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The Trapeze Swinger

1: Grace

2: Flawed Design

The Trapeze Swinger

fallingconsciously

7 Reviews   |   7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance compliant post-DH/DH Potions Under Duress 6,204 Words 2 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Forced into a position of power following the Final Battle, Hermione and Harry struggle to regain order in the now reckless world of wizarding kind. Hermione is at a loss, physically exhausted from her endless expectations and duties, and emotionally deserted, from the after effects of the war and her personal battles. From there, she accidentally stumbles upon a situation that ultimately, and quite literally, transports her from the world that is slowly starting to slip from her fingertips and into one that proves to be impossible to stay in... and, as time wears on, even more impossible to leave.

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Chapter 1: Grace

Chapter 2: Flawed Design


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10/10

MuseAmusant

What a horribly uncomfortable feeling to realize that your first lover was (intentionally or otherwise) using you like some kind of sex toy, utterly oblivious to you and your satisfaction. I hope there is real passion to be found in Hermione's future, rather than just more of the mindnumbing clockwork existence she currently finds herself in.That goes for Harry too... a miserable childhood with the Dursleys, then essentially fighting Voldemort constantly from the time he entered Hogwarts, then finally destroying the bastard only to be sentenced to an even more hellish life.

Response from fallingconsciously (Author of The Trapeze Swinger)

Too true! Our heroes deserve some justice, finally. I simply can't leave Hermione (or Harry) in this situation too much longer.Thank you for reviewing!

0/10

debjunk

Too bad these two are at this impass.  It's good to realize when someone's not right for you, and I believe Ron is definitely not right, but it's still a bit sad.

Response from fallingconsciously (Author of The Trapeze Swinger)

Indeed. Hermione has a lot of growing to do; she's matured since the Final Battle, but views the world, in whole, as a negative, choosing to remain pessismistic than try in a lot of ways. But, perhaps not for long ... :)

10/10

blue artemis

She is being a coward about Ron, but if it didn't work, it didn't work.  Just tell him.  But there is some underlying sadness there.  I feel bad for her.

10/10

blue artemis

This is quite frightening.

9/10

ella2

A very realistic and intriguing view of what the wizarding world might come to after the war. Not so different from the developments in the real world during these last years! Loved your story and hope to read more soon.

Response from fallingconsciously (Author of The Trapeze Swinger)

Thank you! More will be coming soon.

10/10

MuseAmusant

What an incredibly depressing life Hermione and Harry are trapped in... they saved the wizarding world from Voldemort for this? They had far better, more fulfilling lives when old Snake-Face was still around!It sounds like they're both absolutely miserable, with no end in sight, and, on top of everything else, Hermione's loyalty is in question? Especially when it seems that Hermione's the only thing keeping Harry from running away screaming. IDK, but I think it's more that Duke wants Hermione out of his way.Anyway, how ironic that a society based around magic should become so soulless and mechanical. Intriguing beginning!

Response from fallingconsciously (Author of The Trapeze Swinger)

Yes, indeed -- the Wizarding World is indeed in turmoil -- or at least for our heroine. Don't worry though, she'll soon have her world turned round ... Thank you for reviewing!

0/10

ClayPotter

What a sad and bleak beginning! I must assume that somehow it will get better.

Response from fallingconsciously (Author of The Trapeze Swinger)

Assume away ! I can't leave poor Hermione in misery forever.

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