

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