My favorite line is Three syllables contain my world. This story feels like poetry to me. well done

It's an interesting voice: Soft and compelling. To me, this was very different from most of the other prose or poetry I've seen here. I was disappointed to see you haven't posted anything else. I hope you will; I think you have a great deal of talent.

What a lovely story. I like the prose here. Everything seems to flow and shift seamlessly. Great.

terrific job! what an elegant writing style. this is a fantastic, bittersweet story.

"The absurdity of a war fought by children and academics."A telling comment on Rowling's universe.