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The Tower Affair

1: The Scene of the Crime

2: The Evidence

3: The First Interview

4: The Second Interview

5: Further Developments

6: Cherchez la Femme

7: The Next Encounter

8: Further Investigation

9: Sacked

10: Cross-Examination

11: Habeas Corpus

12: Closing Arguments

The Tower Affair

Rose of the West

57 Reviews   |   57 Ratings, 0 Likes, 18 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Romance Hogwarts Castle 29,052 Words 12 Chapters Complete
Kingsley Shacklebolt Nymphadora Tonks Original Character Remus Lupin Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Dolores Jane Umbridge Rufus Scrimgeour Bellatrix Lestrange Narcissa Malfoy Albus Dumbledore Other Canon Witch/Wizard

A wizard has been murdered. A special investigator is hired to find and apprehend the guilty party.

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Chapters (12)

Chapter 1: The Scene of the Crime

Chapter 2: The Evidence

Chapter 3: The First Interview

Chapter 4: The Second Interview

Chapter 5: Further Developments

Chapter 6: Cherchez la Femme

Chapter 7: The Next Encounter

Chapter 8: Further Investigation

Chapter 9: Sacked

Chapter 10: Cross-Examination

Chapter 11: Habeas Corpus

Chapter 12: Closing Arguments


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10/10

AuroraSinistra

Poor Severus drunk at Lily's grave! I can definitely imagine him going there every year on that night. I enjoyed this and the other chapter you added, and I liked the dialogue between Katherine and Kingsley.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you.  I've always pictured him visiting as often as he can on that date, one way or another, at least in the stories where Snape has no one else those years.  The other chapter wasn't the most interesting in the story, but it was necessary, in my mind, to show how Katherine was kept on at the Ministry even though the regime changed.Thanks again!

9/10

sinbad

Looks like our little investigator is thinking hard and fast.  She's quite interesting, perhaps she will figure things out ans help Severus in some way.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

As she told Lucius, not much gets past her.  She's learned to be wary of the world around her, and so she keeps her eye out for things that might be important.  I'm not sure how much she actually helps Severus except insofar as she warns Kingsley and the Order of the Phoenix to let him alone to do his thing.  We'll see, though.

9/10

jessajohns

The chapter "The Second Interview" makes SO much more sense now!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you!  I don't know why I missed that chapter.  I guess I wanted to get back to Severus that much quicker?  The real chapter six is in the queue!

10/10

sinbad

Well, it was still a good chapter, even if you feel you have egg on your face.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you!  The next chapter is in order, I promise.

10/10

AuroraSinistra

A bounty hunter! I wonder why Katherine let him go for now, whether it is a game for her to play with her prey, or a bigger strategy to learn more information. I am not sure what movie this is in reference to but it seems pretty cool.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

She does catch some heat for not bringing him in right away, but she has good reasons.  I'm glad you like it so far.  Thank you for the review!

8/10

JoKK2

My guess for the movies you based this on is "The Thomas Crown Affair".  Both are excellent movies and if correct will add a wonderful new demension to this story.  I look forward to your next submission.  Thanks, JoAnne

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

House points to you!  I've borrowed a few elements of the movies, admittedly more from the second than the first just because I've seen it more times.  Hopefully I haven't compromised the canon too much.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

Phyllidia

Since this was an older fic I decided to wait til the end to leave a review so here goes...This was such a refreshing change of pace.  I'm not a SS/HG shipper but it's what I've had to read mostly just because there is so much more of that out there than any other it seems. Your story was wonderful.  It was well written, the OC was well done, and I love the name of your Beta (shout out to James Herriot).I enjoyed the peak into the 'ton' of pure-blood society. The chapter on the abuse was handled very well.  The retelling of Tonks and Remus' death left me as damp-eyed as the first time I read of their demise. The description of Severus and Katherine's amourous encounters were very fitting for the style of the story.Having read that you are/were working on a sequel, I will have to go looking now.  Thank you for sharing your words.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Oh, thank you! I love it when an older story gets a review!This story has a special place in my heart as perhaps one of my best, even though the skill in telling the story wasn't quite what I wanted in places. I don't think the canon Death Eaters are anywhere near this glamorous, but it's fun to picture them this way, and copying glamorous movies gave me some inspiration.The sequel is My Favorite Wand Waver.  It's got a slightly different dynamic that I hope is also enjoyable.Thank you, again!

10/10

AuroraSinistra

She's come a long way from her meeker past of a witch who got blackmailed by her muggle father to the bounty hunter she is now, but the instinct for survival will force people to grow out of their shell. That was so sad about Salvatore! I like how her and Snape still have some secrets from each other but want to care for each other regardless. The elixir of life and snitch are great ideas to use too, thanks for the update!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

She always wanted to be an Auror, but her Dad had her fairly caught.  I think it's fair to assume that Uncle Sonny will eventually land on his feet, based upon the fact that canon tells us Kingsley was named interim Minister.Now that I've fastened onto the idea, I like to think that the elixir is what Snape was pouring down Dumbledore's throat in that scene we see in "The Prince's Tale" in DH.Meanwhile, a happy ending would be nice, wouldn't it?

Response from AuroraSinistra (Reviewer)

Your story is very good in that it is able to work these possibilities into the story and still remain canon. A happy ending with Snape ALIVE would be nice! Will be interesting to see if you work into your story the scene of him staring into Harry's/Lily's eyes. Snape's eyes going empty, as if the soul departed, seemed to be a pretty good indicator that he died, but then again a portrait of him never appeared in the Headmaster's office. Though the main argument for that is he left the position before he died, not sure there's anything definite about whether or not someone had to be occupying the position when they died...can't remember how Rowling said about that. I wasn't too impressed that she killed off all the people from the previous generation (Harry's parents, all the Mauraders and Snape) and it got to a point for me in DH where it really was overkill. I would have liked to have seen any of them survive, but Snape wasn't the likely choice since he had to play such a dangerous game as a spy. I look forward to reading how things turn out for him and Katharine!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

I'm so sorry, but I don't cover that moment, here.  I have another story on other archives called "Two Sides Against the Middle" (different OC) that does include that moment, and what I thought might be going through his mind.  He essentially tells Lily that he's done all he can and whatever debt he has to her is now fulfilled.I agree that it's a bit odd and unfortunate that JKR killed so many of the "good guys".  If the most of the people left are the "bad guys" and their families, who's going to raise the next generation?There's only two chapters left of this one, so we'll know how it ends pretty quickly.  ;)

10/10

sinbad

What a sad tale she carries.  These two need a happy ending, and Severus still hasn't told her his real purpose.  He shouldn't go to prison at all although it is nice that she feels she would stop him from confessing.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

No, he shouldn't go to prison at all.  As to the happy ending, well, we'll have to see.

10/10

AuroraSinistra

Glad Katherine is doing her own thing now and loved the broom ride! The villa scene was great too...Snape should have more than Spinner's End given that he has abilities to succeed past his poor upbringing. He wouldn't be getting rich from a teacher's salary so where better than the Sorcerer's Stone. Wish there wasn't a war going on and that him and Katherine could just stay there forever!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

I think Katherine is actually glad to get away from the Ministry at this point.  I'm sure they both wish they could stay on the island forever, but a couple of days will have to suffice.  The war can't last forever at this point, but the end will bring its own problems, of course...Thank you for reviewing!

10/10

sinbad

Her 'working hypothesis' is dead on accurate.  I think she knows it too.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you for the review! There's a lot Katherine doesn't know for sure and may never know, all the while getting more caught up than she should in the case.

0/10

WriterMerrin

How lovely!  I have not been keeping up with this since chapter 2, but I just read all of those chapters, and I love it!  Beautifully crafted story :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you!  I've enjoyed it, myself, enough to start the sequel.

10/10

AuroraSinistra

I liked how you had Katherine follow the muggle news to track some of Potter's movements, which most wizards would have overlooked. I didn't understand Snape's connection to Nicolas Flamel, so maybe I need to brush up on Book 1 again, unless it is something specific to this story that is yet to be discovered.Snape's “I don't want to go back to what I was before I met you” monologue was intense! I'd really like to think he could still honor his memory to Lily and follow through with his promise to Dumbledore while at the same time be able to mull over the possibility of a new start if they are victorious. But no matter what happens can't wait to see where it goes!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you!  I'm so tickled that you are taking such an interest in my story!Snape had to be someone's apprentice in order to become a Potions Master in his own right.  Since I decided to give this Snape fabulous wealth for the purposes of this story, it had to come from somewhere.  The two items add up to Flamel and access to the Philosopher's Stone in my mind.  So he's as much as admitted to having made a fair amount of gold with the PS at this point, now Katherine is curious about whether Severus has made use of the stone's other properties.  There will be more on that in the next chapter.Thanks, again!

Response from AuroraSinistra (Reviewer)

OH I forgot that the Philosopher's Stone could make gold! I had only remembered about the everlasting-life part. And yes I remember now how Snape played a big role in protecting the stone, besides keeping an eye on Quirrell he also created that potions puzzle in the maze the trio went through. Thanks for clarifying!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you, again!  Without saying too much, the Philosopher's Stone makes a great many things possible, even a couple of points of canon.

10/10

AuroraSinistra

Their game continues! I really agreed with the point made about how “A man in the circle of his friends and peers, however, is not going to behave in the same way as he does with students.” - which I think we get a glimpse of another side of Snape (more well-mannered) in the Spinner's End chapter of HBP when he is dealing with Narcissa and Bellatrix...of course he could have been playing them too!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you!  This Snape is a tad OC, as is the entire cast, because I've tweaked them all to behave more like the glamorous characters in a movie from Hollywood's golden age.  However, it's also my firmly held opinion that the professors as we see them through Harry's eyes in the books probably also had private lives in which they were significantly different people.  Growing up around school teachers, I found that to be true.

10/10

sinbad

Very enjoyable.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you!

10/10

sinbad

Daring lady, Severus had better watch his step.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

They both need to watch their step.  Katherine IS daring, but she's used to dealing with a different sort of person.  Once again, thank you very much!

10/10

sinbad

Interesting, but I have no clue what movie this story is based on.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

I'm reluctant to say, since others who may figure it out might read the reviews, but I think someone else said that it's The Thomas Crown Affair.Thanks, again!

10/10

sinbad

Why would Severus hide? 

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

I knew I was a bit too ambiguous in that first chapter... the conversation between Scrimgeour and Shacklebolt takes place a few hours after Dumbledore is killed, so it's the very end of HBP in the canon timeline.  At this point, the Ministry believes Harry's version of what happened and wants to prosecute Snape.Thank you for stopping by to read and review!

10/10

AuroraSinistra

I had fun reading this chapter and loved way it ended too. At first I was surprised at how Snape would be out and about around other wizarding families at an auction/Quidditch game, but I guess by this point the Death Eaters are getting the upper hand (eventually making Snape Hogwarts headmaster).I also first read "Snape flew slowly past the stands until he made out Katherine" as "he made out with Katherine" and I was like what?!?! :) I would bid on his Snitch too.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

LOL!  I probably could have worded that sentence better.  It's my opinion, for the purposes of this story, that the Death Eaters could hang out at that particular event without much fear at all of the Ministry.  Everyone else in the world was at Dumbledore's funeral.Thank you, again!

10/10

AuroraSinistra

Your OFC brings up many good points that the other characters overlooked, such as why Snape didn't kidnap Harry after Snape killed Dumbledore and bring Harry to Voldemort when he clearly had the chance. I also like how you mentioned Snape's background and how we know so little about how a pureblood such as Eileen ended up with a muggle husband. Rowling owes us an explanation, she certainly went into enough detail about Harry and Tom Riddle's childhood. Well done! Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you!  I still don't understand how Eileen ended up with Tobias.  Hmm... Maybe I'll explore that question in another story. 

10/10

LoveFenrir

oooh! really interesting! hopefully the protagonist isn't too perfect, though

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you for the review!  She IS a bit too good to be true in ways, I admit, but it's just a really thick shell she's developed, not unlike a certain canon character we could mention.  We'll get under the shell eventually.

0/10

sunny33

Very nice ending. :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.  :)

0/10

sunny33

It's him.  Tell me, it's him! :O

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Everyone thinks it's him that cast that stunner.  I really messed that up, I think.  LOL, thank you!

0/10

sunny33

So, now she's set him up to survive the snake bite.  Well done! :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

Thank you!  I've really enjoyed going back through this with your eyes tonight.

0/10

sunny33

Sounds like a lovely place. Do you take bookings? :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Tower Affair)

If I took bookings, I'd be the first one on the guest list!  ;)  Thanks!

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