I love this story so far, for a few reasons:
A. It's beautiful, I love the idea of Snape being a secret bard since the age of 15, and Hermione trying to rely on a sense of creativity, rather than just book learning (as SS wanted her to do at school)
B. Because I know the St David's area fairly well, and the descriptions are accurate and wonderful! It's an emotional place for me, and holds lots of happy memories and growing-up moments and love. I think you're descriptions of the landscape, alongside the story, are doing it justice. Also, I get to say "I've been there!!" To myself, which is fun!
C. I know nothing technical about music, but I am having no trouble in imagining how it's manifesting itself and running through the fabric of the narrative.

oohh! it's lovely. It such an original plotline! I can't wait to read more, especially Severus' reaction. The setting that you've chosen for the story is lovely, and i like how you have them sing for the animals. ’m not ready to leave…not by a long shot.zI’m not ready to leave…not by a long shot.

Love it! Pity it was not a little bit longer, I wanted to know what Sevie would think after their passionate night *sigh* hehehe, She is so lucky!

I like it.  It's unusual, interesting, and convincing.  I like that you made Hermione an alto.  (just for the record, I am a soprano).  I like the candor of hermione's voice. 

This was really nicely done.  Couldn't stop after just one chapter to review :) The imagery was great.  Kinda makes me wish I was there with them.  They had a nice dynamic.  It would be unrealistic in this situation for them to have been all warm and fuzzy or constantly at each other's throats.  This worked very well for me. I liked how she was so amazed at the influence he had on the people in the pubs, only to find out it was a bit of magic on board.  On top of his natural talent, of course. I always think that when someone is really passionate about something that they do with their hands, there is this kind of graceful beauty in watching them work.  Her relating his treatment of his guitar to him touching a woman I thought was dead on. When I got to the end of the bedroom scene, and realized that I was almost out of story, I felt like the end was going to be really rushed.  However, upon reading the last section, it wrapped things up nicely, telling us where things go from here, but also leaving some to the imagination.  Thanks for sharing!

Oh well. You have me hooked already. Wonderful imagery and fabulous interaction between them The thought of Snape being musical make my heart swell! *click bookmark* *click favourite*

absolutely brilliant!   What a great job with the story line and cxharacterization - I am learning so much!! 

So excited to see you writing a new story.  Your subject matter tying them together is original.  Music is so subjective and passionate.  I wonder where you will take them?  Can't wait to read more.

What an interesting idea for a story!  I'll be looking forward to more.

Great fic, truly original. I am looking forward to this, and am enjoying the depth of musicianship involved.  Are you a music major past or present, by any chance?

Intriguing...very intriguing indeed.  I look forward to reading further!

This was amazingling different, I loved the olde-worlde mixed with the more modern.

I am very sad to have found this story marked as complete. There's so much here! It would be lovely to see where these two go.  Really one of the best stories I've read in awhile.