Chapter Seven
Chapter 8 of 9
WriterMerrinHermione and her friends find the unicorns again, and the final antidote is administered while her life hangs in the balance.
Reviewednote: There is one blink-and-you'll-miss-it moment that a reader thought warranted a higher rating, but I've decided to leave the rating and add the warning.
~ Chapter Seven ~
Narcissa and Severus spent the afternoon brewing a very powerful Draught of Living Death. The dose they would be giving Hermione would all but kill her, leaving only the barest of functions to prevent her from crossing over.
Lucius studied every variation of magic-binding charm he could find, wanting to be sure he found one that was quickly reversible.
Just before she was to leave, Hermione knocked on the door to the classroom, and Severus met her. He held her tightly, wishing he were well enough to venture out of the castle and feeling certain that she wasn't. After kissing her, he held her gaze and opened his whole heart to her with a look. "For the unicorns, it will help. If they ask why they should spare your life, tell them, know without a shadow of doubt, that there is someone who loves you. It is only the glimmer of what it will someday be, but I do love you."
"I will remember. I love you, too."
Hermione, flanked by Ron, Harry, Ginny, Neville, and Luna, prepared to go into the forest to ask the unicorns for a freely given offering of blood. Professor Grubbly-Plank had brought a vessel used only for unicorn blood and shown Ginny and Luna how to seal it so it would be safe no matter what happened to it.
Lucius left his studying to accompany the young adults to the edge of the forest. He would wait on the outside and watch for signs of trouble. They took four broomsticks with them for a fast getaway in case of trouble.
They walked through the forest, the row of young men following the row of young women. Hermione was the only one who could approach the unicorns, the only one not carrying a wand, and the one that had the deepest need. As before, they followed the stream. Luna was the first to see the unicorns. This time the two foals were accompanied by a female and a large male. She gestured for the boys to fall back. They were only to guard against centaurs now. Luna and Ginny stayed within sight, but did not cross the stream to the other side. Depending on the boots Narcissa had given her to keep her feet warm and dry, she slowly approached and did not attempt to touch. Kneeling on the ground before the mother, she pleaded with her words, eyes and heart.
"Please, an evil has touched me, and only an offering of your blood will preserve my life."
Meeting the male's gaze, she knew he was searching her very soul and finding her unworthy.
"Please, there is someone who loves me. If you will not for me, then for my friends who came with me into the forest to protect me, then for the man who has almost died and now needs me? He has sacrificed much for the protection of the young."
Tears flowed down Hermione's cheeks, and she was startled to feel a tiny tongue lick the tears away. Looking up at the foal, she felt that she had already been blessed. Even if she didn't live to solve the mysteries of the world, she had been touched by something pure and sacred.
She watched as the adults faced each other, knowing that the horseish nuzzling belied deep communion between the two magical creatures. In a flash of understanding, she saw that, though the unicorns were thought of by all as the creatures most closely associated with virgins, they knew ardor in their hearts--that the two golden foals had not come from some base instinct, but they were pure creatures that came from the purest passion.
Now, their mother stands, head bowed.
Now, their father makes a tiny, precise cut with his horn.
Now, the supplicant raises the vessel made to hold the shimmering essence that can save one from the very brink of death.
When the precise amount had been given, Hermione closed the lid and watched, still mesmerized, as the male licked the cut until the blood stopped and the wound healed. This creature had known pain for the sake of Hermione's life, but she would not carry a scar.
"Thank you," Hermione said as the unicorns nodded to her and disappeared into the forest.
Ginny splashed across the stream to take the vessel and seal it. Handing it to Luna, she helped Hermione back. When they reached a clearing, Ginny helped Hermione onto Ron's broomstick. Luna riding with Neville, the adults newly minted by war left the forest with their prize and a very tired Hermione, who had bathed in elemental magic.
When she woke up... when she opened her eyes, she realized that she wasn't awake. She was surrounded by silvery mist. She wasn't hot or cold. Her feet didn't feel wet, in fact she didn't feel anything.
"What happened?" she cried out, but no one was there to answer.
She began to panic. They hadn't let her say goodbye to anyone. She wasn't ready. She hoped someone would inquire after her parents. She didn't know where she was. She wasn't supposed to be alone.
"Severus! Severuuuuuus!" She fell to her knees in the mist, sobbing and crying out. He said he loved her. He had said she wouldn't be alone. "Severus, how will you find me?" she asked the mist.
She thought she heard voices. Standing up, she tried to walk toward them, but she was disoriented. The voices seemed to be coming from everywhere and nowhere. She wandered until she stumbled. Stumbled over nothing, over air, over mist?
"How will I find you?"
"There is no need, my love." Strong arms lifted her to her feet.
"Severus?" Those very arms lifted her off her feet and held her to his chest, to his heart.
"Yes. Did you doubt?"
He was carrying her through the mist, but she wasn't afraid anymore. He knew from whence the voices came, and he was taking her there.
"I was afraid. What happened?"
"Spontaneous magic. You didn't believe me, but your outpouring of love and gratitude manifested itself, and that was the last bit of magic you could handle. We'd planned so carefully to bring you to the point of death, but you always think you can do everything better."
"The antidote?"
"The antidote was for the Living Death. We didn't need that either. The unicorn's sacrifice caused your last outpouring of magic, and it is all Narcissa will need to bring you back at the right moment."
"What's happening?"
"I'm taking you to the room. This is what you did for me, though you did not know it. I followed your voice, and those of my other friends, back to my body. But you do not have as much time as I did, so I've come for you."
"How?"
"Dreamer's Sleep. Look, that's us."
She turned her head to see the bedroom emerge from the mist. There was Severus, looking peaceful in sleep. There was herself looking... dead. She shivered.
"It will be alright. We can hear them if you listen. Listen to Narcissa."
Hermione strained to hear through the mist. "Her aura is reaching for him."
"Is that what I'm supposed to be doing?"
"Yes. It would not be wise to release your aura into the ether for fear it would never find it's way back. You need to reach for me with your aura."
"I can't see it. How can I do that?"
"See with your heart, my Hermione. Reach for me with your heart."
"How? I don't know what to do!"
Suddenly, Severus plunged them down until they were just hovering over his body. He positioned himself above his sleep-stilled form and then draped her over himself. "If you need a physical representation, then hold onto me here. Hold onto me with every fiber of your being until you don't know where you end and I begin."
Hermione clutched at him with her hands and then rearranged her hold until she was embracing him as tightly as she could.
"Now your legs, love. You can do it."
She wrapped her legs around his waist, locking her ankles together behind him.
A disembodied voice cut through the haze."It's working. He must have found her. She's bridging the gap."
"Closer, love. You must get closer. Lift your face to mine."
She instinctively obeyed, and he met her mouth in a searching, devouring kiss. He would have stolen her breath had there been any to steal. He caressed her in places his real hands had not yet dared, but he needed to incite her desire. She gasped and cried out and kissed harder. As though suddenly frustrated with his lack of leverage, he rolled her over in mid air and took control. Clothes meant as little to them as cold or gravity or the hard ground. Though removed from their physical bodies, they were becoming one. Hermione felt him grinding against her, and suddenly he occupied all of her senses.
She had never seen her aura or Severus', but she suddenly found herself engulfed in that peridot glow that someone had once described to her and knew that their auras had fused.
She was suddenly very tired, as though they had physically joined. She felt the illusion of gravity asserting itself, but suddenly, he flipped them again, and she was again draped as though boneless over his body.
"You need to hold on a little longer. Your aura has anchored itself; now Lucius is binding your magic."
"I'm tired, Severus. I want to go back."
"You can't. Not yet. Stay with me. Focus on me." He shifted them until she was propped in his lap. "Look, you're so interested in synergy. Watch Lucius and Narcissa."
"Who?"
"Hermione, look. That is synergy, the magic that is produced by two people who have loved each other for decades."
"Some day we'll have that."
"I will need nothing more out of life when we do, my love." He held her to himself, and she began to relax. "No! Not yet. Stay awake. Stay with me. Watch."
Hermione pried her eyes open and was in awe. From her vantage point, she saw two fair heads bent over her body: arms and wands and voices in perfect unison. The power blew through their unbound hair, giving them an even more ethereal appearance. They reminded her of the two unicorns, two magical creatures living in one accord.
"Will we have children, Severus?"
"If you want them, we will."
"I will. I've been thinking I wanted to become an Unspeakable--to study love and synergy. I don't think I would really understand it until I've experienced it for myself."
"Well, do you think we can spend some time experiencing love and synergy before we start experiencing parenthood?"
"Absolutely. We're still young. We've got plenty of time." She leaned her head up for a soft kiss. Moments later, he took control of the kiss. She sighed in deep satisfaction, then felt a shiver. "What was that?"
"That was the curse. I didn't want you to see it."
"So they did it? It's gone?"
"It certainly appears to be that way."
"Now what?"
"Now they have to restore your magic."
With elegant sweeps and chanted words, Hermione's magic was restored to her body. It was strange to watch Lucius prop her up and Narcissa pour the unicorn blood down her throat, but she felt warmer somehow when they were done.
"And now..." Severus manipulated the ether and stood her in the air. Bending for the lightest of kisses, he said, "You may return to your lovely body and wake up."
"I don't want to leave you yet."
"I'm right there."
Hermione whispered into Narcissa's ear, "Put me back with Severus." She watched with satisfaction as Lucius picked her up and placed her at Severus' side. Squeezing his hand, she said, "Now I'm ready to go back."
Floating through the green and gold haze, she retook control of her body just as Severus regained control of his.
Hermione took gasping breaths as she reacquainted herself with the practice, then reached for Severus and fell contentedly asleep, knowing she was safe in his arms and secure in his love.
A/N: Tiny epilogue and many thanks to follow shortly.
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Absolutely squeeee worthy!
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Mmmmm dream sequence is lovely!
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Merrrin I really enjoyed this . I haven't read to many fics lately as I've even writing so much. It was a wonderful few hours . Thanks for sharing this.
Beautiful chapter! Really some wonderful descriptions to make it all so picturesque. I like that Narcisa and Licius are part of this and are so much for Severus.
Loving their times curled up in Severus' bed. Wonderful warm interactions.
Really a wonderful story. The the aurora thing. It's good that Severus woke remembering the dreams. I love it when he's. It so acidic. Sorry I'm. It getting each. Chapter reviewed I'm to excited to move on I hate that it's ending soon. I had to force myself to back up and leave the review lol
Very nice I am really enjoying this story I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm happy to find a story I don't remember reading before :)
Great story.
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It was a lovely story. Thank you.
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Thank you so much for brightening my day with a review.
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Thank you so much for brightening my day with a review.
Lovely story ! Thank you for sharing !
This is a really lovely story. I especially enjoyed the tone of it -- I wish I could explain it better than that, but I'm not sure how to describe it. Thank you!
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Thank you! I'm more proud of this story than anything else I've ever written, so it always thrills me to share it with a new friend.
haha. i love this story.
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Thanks! Glad Fred and George love it!
Yes, I'm a fan of Bambu's "Saving a Death Eater" too. Your story is rich in beautiful imagery, "She handed Hermione a scrap of parchment. “This mushroom is best if you can get it from a Fairy Ring. You’ll find the best moss growing on a willow. Remove it right with the bark. And, of course, the unicorn hair.” Also, the part about the same stream feeding the willow and the unicorns was beautiful. Why do I feel like Ron just lied through his teeth about his experience with Lavender? Maybe he told the truth but I really suspect he didn't. A man that would leave when times are hard wouldn't have any trouble lying if it served his purpose.Also, I really like the friendship spring up between Narcissa and Hermione. She's always had trouble making friends and Narcissa will accept her as she is even if it is for an ulterior motive. I agree with her motivation. ;D
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Antidotes)
Thanks! What became this story was conceived in my mind the moment I read Bambu's story. The unicorns became a little motif that I could not escape from, and embracing them gave me some of my favorite moments as well in this chapter and the last. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the imagery; I'll carry that positive feeling with me all day.I enjoyed writing about Hermione and Narcissa. I felt that both women had spent a harrowing year trying to keep the men they loved in different ways safe. With that accomplished, they now had a common goal in Severus, and I think that kind of compassion can bring even two very different people together.
I like how you've made Madam Pomfrey a Slytherin Head Girl. It's nice to see someone I might not think of as Slytherin. It's also nice to see Professor Snape get the caring attention of friends/family. He needs it.
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Thanks. It is a moment that surprises so many people, and it surprised me, too. It seems that sometimes Pomfrey and Severus are two misunderstood characters. I love to see him being cared for.
I've always been bothered by the Trio's lack of care toward their professor in this scene. Even though they thought he was a DE, I was disappointed by what happened. I'm glad you'll be fixing that "Little" problem.
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Antidotes)
Thanks! The evening I read the book, I couldn't even sleep until I'd written the drabble, "Prepared?" because I couldn't just leave it with Hermione not rescuing her prince. Of course, it didn't take me very long to want to write a longer story.
WriterMerrin, this is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. I'll go back shortly and review each chapter, but I was greedy about reading each chapter. I'm not surprised so many of us made this a favorite story, it's truly beautiful.
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Thank you again for all of the thoughtful reviews. You've made this rainy day a sunny one for me.
You've written a wonderful story and your exchange recipient is a lucky fangirl. There are many things I've enjoyed about the story but this one line is so powerful: “Oh, Hermione.” His voice was tinged with awe. “If we come to love each other some day, death itself would not be able to stop it.”It gave me chills to read it. I'm in awe, I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is going onto my favorites list. Thanks for the wonderful story.
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Thank you so much. I feel that it is a key moment in the story, so I'm especially glad that it resonated with you.
It wasn’t in the study of essays, letters, or sonnets that she would gain insight into that unutterable magic. It was the way she knew when to argue and when to listen. It was kissing him even though he had morning breath. It was accepting his friends and standing by him even when the world didn’t know what to do with him.
Lovedthat!
When the Prophet had announced that he was alive, her friends had figured out that her speech to the unicorns had referred to him. Ron had apparently turned uncomplimentary shades of red and green.LOL-that's more like it!
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Thanks so much! It's always awesome to know which lines in a story work, and I wanted very much for Severus to sum up the ways he knew she truly loved him.
Surprised Ron didnt blow a gasket when Hermione came to her senses and dumped the prat.
I like - love - the magic that Narcissa explains.
I don't understand why Lucius is behaving like the war didnt happen and that nobody is treating him with mistrust.
Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Antidotes)
Well, the way I see it, he was becoming less and less enchanted by Hermione as the days went on, so he didn't feel it was as big a loss as he would have were it not for the circumstances.As for Lucius, I imagine that outside of the protection of the Dungeons, he is still rather universally mistrusted. Hermione is too concerned with Severus and under his influence to worry about it... Well, the story was written in answer to a prompt, and the giftee wanted Lucius to be the hero of the story, so he is.Glad you like the Narcissa stuff.
That was incredibly beautiful. A sincere and moving love story on the purest level. When she was in the mist, I thought she had died and Severus' lifetime had came and went when he found her. It definately turned on the waterworks!
This is really good! Im so glad I 'narrowed' my search options, which multiplied them tenfold else I wouldn't have come across this. And Bambu's story 'Saving a Death Eater is next on the list so, Double Thank you.
Well, I was truly aggravated with JKR for the lack of a real epilogue to the aftermath. I could see her point, in a way. Thank you for providing something close to what was left out. This has an exciting start!
Yay, WriterMerrin! Fabulous story with a lovely ending. We all know SS and HG belong together, but to 'see' the metaphysical (?) manifestation of the aura made your story special. And of course the love story aspect was beautiful, too. They save each other. Aww. Well done. Take a bow!
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Thank you so much. You made my day twice!
That was very beautiful, moving to a satisfying end. You have a vivid imagination and your writing easily translates that. Can't wait to read the epilogue.
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Thank you very much. The process of writing this story was so amazing, and I'm thrilled that you felt it.
Very nice, I really likes the 'couple' aspect. Two unicorns working together, The Malfoy's as well as Severus and Hermione. Nice underscore to the theme of 'Love being the most powerful magic of all.'.
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Thanks so much! You know I'm just a romantic. I'm so glad that you picked up on all of that.