Excellent story. I keep being amazed at the story's a random search produces. Your one on my favorite writers. Ty

I quite enjoyed this take on the challenge.  Well done!

Glad that he was acquitted in the end. I like the way you set it up and brought the story to a head.

Oh, I love this!  Short but not without its twists and turns and a happy ending!

I'm dying here!  Because Ron handing her a stack of pamphlets to read was simply priceless and perfect, and now I see it was your attempt to use that sentence.  It worked!

Okay, and Harry is even a bigger prat, and Hermione has a secret relationship with Severus and....

Ooooo, I love this first person present tense voice.Harry is a prat.::click::

its a good chap specially with the mesmeries in it even if a few errors!!1! i thought there was plagarizing but then i realized i read at ashwinder previously 4 of 5 !

Very interesting & good.

That is terrible, about your arm not the story.  I hope that you are feeling better.Loved this chapter.  I am so glad you did not leave us in suspense.  I can't wait to see how they all move past this time.  There is more, right?B

Wow... This was intense. I feel as though I've just read the missing puzzles to the entire story. Honestly, you kept the final outcome perfectly hidden- I was afraid to hope for the best because the Ministry can be so harsh and unforgiving at times. So, the ending came as a surprise, and it moved me to tears =( The reaction of Severus was also beautiful. Well written, I hope there is more to this!

I've just finished all 6 chapters posted so far and I'm really loving this story. It's another spin on his innocence, which I enjoy reading and researching immensely. There really are so many variations of his guilt or innocence, and you're weaving a very convincing story... In his trinkets, of course! What Rowling can do, like no other, is to make the most blatant acts of treason-- ambiguous! Your attention to character and detail is incredible... 

I hope you had a wonderful holiday.  Thank you for another chapter.  is there a memory hidden in one of the gadgets??

I'm so silly. I cannot resist.Hermione: I started shagging him in my mind way back in fifth year, Harry. I was turned off for a little while after he offed old Dumby, but hell, that bad boy thing really turns me on. He's lucky he took off from the graveyard that first meeting. We'd have "christened" the headmaster's tomb!"

Yay for Ginny!  (The one in the story, too. )  Glad that Harry's wife is listening, and that even Ron is keeping quiet for now.  Too bad Hermione wasn't better prepared for the shagging question.  Very nice that Harry didn't destroy Dumbledore's toys, but once she finds the Pensieve memory, she better make sure Harry doesn't destroy it.   I would've changed "The poison that he drank that night" to "The poison that you, Harry, forced him to drink that night" because Harry keeps ignoring the fact that he himself had part in Albus' death.  Hermione says "I had hoped that I could get that final bit of evidence from you, Harry" - does she mean Harry's Pensieve memory of what happened on the Tower that night?  Albus' offer to Draco, etc.?  Thanks for the new chapter!!

You know that we are going to have to get out in the open the sadistic side that you have in leaving your poor audience hanging.  Evil cliffy does not even begin to cover it.  That not withstanding.  It was a very good chapter.  I am glad that Hermione finally told Harry off about something, even if it does appear to be something as insignificant as Severus' name.  I wonder if Harry is capable of hearing and believing anything good about Severus or if this is just an excersize in futility for Hermione. B

Making mah rounds like a good little beta/ friend/ stalker.Harry: So you two truly have been shagging! Just when I thought you could sink no lower than you longing for Lockhart!Hermione: What in the world...?Harry: You obvious have a thing for professor-type people. Tell me, have you planted any catnip about the castle in hopes of ensnaring the headmistress? Pretended to need flying lessons to get next to Hooch?

I don't know why but I thought this story was 4 chapters long... I was so disappointed LOL (although, I thought it was rather short.) Then, I'm glad to know that there is more to come :) Yeah. I think Harry is just a little kid that needs to grow up (and quickly)

very, very good story. I can't wait to have the end of Hermione's tale to know what will happen to Severus, what will Harry's decision be.

I'm not paying bribes to SW for clues - GInny could always change the chapters without telling SW!  My favorite line here: "Bloody hell, Harry, get over yourself!"  Ooh, I'd love to see that in a movie!  That, and see Harry grovel at Severus' feet.  Hey Ginny, can you work that into the story too?    Thanks for posting!

This is a very good story, but I wonder what she is hoping to get from Harry once she finishes telling her story.  He is the one who ignored all of her information to have Severus arrested in the first place, he is unbelievable bias when it come to Snape.  In some cases for a good reason, and in some cases because Severus was not able and would not treat him as anything special.  --  B

Wow.  I am not sure what he is expecting her to do now.  Just sit around and watch as one of her best friends railroads a man she knows to be innocent into Azkaban.  Boy is more foolish than ever if that is what he thinks he can persuade her to do.  Very enjoyable, but not surprisingly so, since all of your stories are.  --  B

Brilliant start to this challenge! Can't wait for the rest! I think I would have to seriously harm Harrry if I was in Hermione's shoes right now! lol

Yikes!  <I>The Unstoppable Trio will always be friends</I> - I think I'd quit being friends with Harry right about now....  Please tell me there's a happy ending for Severus at the end of this story!! Bonus points for dropping Harry into a pile of Thestral droppings?

Excellent start!  May you have better luck with your betas than I've had with mine (timewise, that is.. they're all brilliant as far as betaing go).  Anyway, where was I?  Oh right, Brilliant start.  Is Harry really going to condemn SNape, or has he just brought him out into the public eye for a great show trial to proove his innocence?  His perplexed eyes are replaced by glittering triumph.makes me think the former...  Looking forward to the rest of this!