Harry's very tender and concerned about Hermione's pleasure and well-being. He surely will make a fantastic lover with practice.

That was very nicely written. I guess you give good hints to first-timers.

What a sweet story!  I loved their nervousness and the tenderness that Harry took with Hermione.  Lovely.

Well done, imo.   I've always been a Hermione/Harry fan and thought that they should wind up together.   An enjoyable "first time" read.   -- Mallory