Coveted Persecution
Battle of Lissa85 Reviews | 6.61/10 (85 Ratings, 0 Likes, 64 Favorites )
*EPILOGUE ADDED* "A bitter Snape, irreparably damaged by his encounter with Nagini but still very much alive, sets in motion a plan to unbalance the lives of those who left him for dead."
DH compliant but very EWE. Darkfic.
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About Battle of Lissa
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Battle of Lissa
Member Since 2007 | 12 Stories | Favorited by 141 | 65 Reviews Written | 765 Review Responses
Student at California State University of Los Angeles. Currently studying Law and Society Sociology and Criminology while hovering in graduation limbo.
I enjoy writing simple poetry about love, life, and betrayal; either about myself or those closest to me.
Notice! December 2, 2010:
This site is amazing. The numerous reviews and reads I have received here has been beyond humbling. However as I have gotten older, RL has taken main priority to reading and writing fanfic. Any tiny fraction of personal time I am able to indulge myself has been spent in the fandom, but I must admit it had been dwindling more and more. I will NEVER abandon anything I have begun, and attempt to finish my WIPs every day. However, like many authors, I have made the mistake of submitting my work to more archives than I am capable of maintaining with the care that is due them. If I am able and time willing, I might continue to update my fics here, but my main priority lies elsewhere. MODERATED ARCHIVES ARE A BLESSING AND NECESSARY FOR QUALITY FIC. I stand by that. Unfortunately submitting my fics to various moderated archives means more time necessary to edit the various mistakes each individual archives will find in my work. My fics will continue to be updated at Ashwinder and Potter Place Archives, anywhere else will have to take a back seat. This is my problem and I take full responsibility. Thank you for reading, reccing, voting, and reviewing my fics on The Petulant Poetess!
Reviews for Coveted Persecution
I hadn't anticipated such an ending. I think I rather expected it to end with the death of one of the two than with sex. The sex somehow felt not right. As if it didn't belong into this story.Still, a brilliant story, even if the end wasn't to my liking.
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Coveted Persecution)
Much more does needs to be explained. This was a gift and I cut it off here to give neither a happy or unhappy ending. Thank you for the read and review!
Yikes! That's horror at its finest!Thankfully the next chapter is already posted.
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Coveted Persecution)
Thank you!
I loved the story, however the ending felt incomplete. What happens later? Does Severus say goodbye? Does a relationship bloom from this or is this final act between them the end? Will you tie up loose ends with an epilogue?
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Coveted Persecution)
Many question do need to be answered! And they will be, eventually. Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for the read and review!
I knew it all along. She's not insane, he's just that devious! Hehe I wonder when she'll realize how much she loves her ideal of him before it's too late.Bwahaahaahaa... I like your vengeful Snape too much for comfort. Even when he's being a right Bastard, he's just too awesome. I can't NOT cheer for him.
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Coveted Persecution)
Thank you!!!
umm... squee????Please, oh please... sequel? Or epilogue? Totally hot, by the way.
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Coveted Persecution)
Thank you! I'll add something else in the near future. Thank you for the read and review!
In honor of Michael Jackson... "Never can say goodbye...."Those lyrics just came to mind. Hope your sequal can make use of them.This was heart pounding. Very well written. Thanks for posting it.
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Coveted Persecution)
Happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for the read and review!
I did enjoy the story quite a bit, but I found the ending a bit abrupt. I'm guessing that is why there is a follow up?
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Coveted Persecution)
Yup, there is. I was on a time schedule to have this done for the exchange otherwise it might have been longer. THank you for the read and review!
It says story is complete but the last chapter is missing.I hope the final chapter can be posted I'm really intrigued as to how it will end.Will his appearance make her a roommate for the Longbottoms?The marriage to Weasley will definitely not happen.Please say you have the final chapter elsewhere.I found this story on aff with 3 chapters decided to check here.Then went to owl hoping the story was posted there with the final chapter. No such luck.Thank you for the story.
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Coveted Persecution)
The final chapter will be posted! It's in queue now. Thank you for the read and review!
NOW I LL NEVER KNOW GOOD PLOT THO.
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Coveted Persecution)
There is still one chapter left. It will be up in a day or two. Thanks for the review.
She's gonna wind up in St. Mungo's for real!
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Coveted Persecution)
Next chapter in queue. Will be up shortly! Thank you for the read and review!